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It needs to be cleaned up by someone first.
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Okay both are a bit better. I think there is still a few capitalisation errors but the parenthesis are much clearer now.
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Bai Xiaochun (Eternal World) got a lot of problems, some of which I swear weren't there when I uploaded it.
If you'd open it, I'd be willing to change the following myself:
Name: Several are unneeded, and many outdated names were added for no particular reason. This include Little Turtle, Sect Uncel Bai, Nightcript, Nightdevil, Plaguedevil, Blood Lord, Junior Patriarch, Devil Bai, Bai Hao and Inspections Commissioner.
Classification: Origin of The Starry Sky is a title he gained because of recreating the universe, but it has nothing to do with him as a classification about what he is. Fourth Step Cultivator is something he surpassed, and would be like using "prince" as a classification for a king because he was a prince before being crowned.
Powers and Abilities, there are grammatical errors like: "connecting their fate he connected with" repeats connecting one time too many; "Resistance To Transmutation" has an unneededly capitalized "To"; "Invulnerability (Each of their defenses and attacks contain essence, making them immune to any normal attack" should have "they" changed to "him"; "Acausality (Type 5) Nigh-Omnipresence" has an apostrophe missing.
Intelligence: No error, just feel that adding that he lived for millions of years, and that he understand every one of the infinite concepts and laws that make up reality would be needed. (This only applies to his last key)
If you'd open it, I'd be willing to change the following myself:
Name: Several are unneeded, and many outdated names were added for no particular reason. This include Little Turtle, Sect Uncel Bai, Nightcript, Nightdevil, Plaguedevil, Blood Lord, Junior Patriarch, Devil Bai, Bai Hao and Inspections Commissioner.
Classification: Origin of The Starry Sky is a title he gained because of recreating the universe, but it has nothing to do with him as a classification about what he is. Fourth Step Cultivator is something he surpassed, and would be like using "prince" as a classification for a king because he was a prince before being crowned.
Powers and Abilities, there are grammatical errors like: "connecting their fate he connected with" repeats connecting one time too many; "Resistance To Transmutation" has an unneededly capitalized "To"; "Invulnerability (Each of their defenses and attacks contain essence, making them immune to any normal attack" should have "they" changed to "him"; "Acausality (Type 5) Nigh-Omnipresence" has an apostrophe missing.
Intelligence: No error, just feel that adding that he lived for millions of years, and that he understand every one of the infinite concepts and laws that make up reality would be needed. (This only applies to his last key)
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Done.
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Thanks.
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https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/The_Courier_(Fallout:_New_Vegas)
I feel like it'd be better to remove the (Fallout: New Vegas) from the name, as all of the other Fallout protagonists don't have this distinction, that or just rename them all wih (Fallout) after their names to be concise.
I feel like it'd be better to remove the (Fallout: New Vegas) from the name, as all of the other Fallout protagonists don't have this distinction, that or just rename them all wih (Fallout) after their names to be concise.
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https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/The_Six-Fold_God
Missing Higher-Dimensional Existence and Large Size (Type 10)
Missing Higher-Dimensional Existence and Large Size (Type 10)
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I added Large Size, but it already had Higher-Dimensional Existence.
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Thank you.
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https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Hachimaru
I think this profile can be salvaged, and I've already done a little bit of minor editing work for it (clean-up stuff only), but there are still problems that I unfortunately can't do anything about due to not being familiar with the series.
Namely, the AP and durability at this time appear to be poorly justified and lack calcs, and the formating is a still off in some places.
EDIT: talking fans of the series in this thread to see what we should do with the profile.
I think this profile can be salvaged, and I've already done a little bit of minor editing work for it (clean-up stuff only), but there are still problems that I unfortunately can't do anything about due to not being familiar with the series.
Namely, the AP and durability at this time appear to be poorly justified and lack calcs, and the formating is a still off in some places.
EDIT: talking fans of the series in this thread to see what we should do with the profile.
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https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Oban_Star-Racers
Anybody knowledgeable about this series? The 8-C keys/characterts are lacking justifications for it's AP (This of course includes the High 7-A, which has no calc.
Anybody knowledgeable about this series? The 8-C keys/characterts are lacking justifications for it's AP (This of course includes the High 7-A, which has no calc.
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Adramelech:
She needs her name changed to "Adramelech (Monster Girl Quest!)", as Adramelech was actually a pagan Smaritanian deity that was eventually turned into a devil and a servant of Satan himself by Judeo-Christian Lore.
For example, we have Adramelech (Shin Megami Tensei).
She needs her name changed to "Adramelech (Monster Girl Quest!)", as Adramelech was actually a pagan Smaritanian deity that was eventually turned into a devil and a servant of Satan himself by Judeo-Christian Lore.
For example, we have Adramelech (Shin Megami Tensei).
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