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If you were/are writer, how strong would/did you make your Verse?

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Those are portals if they act like portals.
 
On Joke Battles Wiki, i already made a huge "verse" (alliance of characters) along with someone else on there.
 
Actually, Black Goku will be 1-C because he transcends

And about the Saibamen, is because they are just born at that strength and frankly speaking, do you think there was some kind of scientist on Frieza's army that cared for them?

Yeah, lel no
 
Oh, yeah, just remembered something I plan on making a thing: Peak Human Intelligence. A character will be referred to as having the best brain possible for the human anatomy and be portrayed as an Extraordinary Genius not too high above baseline. Basically like being permanently on NZT (never give her NZT or she'll end up getting psychic powers to warp reality or something, lol).

Lol, it's sad that Frieza is so evil he's stupid, isn't it? If he had a little more brains he'd have an army of Saibamen engineered and grown into PLs of around 50 000. Goku wouldn't be able to do shit against an army of that.

But if you think about that, you have to think about how they never trained and how Frieza would be 3-A if he had... *sigh*
 
My dude, these are the fighters of the universe 13

I ain't spoiling everything that quickly.

And I am already warning that it may have some Shaggy/Harem and smut.

Saibamen won't be a thing to think about now
 
so, i created a 6-C character with Universal range, luckily, its just with his portal creation, which is referred as holes by many,

it would be more OP if it was a diffrent ability,
 
I have an 8-year old purple haired girl OC with water purification which can purify any mixture of water so long as it's >50% water. Recipients with water inside can be but are not necessarily considered water mixtures. She is otherwise 9-C, but ignores durabilty of anyone without transmutation resistance and through touch can bypass most who have. Her range is her sight.

Guess how broken that is.
 
Mand21 said:
I have an 8-year old purple haired girl OC with water purification which can purify any mixture of water so long as it's >50% water. Recipients with water inside can be but are not necessarily considered water mixtures. She is otherwise 9-C, but ignores durabilty of anyone without transmutation resistance and through touch can bypass most who have. Her range is her sight.
Guess how broken that is.
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well, most of the characters i create do not have water, and could easily destroy that 9-C otherwise,
 
If you made a human they'd get killed by that. OC's aren't really a power measuring contest anyways though, not really sure why youv'e gotta brag about a robot OC or something beating Mand's. I am a fan of powers like teleportation that when applied in ways or not really given limitation get pretty busted (eg teleporting stuff inside people, teleporting people into black holes, teleporting people's attacks inside of them, etc).
 
Well, one OC I made that I like is a DB one where the OC went on the dun wukong route (wished for immortality, uses duplication etc)
 
She is indeed useless against stuff like skeleton undeads and constructs, but can purify an entire river or lake. :v

But yeah, your characters would stomp her no diff.
 
Wokistan said:
If you made a human they'd get killed by that. OC's aren't really a power measuring contest anyways though, not really sure why youv'e gotta brag about a robot OC or something beating Mand's. I am a fan of powers like teleportation that when applied in ways or not really given limitation get pretty busted (eg teleporting stuff inside people, teleporting people into black holes, teleporting people's attacks inside of them, etc).
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actually, the OCs im talking about are a demon, a Flying/levitating skull, and poo,

none of these contain water,
 
Demons it depends, skeletons shouldn't and depending on the specifics poo may. That's a, shall we say, interesting choice for and OC species though.
 
Wokistan said:
If you made a human they'd get killed by that. OC's aren't really a power measuring contest anyways though, not really sure why youv'e gotta brag about a robot OC or something beating Mand's. I am a fan of powers like teleportation that when applied in ways or not really given limitation get pretty busted (eg teleporting stuff inside people, teleporting people into black holes, teleporting people's attacks inside of them, etc).
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I personally am a complete and absolute hater of that kind of stuff, LOL. That's because I've done a lot of play-by-post roleplays and there is always an asshole who does that (which is why I made the Interference Fields as a passive of my outliers and replicated on nearly every form of sentient life from my verse). The only reason I like water purification is because I love when something dumb and ridiculously puny gets made into such a broken ability by being used in a clever and unexpected way.

