Problems with the design of the text in the profile (Lack of experience and knowledge of English). Atomic Heart.

[Cyber_VERGIL]

At the moment I'm working on the profile of Major P-3 from the game "Atomic Heart". Initially, I counted on the fact that it would have three keys, and the detailed description would have only the last key. However, it turned out that he has 5 keys, and each of them has a detailed description.

I have no experience in creating profiles. I don't like Nechaev's picture, because of how empty everything to the left of it looks, and the text that I wrote may sound very bad and drawn out. My knowledge of English is far from perfect.

Can anyone please help with AP of Nechaev? I need to describe all the arguments as beautifully and clearly as possible. In addition, I would like to know how correctly I set the AP for him based on the rules of the wiki. In the past, Ogurtsov promised to help me with these, but the last time he was online was in May.

 

[Mr. Bambu]

Are you a native Russian speaker?

 

[Cyber_VERGIL]

Are you a native Russian speaker?

Yes, english my second lang

 

[Mr. Bambu]

Could you write out what your summary is in Russian? I've asked a friend to assist with translating it to English properly. Try to keep it short and concise, please.

 

[Cyber_VERGIL]

Could you write out what your summary in Russian? I've asked a friend to assist with translating it to English properly. Try to keep it short and concise, please.

Wow. Okay, thanks for help. I do it later.

 

[Arceus0x]

I can translate too if need there be.