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YesSmurf has a story?
Smurf has a story?
He writes a story called Ramia-Yana. It has wonderful art, nobody can deny that, but the story is very confusing and quite meh in all honesty.Smurf has a story?
This summarises it for me honestly.That's not really what they're arguing. The main issues I've seen is mostly just
I've never really seen anyone complain about Tornado being slightly nicer or Garou murdering people, the issue is that they tried to keep the twist from the WebComic but weren't subtle about it.
- Extreme amounts of bloat or redundant material (Sage Centipede and Melted FU for example)
- The manga elbow dropping the reader with statements that Garou's actually a good person
- The mind control and time travel aspect just generally ruining stakes since almost no story does them well
- Multiple extreme redraws that change the plot heavily and result in even more redraws
Stories are usually the hardest part. Even if you plan it out you tend to just be your own worst enemy. I say that as a DM, who is indeed their own worst enemy by trying to plan things out in advance.but the story is very confusing and quite meh in all honesty.
Yeah, I don't really know what TGS is doing though. It's like, incredibly hard to follow so far.Story has TGS' favorite character design, swole busty warrior woman
Stories are usually the hardest part. Even if you plan it out you tend to just be your own worst enemy.
Yeah. The woman finds some hot dude and they have sex.. Like seriously, there was a sex scene on the second chapter or something?
I agree to an extent. TGS, like idk Boichi, is a very horny illustrator and it kind of delves into that aspect a bit to much.It feels like TGS is writing this purely for himself, rather than for any audience.
well, there is nothing wrong with that, I am a writer as well lol, I write for myselfIt feels like TGS is writing this purely for himself, rather than for any audience. Lol.
Last time we went full speed with revisions, we ended up having a feat on the profiles that immediately got redrawn, so-hmm, users seem pretty apprehensive about updating profiles untill few months/end of arc transpire after feats take place, thoughI suppose it's better to be safe than sorry
Yeah, there's nothing wrong with it. Writing for yourself makes it more enjoyable, just pointing out that it really does feel like a story built around TGS' own desires. As in, you can REALLY tell just by reading it.well, there is nothing wrong with that, I am a writer as well lol, I write for myself
...Um, are you okay?good bye every one,i may not come back tomorrow,remember me
I introduced a very explicit gay s3x in one of the first chapters as wellI don't mind all the sex stuff that much, just wish it wasn't so in-your-face. Like c'mon, the second chapter? With a random guy the audience is just introduced to?
Lol what!I introduced a very explicit gay s3x in one of the first chapters as well
I actually have no idea of what im writting, it's just happening and whatever happens its fine, I write for fun lolAre you writing a yaoi or something? Haha.
BasedI introduced a very explicit gay s3x in one of the first chapters as well
very bipolar personalities bern, u be writing yaoi stuff but then want makima to step on u. 2 totally different sides. i respect it.I actually have no idea of what im writting, it's just happening and whatever happens its fine, I write for fun lol
Wait until Magmag figures out what Bisexual means.very bipolar personalities bern, u be writing yaoi stuff but then want makima to step on u. 2 totally different sides. i respect it.
nah that aint bisexualism(idk if thats even proper english), thats something else, yaoi and femdom, that aint bisexual stuff, thats bi-something else.Wait until Magmag figures out what Bisexual means.
yes yes, simply move on pepsi, nothing to be seen here.I wont question whats going on here
As a professional bi, I can confirm that bisexuality does indeed work like that.nah that aint bisexualism(idk if thats even proper english), thats something else, yaoi and femdom, that aint bisexual stuff, thats bi-something else.
yes yes, simply move on pepsi, nothing to be seen here.
As a professional bi, I can confirm that bisexuality does indeed work like that.
Thursday:Probably going to post-pone the CRT since it seems Murata is fixing things about 168.
Let's see if i'm rightI have a feeling that choosing to wait until the arc is properly over is gonna end up saving us from a headache of some kind
I apologize Dr. Professional, I didn’t know u were chill like thatAs a professional bi, I can confirm that bisexuality does indeed work like that.
There's like, a good chunk of ways to end it without time travel as long as you don't make it so anyone is dead, and is just ****** up from radiation poisoning. I even spitballed some ideas earlierhopefully it is a redraw in the level of cosmic Garou. I did not like the epilogue of the fight, and I hate the fact that everyone is dead. Time travel was a shitty cop-out. Everything else about the chapter was great except that.
I have no doubt the OPM would have better tech than irl, or heroes who could make up for it with their own esoteric abilities. Hell, it wouldn't be a stretch to say the HA would have someone on hand to handle potential radiation disastersGenos could be fixed by Kusano-ex machina or something, but that'd be just another plot device, though whether it'd be better or worse than time travel is up to interpretation and actual execution. Radiation poisoning could be relieved by people like Bofoi building hyper advanced radiation therapy stuff, with perhaps some random hero who specializes in toxic waste cleanup who can absorb radiation or something also helping. There's other ways to do it, it just depends on if its done well
Pretty much. The world has post-human/trans-humans in them, if they are capable of that, them not having the technology to straight up cure cancer or get rid of radiation poisoning is very unbelievable.There's like, a good chunk of ways to end it without time travel as long as you don't make it so anyone is dead, and is just ****** up from radiation poisoning. I even spitballed some ideas earlier
I have no doubt the OPM would have better tech than irl, or heroes who could make up for it with their own esoteric abilities. Hell, it wouldn't be a stretch to say the HA would have someone on hand to handle potential radiation disasters
I mean, webcomic Tats is ugly, much shorter, and the WC upskirt makes it look like a diaper unironically. Idk if I'd call it fanservice.Tatsu gets every hax ability in the wikia and Saitama resists all of them.
Also, there's 3 times as much fanservice.
MoneyAlso i don't see the appeal of MCU Tv
Yeah like i said, with the amount of weird monsters with wild abilities, with some being personifications, there's absolutely zero way they don't have at least one hero who is specialized in minimizing or eliminating radiation in areas/things, whether by technology or esoteric powersPretty much. The world has post-human/trans-humans in them, if they are capable of that, them not having the technology to straight up cure cancer or get rid of radiation poisoning is very unbelievable.
That shit was wildReminds me when Seth said you can scale Aang to be 1-A with Buddhist Dualism.
As a professional bi, I can confirm that bisexuality does indeed work like that.