A friend of mine has an OC with liquid mimicry into a slimey form. It would seem shitty, but this character is a kleptomanic who can make bubbles (like JoJo's, but rather than stealing when they burst, they steal and keep it inside them) that can store anything their size allows them to, even abstract properties of objects such as the weight or a person's body, or something which is dispersed within a larger object such as the mieline from one's entire brain, as well as assimilate properties from other substances he mixes with.

This friend of mine basically had his slime thief OC, Ranshin, solo extremely overpowered characters. Once a guy came against him with a 100 hands bodhisattva punching him, only for him to use his special technique "Atom Grazer" by splitting himself into trillions of blades so thin they seemed perfectly two-dimensional and were indeed one atom thin, and sever all these hands from the body, as well as make scratches on the absurdly tanky body of the guy... and use the small opening into his blood vessels that these scratches made to give him embolia and steal his mieline, putting him into a comatose state from which he only recovered because his other characters healed him. Worse was the fact the guy after that and before passing out emitted a huge breath with a "cutting substance in the air"... only to see Ranshin evolve his Atom Grazer into Atom Splitter and further f*ck him up.

I once tried to finish his character by throwing a fireball on him inside a closed room... but the closed room was a bank's vault and he assimilated the molten gold to survive.

I admire his writing style and creativity a lot, lol, though I don't know how much he copied from JoJo and how much is original.
 
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Demons it depends, skeletons shouldn't and depending on the specifics poo may. That's a, shall we say, interesting choice for and OC species though.
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well, Humans are way too common these days, lets have Original OCs, which are actual original, no offense to Human OCs tho,

and its Poo as in, you know what i mean

and for the demon... well, they come from, you know, the underworld, they.. surely dont have water, maybe blood is more what you expect from a demon, but not water for sure,
 
"tier 0 via super move" what that's not a thing

Seriously though, tier 1s, especially High 1-Bs and above, generally are less characters than representations of ideas. Think the endless of DC, or the Lovecraft gods. No reason to make a broken OC if the writing sucks. You also can't be tier 0 via a certain attack, that's contradictory to the idea of tier 0.
 
Blood has a lot of water in it...
 
Wokistan said:
"tier 0 via super move" what that's not a thing
Seriously though, tier 1s, especially High 1-Bs and above, generally are less characters than representations of ideas. Think the endless of DC, or the Lovecraft gods. No reason to make a broken OC if the writing sucks. You also can't be tier 0 via a certain attack, that's contradictory to the idea of tier 0.
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dont tell me, i didnt create him
 
Yeah you may want to tell your friend to prioritize writing over shoehorning in all these super powerful feats. A lot of the most interesting and thought provoking stories don't even break tier 10.
 
Wokistan said:
Yeah you may want to tell your friend to prioritize writing over shoehorning in all these super powerful feats. A lot of the most interesting and thought provoking stories don't even break tier 10.
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despite my OCs being 6-C, they can still be interesting in their ways, did you know that the skull OC of mine and the Demon OC of mine are based of Yin-yang? the white one stands for good (the skull is white), and the black one stands for evil (the Demon is black), pretty interesting huh?
 
That second one doesn't make sense, like at all. You can't be tier 0 and have a weakness, and even if Saitama is 2-B for some reason that's still unfathomably weaker. I'd advise your friend that if they want to write a tier 0, have them take very limited actions. TOAA barely shows up, DC writer was in 1 animal man run, an already meta comic, Azathoth does nothing, etc.
 
6-C is far from being way too strong. I'd just advise against making shit like 1-A protagonists in a conventional story. That seems like pretty basic symbolism, but you can build off of simple central ideas with more complex and nuanced themes if its done well.
 
