Marvel: Mandarin Rework

[The_Impress]

Iron Man Rework

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Brief summary of the rework:

• Added keys to showcase Mandarin's progression in strength as time passes. These are canonically like this
  • To note, there are more keys I could add, because essentially in every appearance of his he's amped from before, but I have only chosen to add what I felt were notable, some of them are like, 1 or 2 issues
• Added some references and P&A
• Formatting edits

 

[The_Impress]

@Antvasima @Eficiente @Newendigo

 

[Antvasima]

This is probably fine.

 

[SamanPatou]

Looks good, nice job!

However, some powers and related scans lack references: Flight, Afterimages, Enhanced Senses, Resistance to Poison, Life Manipulation, Air Manipulation, Memory Manipulation, Electricity Manipulation and Absolute Zero.

The first two scans in the intelligence section also lack scans.

Finally, his stamina could use a scan or else for that specific feat, and Social influencing may use more elaboration.

 

[The_Impress]

Looks good, nice job!

However, some powers and related scans lack references: Flight, Afterimages, Enhanced Senses, Resistance to Poison, Life Manipulation, Air Manipulation, Memory Manipulation, Electricity Manipulation and Absolute Zero.

Life Manip, Memory Manip, Intelligence and Electricity Manip were already on the file and I don't know the exact issues they come from, flight is also self-evident imo, he does it in multiple instances across his series

Rest I can add on a later date maybe? I know vaguely what group of issues they belong to, but not the exact number. The file isn't getting locked or anything, right?

Finally, his stamina could use a scan or else for that specific feat, and Social influencing may use more elaboration.

I deadass don't know where the stamina claim comes from, it was already on his file.

Social Influencing, I think is too long to explain and there are too many instances, so imo it is self-evident too if you read any of his modern appearances.

 

[SamanPatou]

Yes, they can be added later, thank you, and the profile should stay open.

Flight and Social Influencing are fine then, although the latter might be included in his intelligence section, not necessarily now.

The stamina feat can stay or not, but I think it should be better to remove it, as we don't even have the scan at the moment.
He can have some true and generic thing like the fact that he's physically fit or something, until the scan for the feat comes out, otherwise this statement will just not return.

 

[Antvasima]

Should I call more knowledgeable members here?

 

[SamanPatou]

It could be useful, perhaps.

 

[Antvasima]

@Zensum @C2_of_Omegon @Qawsedf234 @SuperAPM @Firestorm808 @EmperorRorepme @Ehnkr2beboh @Tllmbrg @Elizio33 @LordTracer @Confluctor

WOuld any of you be willing to help out with input here?

 

[Newendigo]

I think is overall ok, albeit I thought you would add more rings considering the differences some of those get.

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

This proposal for Mandarin looks good

 

[LordTracer]

Looks good to me.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Looks fine to me, I already questioned Zark about stuff in Discord

 

[The_Impress]

So can I apply this? I'll keep a note of Saman's suggested changes

 

[Antvasima]

It is probably fine, yes.

 

[The_Impress]

I applied them. Closing.