The master fister gets a gud file(Doomfist revision)

[DaReaperMan]

Old profile

New profile.

Basically, Doom's Old profile, while not shit, isn't good. This is his fully referenced new profile that is 11,324 Bytes and about 1 or 2 thousand of those are his speech for his second quote.

 

[LordTracer]

Acrobatics (Jumped high enough in the Numbani airport to be able to slap the ceiling as was described as having catlike reflexes[5])

Pretty sure that jumping high and having good reflexes wouldn’t be acrobatics.

Should be superior to Hammond, who can do this, as he is far superior to R-7000 Ravager Units who can fight Junker Queen- who fought and won against Hammond[13]- but are overall inferior to her[14]

You could probably condense this down. Something like “Far superior to R-7000 Ravager Units (with an explanation as to why he’s superior to them), who can fight Junker Queen, but are overall inferior to her” and link to Junker Queen’s profile.

and should be far superior to OR-14s capable of completely overpowering Reinhardt, who can do this

You should explain why Doom should be superior to the OR-14s.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Pretty sure that jumping high and having good reflexes wouldn’t be acrobatics.


You could probably condense this down. Something like “Far superior to R-7000 Ravager Units (with an explanation as to why he’s superior to them), who can fight Junker Queen, but are overall inferior to her” and link to Junker Queen’s profile.


You should explain why Doom should be superior to the OR-14s.

Jumping good is considered acrobatics last I checked, and Doomfist does a lot of that

I'd rather link the calculation on the profile so people can very easily find where to go to instead of having to go to the verse page or like 2 seperate profiles to get the value so.

Doomfist shreds OR-15s in all aspects, which are upgraded versions of OR-14s, should be pretty clear

 

[LordTracer]

Jumping good is considered acrobatics last I checked, and Doomfist does a lot of that

The Acrobatics page doesn’t say that, so…

I'd rather link the calculation on the profile so people can very easily find where to go to instead of having to go to the verse page or like 2 seperate profiles to get the value so.

Fair. You should still add an explanation for how Doom is superior to the Ravaher Units.

Doomfist shreds OR-15s in all aspects, which are upgraded versions of OR-14s, should be pretty clear

You should actually explain that in the section instead of just saying “should be superior”.

 

[DaReaperMan]

The Acrobatics page doesn’t say that, so…

Fair. You should still add an explanation for how Doom is superior to the Ravaher Units.

You should actually explain that in the section instead of just saying “should be superior”.

Pretty sure Samurai Jack has acrobatics for jumping good, but he doesn't have any justification so eh, regardless, I'd argue that being able to jump, what, 10-20 meters into the air should be considered a form of acrobatics

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[DaReaperMan]

Though you could argue he has hypermobility for being capable of changing the direction of his momentum in-game via teching his punch to cancel with a press of the spacebar for PC players, to the point of being able to round corners

 

[LordTracer]

Page is good to go now

 

[DaReaperMan]

I'll add the Hypermobility justification(Along with a reference) and fix the Grammer on the Acrobatics, just for more quality

 

[WeeklyBattles]

Looks good

 

[DaReaperMan]

Bump, added Prep, Weapon Mastery, and Cyborgization.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Am I clear to apply this? I have a dwarf I need to release

 

[ImmortalDread]

Looks fine as well. You need one more staff approval, and you're good to implement them.

 

[WeeklyBattles]

Bump

 

[ImmortalDread]

Bump

Call staff members, tho, one approval and you can apply changes.

 

[WeeklyBattles]

Bump

 

[SamanPatou]

Just jumping high isn't acrobatics, but LS. However, Doomfist has air attacks and can shoot while jumping, that's enough for acrobatics.

The profile has some misplaced commas here and there, where there should be dots instead.

His intelligence doesn't have a rating, but either gifted or genius should work.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Just jumping high isn't acrobatics, but LS. However, Doomfist has air attacks and can shoot while jumping, that's enough for acrobatics.

The profile has some misplaced commas here and there, where there should be dots instead.

His intelligence doesn't have a rating, but either gifted or genius should work.

That should be all changes

 

[DaReaperMan]

Just jumping high isn't acrobatics, but LS. However, Doomfist has air attacks and can shoot while jumping, that's enough for acrobatics.

The profile has some misplaced commas here and there, where there should be dots instead.

His intelligence doesn't have a rating, but either gifted or genius should work.

Page is good to go now

Am I clear to apply?

 

[SamanPatou]

Yep.
Also, remember to link the latest edit history in the op, not the current page.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Done, this can be closed now