Well to begin, is the text in the
Superhuman Physical Characteristics even needed?
In the
Accelerated Development should be "powers".
In the
Self-Sustenance it should be "Being born before the Universe and having lived in the void for Million of years", or something like that. Also a good time to point out, there are some really weird and random capital letters that have no reason to be capital.
In the
Immortality it should be "over 3 trillion years" I'm guessing it's years.
In the
Perception Manipulation it should be "This ability allows her to see what other people see through her own eyes". I'm assuming this ability lets her see what other see, other wise it doesn't make sense. It's also the same in the Notable Attacks section.
In the
Precognition it should be "possesses all knowledge".
In the
Teleportation it should be "This skill allows her to reload".
In the speed section it should be "Skill which governs speed, she is supposed to be at least comparable".
In the durability section, I'm not sure what this is supposed to be "It was supposed to be able to took the Big Bang", I'm assuming it's trying to say that she could tank the Big Bang. And "her Skills have the ability", and "from Immortality and Non-Corporeal true nature makes her difficult to kill".
In the stamina section it should be "and has lived in the void for millions of years", and "she doesn't need to" repeats twice.
The whole range section.
And a helluvalot of dots randomly placed.
I most likely missed some, and if the abilities are explained in the Notable Attacks section, why are they just copy pasted the explanations in the Powers and Abilities section? Might as well just put "(With X skill)" or something, or shorten the explanation. It's very redundant.