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Tier 1 Review Thread

The 2nd Existential Seed said:
Anyways... Your characters have always had an air of quality to them, Lekmos . This one doesn't change anything.
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Thanks Seed.
 
Yeah I already deleted it, that doesn't meet any requirements
 
I'd be much more appropirate to show a finished page so it can be judged properly.
 
What Aku said. It's best that pages posted in this thread only be ones that are complete/complete enough to be evaluated.

For starters though, check dat capitalization and grammar.

(Also dat use of Megaverse)
 
Fllflourine said:
What Aku said. It's best that pages posted in this thread only be ones that are complete/complete enough to be evaluated.
For starters though, check dat capitalization and grammar.

(Also dat use of Megaverse)
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Tbh I dont see why the term megaverse is wrong. What's is the best way to explain infinite megaverses that contains infinite multiverses?
 
A multiverse...? I don't think it actually matters if there are multiple multiverses within multiverses, it's still considered a multiverse in the grand scheme of things. Kinda like how Marvel has more than one multiverse.
 
Okay, just gonna take myself away from the oters of the past few days.

@Lekmos: Taking a brief moment or two of them, those seem about alright enough as is so they're fine unless another takes in for a second opinion on it.
 
Although putting keys in for the forms would be nice, it looks okay enough as far as i can say.
 
@AnonymouX That should be more detailed.

@Laciel Looks good. Nice job.

@Lekmos Yeah no. The quality isn't really there, seems just... very basic for a Tier 1 profile, on top of definitely seeming like one a strong character made just to be strong.
 
@GreyFang82 Apologies for taking so long. I'd say a more thorough explanation of why he's 1-A is necessary.
 
what do you mean? He was limited to reality before (being in all dimensions), then once reality was gone he could still function in the outerverse (a place beyond dimensions). Isn't that right? If not could you give a suggetion of how I could fix it?
 
Functioning in a place beyond dimensions does not make you 1-A. Regardless, descriptions should be more elaborate than just that.
 
Looks good.
 
Same with Prom. Overseer looking aite as far as i can tell of it, although it looks like you either miss trying to add something after the "connection to" part in it's notable powers/techniques or that's intentional?
 
Oops, not intentional. Was dead tired when I made the page so I missed that bit. Fixed it now
 
@Promestein

Alrigth then....i gonna go plan B for these characters. Time to ``dowgrade for plot``
 
Omatufobalu

Should be ok, as I pretty much copypastaed him from Azure. Nevertheless it's always safer to just run it by here.
 
Dat name tho

"ALL WILL SAME THE NAME OMATUFOBALU!"

>not if they can't pronounce it

>Or laugh out loud saying it
 
Really? I was going for a real threatening name... Guess there were too many syllables.
 
Sorry... didn't mean to rain on your parade.

But if you want it threatening, I'd say A) too many syllables and B) don't end with an 'oo' sound

Just Omatu sounds pretty good. Or Omatufo.
 
Yeah looks good, Ovens.
 
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