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6-C is far from being way too strong. I'd just advise against making shit like 1-A protagonists in a conventional story. That seems like pretty basic symbolism, but you can build off of simple central ideas with more complex and nuanced themes if its done well.
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even if it goes for my 6-C which got universal range with portals, even tho, the portal can only be created on ground (yeah, ground on other planets aswell, from galaxies away, idk, somewhere in the far universe)
 
BattleReviews said:
and anyone here, dont mess with my friend's OCs, the OC would solo your verse if you dont have his tier
https://battlereviews.wikia.com/wiki/Future_warrior(xenoverse_4)

yeah, stay away from this strong Warrior, before you know it, he would just stomp every OC which isnt tier 0,
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I'm baffled by how out of his mind your friend was when writing this. His character fodderizes itself on every single key. His special move is so powerful it shouldn't be controllable by himself and most of it looks like he was just adding two to five tiers more for each of his key's sections, given every key begins stronger than the last one's special move.

That's not how feats, tiering or even special moves work. If he ever portrays a special move as something survivable by an opponent that can be damaged by normal attacks, he greatly contradicts himself beyond "game mechanics" strats. Otherwise even bosses can get one-hit. This isn't game-applicable without some huge logic leaps and self-wanking. It would be better to just always scale him to his special move and delete the last key, leaving him at "¨7-B | 6-A | 4-B | 2-A" and in this case...

...any Hayyoth trained for combat (given that they can learn all the known science from a universe more complex than our own fully ruled by a species ridiculously smarter than our own and treat that as something equal to completing highschool, their battle training looks more like "Mastered Ultra Instinct+Peak intellectual-based precognition+Enormous and hugely optimized moveset") could fodderize 4-B key and treat the rest like ants.

Don't let your friend be a Lionel Suggs. Prioritize the story or else you just look dumb. =/

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Wokistan said:
Yeah you may want to tell your friend to prioritize writing over shoehorning in all these super powerful feats. A lot of the most interesting and thought provoking stories don't even break tier 10.
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despite my OCs being 6-C, they can still be interesting in their ways, did you know that the skull OC of mine and the Demon OC of mine are based of Yin-yang? the white one stands for good (the skull is white), and the black one stands for evil (the Demon is black), pretty interesting huh?
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I've written a character with a ying-yang based transformation when I was aged 8. Not really impressive. It was a fire manipulator Mario FC who was 1/4 toad and had something on the blood of his family which allowed him to be always capable of using fire powers. Under certain circumstances he would transform into some sort of Lawful Stupid cosmic entity which obsessed over preserving the balance of things and destroying those who "broke the balance" as from his point of view. It's Mand Fireguy, the character my present online usernames are all based off.

"Yo" Mand had a Katana and was overall themed off the gray color wherein his base was always red clothed, red-eyed and red haired with a normal Mario-like hammer, lol. It was pretty cool.

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Wokistan said:
Demons it depends, skeletons shouldn't and depending on the specifics poo may. That's a, shall we say, interesting choice for and OC species though.
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well, Humans are way too common these days, lets have Original OCs, which are actual original, no offense to Human OCs tho,
and its Poo as in, you know what i mean

and for the demon... well, they come from, you know, the underworld, they.. surely dont have water, maybe blood is more what you expect from a demon, but not water for sure,
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If you're talking about poo as in human shit, it's mostly water. Demons can and often are organic creatures, and if they contain blood they should have water distributed all over them, so... yeah, they can get killed with a tap to the head. So can poo.

I don't think human OCs are less creative, tbh. Sure, they are much more common, but a "modified mankind" which is well explored feels to me often more creative than a different species which is way too unrelatable, undetailed or, worse, a Planet of Hats. Although my Hayyoth are kind of a lot like that, though they're meant to be unrelatable to a certain degree (they treat humans like some shit tier pet).
 
No I was saying your 6-C isn't too overpowered to make writing a good story possible. That character seems good, just scale the setting accordingly. Hell, Lovecraft managed to pull his stuff off, with some of the strongest 1-As to exist, but he also didn't write conventional stories with them.
 
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