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I begin. I have decided what Phantasm I need to add.
I leave Patchwork Soul to return to Manhattan. I TTBB to the smoke stacks of Con Edison's power factory. Collecting samples the smoke and soot from the burning coal in a large jar, I return to the workshop in my reality marble. There, I craft a small lantern, which I place inside the jar of smoke. I open the jar, and the smoke and soot wafts out
Chapter 1:
"The black smoke billowed from the small lantern, filling the room. It was thick and choking, its fumes sulferous and corrosive. Laciel avoided the fumes, redirecting air currents from within his workshop to redirect the fumes around him. He knew his workshop well and still knew where to go, but for anyone else it would have blotted out the surroundings and made it difficult to find a way around"
This phantasm is only C rank, so I only need to write 4 chapters.
Chapters 2 is written over the next 2.5 hours (my agility has reduced the writing time to 2.5 hours per chapter)
Chapter 3 is written 5 hours from when I began:
"The smoke billowing from the latern was thick and choking, imbued with mana and sulphur. It was corrosive, and would burn the throat and eyes of any human to enter the smoke. Servants would be able to resist this, but even then their agility would be reduced, and their sense of direction woud be utterly confounded, up becoming left, right becoming backwards and forwards becoming down, and they would be unable to find Ruler as he hides within the smoke"
I activate Marchen Meines Leben, and the golden words flow from the book, wrapping around the lamp and transforming it into a noble phantasm.
[Noble Phantasm Gained: The Mist ]
I take the latern, and light it, then conceptual implant it in the Throne. A small engraved image of a lantern appears on the armrest of the Throne. When I place my hand on it, I can summon this smoke to fill the air anywhere within my marble.
3 hours to go until our battle.
I use the next 2.5 hours to write 2 more chapters.
Chapter 1:
"He had rewritten himself so many times and his body had changed to. By implementing parts of other Heroes legends into his own soul, his body had changed, allowing him to grow and strengthe"
Chapter 2:
"Implementing Kazikli Bey had paled his skin and narrowed his eyes. Implementing the Sword of Paracelsus had increased his hieght and narrowed his body. Implenting The Mist had stained his white robes darker with soot and smog, and burnt away at it in places [Jack the stRipper!]. Implementing Ars Paulina had darknened his skin. He could modify his body at will to grow stronger, writing himself into something stronger using the stories of others"
[Skilled replaced - God's Resolution replaced with Self-Modication (Rank A) [Because although this isn't the right amount of chapters, I can re-write myself and give myself the ability of any character in the Nasuverse. It would be wierd if that was less than A rank]. Seals remain, but can no longer be used to control another servant. As a result, Heroism is reduced]
I use the final half hour before our battle to write a quick snippet [0 chapter activation], and buff my A++ rank Luck to A+++.
8 hours having past, I unrestrict SNI, showing me the location of Saver doing [tell me what you are doing and I'll edit it in LlamaGod]. I snap my fingers and the branches around him begin to move. He looks up as they wrap around his body and begin to drag him back towards the colosseum. I press the engraved image of both Prelati's spell book, and the Lantern, and hordes of water demons springfrom the ground, filling the arena, while black mist forms everywhere except within the colosseum. Once the roots have dragged him to the clearing several dozen metres away from the mist, I will meet him there]
[Alright. I'm ready. Message when you are]
I leave Patchwork Soul to return to Manhattan. I TTBB to the smoke stacks of Con Edison's power factory. Collecting samples the smoke and soot from the burning coal in a large jar, I return to the workshop in my reality marble. There, I craft a small lantern, which I place inside the jar of smoke. I open the jar, and the smoke and soot wafts out
Chapter 1:
"The black smoke billowed from the small lantern, filling the room. It was thick and choking, its fumes sulferous and corrosive. Laciel avoided the fumes, redirecting air currents from within his workshop to redirect the fumes around him. He knew his workshop well and still knew where to go, but for anyone else it would have blotted out the surroundings and made it difficult to find a way around"
This phantasm is only C rank, so I only need to write 4 chapters.
Chapters 2 is written over the next 2.5 hours (my agility has reduced the writing time to 2.5 hours per chapter)
Chapter 3 is written 5 hours from when I began:
"The smoke billowing from the latern was thick and choking, imbued with mana and sulphur. It was corrosive, and would burn the throat and eyes of any human to enter the smoke. Servants would be able to resist this, but even then their agility would be reduced, and their sense of direction woud be utterly confounded, up becoming left, right becoming backwards and forwards becoming down, and they would be unable to find Ruler as he hides within the smoke"
I activate Marchen Meines Leben, and the golden words flow from the book, wrapping around the lamp and transforming it into a noble phantasm.
[Noble Phantasm Gained: The Mist ]
I take the latern, and light it, then conceptual implant it in the Throne. A small engraved image of a lantern appears on the armrest of the Throne. When I place my hand on it, I can summon this smoke to fill the air anywhere within my marble.
3 hours to go until our battle.
I use the next 2.5 hours to write 2 more chapters.
Chapter 1:
"He had rewritten himself so many times and his body had changed to. By implementing parts of other Heroes legends into his own soul, his body had changed, allowing him to grow and strengthe"
Chapter 2:
"Implementing Kazikli Bey had paled his skin and narrowed his eyes. Implementing the Sword of Paracelsus had increased his hieght and narrowed his body. Implenting The Mist had stained his white robes darker with soot and smog, and burnt away at it in places [Jack the stRipper!]. Implementing Ars Paulina had darknened his skin. He could modify his body at will to grow stronger, writing himself into something stronger using the stories of others"
[Skilled replaced - God's Resolution replaced with Self-Modication (Rank A) [Because although this isn't the right amount of chapters, I can re-write myself and give myself the ability of any character in the Nasuverse. It would be wierd if that was less than A rank]. Seals remain, but can no longer be used to control another servant. As a result, Heroism is reduced]
I use the final half hour before our battle to write a quick snippet [0 chapter activation], and buff my A++ rank Luck to A+++.
8 hours having past, I unrestrict SNI, showing me the location of Saver doing [tell me what you are doing and I'll edit it in LlamaGod]. I snap my fingers and the branches around him begin to move. He looks up as they wrap around his body and begin to drag him back towards the colosseum. I press the engraved image of both Prelati's spell book, and the Lantern, and hordes of water demons springfrom the ground, filling the arena, while black mist forms everywhere except within the colosseum. Once the roots have dragged him to the clearing several dozen metres away from the mist, I will meet him there]
[Alright. I'm ready. Message when you are]
and btw in terms of weaker in strength or something else?]
