Another stomp probably: Another Fusion Boi vs. Discount Moon Princess

[Schnee_One]

Nope, this is a stomp, and nothing else needs discussion

So go on

 

[The_real_cal_howard]

To put it bluntly as I wanna eat before I post a veritable essay, I completely side with Gar here and my already high respect for him has increased further upon reading this thread.

 

[Schnee_One]

Why thank you.

I'm currently Aceing a writing class in college so I should kinda know this

 

[Schnee_One]

Anyway, since Cal is done

Cal

DELET DIS

 

[LSirLancelotDuLacl]

Obviously I very much agree with Gar. Power is a device for the story, it should never really be it's prime focus. Or rather it could be for sure, as is the case in a way for many of those Wushia, "gathering essence to reach a higher level of existence" novels even if in those there are many that use that premise just as a drive to tell the story and push events to happen, but if you intend to write a story with powers for power level and progression sake, it remains a rather poor choice and can only be called bad writing. Or at least that's how I see it.

 

[Schnee_One]

You guys are the friggen best.

A nice birthday present seeing this

 

[LSirLancelotDuLacl]

Gift ain't coming from my poor ass wallet so had to do something.

But yeah, this can he Hakai'd.

 

[The_real_cal_howard]

To put things into perspective...

Umineko is a murder mystery. Tenchi Muyo! is the first harem anime.

 

[The_real_cal_howard]

I'll close this.

 

[The_real_cal_howard]

This is coming from someone who's rated about hax countless times. Power should never be he main focus of the plot and most of the times, it's not. Because power or powers don't drive a story. It can further the plot sure, but you can't get anywhere off of "look what X can do!" alone.