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Worst Fanfictions Ever (New Forum)

It kinda reminds me of that one guy from The Good Place whose entire existence revolves around archiving every new human action/activity and deciding if its a fetish.

He actually asked if he could be EE iirc (after being in job since the dawn of humanity).
 
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Not as bad as most fanfics, but this is just one that was the result of the Author doing a fanfic on a story he clearly doesn’t understand much of.

First of all there are some blatant inaccuracies from the beginning, people can’t live on the planets surface in this setting, there are only small colonies and most are underground. Secondly this fic completely misunderstands why characters made certain actions in the game. For example, in this fic two characters attempted to protect millions of innocent people because they were under orders. In the original game, they purposely committed treason TO protect innocent lives even though they knew they would die by doing that.

Second, this fics dialogue.....Ugggggggghhhhhhhhhhh.....

It just screams Edgy, and not the “death is beautiful” or rape fics edgy. It’s the type of Edgy that tries to be cool, I mean look at the ******* title for god sakes. This stretches to many of the names of the other Mechs and the people who pilot them. The dumbest thing is that this Fic purposely changes the dialogue in the original game with them still being the same lines in game but with words changed around, and they have the subtlety of a bat to the nuts.

The romance between these two characters is terrible, and I banged my head a couple times reading the dialogue.

The worst part is that this fic was meant to be more of a character driven story, which sounds great, but the characters here aren’t given anything to work on.

For the biggest example. The MC of Armored Core For Answer (Which this story is based of off) is a Silent Protagonist. No voice, no face, and no dialogue options, yet the game managed to make him/her have actual intrigue and depth, which was impressive all things considered.

Taking that depth and giving it a character would have been great! But this story makes the MC a ******* self insert with a super hot Mecha Pilot GF and everyone likes him.

YOUR MC LESS DEPTH THEN HIS SILENT FACELESS COUNTERPART HOW THE **** IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?!
 
Schnee_One said:

Not as bad as most fanfics, but this is just one that was the result of the Author doing a fanfic on a story he clearly doesn’t understand much of.

First of all there are some blatant inaccuracies from the beginning, people can’t live on the planets surface in this setting, there are only small colonies and most are underground. Secondly this fic completely misunderstands why characters made certain actions in the game. For example, in this fic two characters attempted to protect millions of innocent people because they were under orders. In the original game, they purposely committed treason TO protect innocent lives even though they knew they would die by doing that.

Second, this fics dialogue.....Ugggggggghhhhhhhhhhh.....

It just screams Edgy, and not the “death is beautiful” or rape fics edgy. It’s the type of Edgy that tries to be cool, I mean look at the ******* title for god sakes. This stretches to many of the names of the other Mechs and the people who pilot them. The dumbest thing is that this Fic purposely changes the dialogue in the original game with them still being the same lines in game but with words changed around, and they have the subtlety of a bat to the nuts.

The romance between these two characters is terrible, and I banged my head a couple times reading the dialogue.

The worst part is that this fic was meant to be more of a character driven story, which sounds great, but the characters here aren’t given anything to work on.

For the biggest example. The MC of Armored Core For Answer (Which this story is based of off) is a Silent Protagonist. No voice, no face, and no dialogue options, yet the game managed to make him/her have actual intrigue and depth, which was impressive all things considered.

Taking that depth and giving it a character would have been great! But this story makes the MC a ******* self insert with a super hot Mecha Pilot GF and everyone likes him.

YOUR MC LESS DEPTH THEN HIS SILENT FACELESS COUNTERPART HOW THE **** IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?!
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The logic of how self inserts screw over the use of silent protagonists.
 
Schnee_One said:

Not as bad as most fanfics, but this is just one that was the result of the Author doing a fanfic on a story he clearly doesn’t understand much of.

First of all there are some blatant inaccuracies from the beginning, people can’t live on the planets surface in this setting, there are only small colonies and most are underground. Secondly this fic completely misunderstands why characters made certain actions in the game. For example, in this fic two characters attempted to protect millions of innocent people because they were under orders. In the original game, they purposely committed treason TO protect innocent lives even though they knew they would die by doing that.

Second, this fics dialogue.....Ugggggggghhhhhhhhhhh.....

It just screams Edgy, and not the “death is beautiful” or rape fics edgy. It’s the type of Edgy that tries to be cool, I mean look at the ******* title for god sakes. This stretches to many of the names of the other Mechs and the people who pilot them. The dumbest thing is that this Fic purposely changes the dialogue in the original game with them still being the same lines in game but with words changed around, and they have the subtlety of a bat to the nuts.

The romance between these two characters is terrible, and I banged my head a couple times reading the dialogue.

The worst part is that this fic was meant to be more of a character driven story, which sounds great, but the characters here aren’t given anything to work on.

For the biggest example. The MC of Armored Core For Answer (Which this story is based of off) is a Silent Protagonist. No voice, no face, and no dialogue options, yet the game managed to make him/her have actual intrigue and depth, which was impressive all things considered.

Taking that depth and giving it a character would have been great! But this story makes the MC a ******* self insert with a super hot Mecha Pilot GF and everyone likes him.

YOUR MC LESS DEPTH THEN HIS SILENT FACELESS COUNTERPART HOW THE **** IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?!
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Bruh....
 
Guys i must ask as a recent fan of fate series, why is Fate kaleid prisma a thing? Not only it is the shittiest entry into the nasuverse IMO (The reason i hate prisma illya is the same reason people hate kale and caulifia btw- the main characters steamrolling through the powers that shirou fought tooth and nail to get. Seriously, screw prisma illya. ), but there is yuri between pre teens like illya and kuro.
Shouldn't it be banned?
 
Ultra_instinct_issei said:
Guys i must ask as a recent fan of fate series, why is Fate kaleid prisma a thing? Not only it is the shittiest entry into the nasuverse IMO (The reason i hate prisma illya is the same reason people hate kale and caulifia btw- the main characters steamrolling through the powers that shirou fought tooth and nail to get. Seriously, screw prisma illya. ), but there is yuri between pre teens like illya and kuro.
Shouldn't it be banned?
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Like, banned here? Or in general?
 
That would imply people actually crack down on loli hentai and the like.
 
Yeah, that's legal to make man, as offensive as it is.

Seriously, ******* interspecies reviewers is a thing, why would that be?
 
I think I said this on the old forum threads but Rose Quartz x Freddy Fazbear.
 
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