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Note: Hop is not necessarily asking for writing help, but more so if the statements below make sense.
So Hop wrote this and was wondering if anyone (of course, here of all places) knew if this made sense to them. It's about dimensions and science so if this is not up your spacial alley, Hop suggests just assuming it makes sense.
The line goes:
Planetary System of High Pyrio, Pryion Minor and its moons, are a nearby area of space upward of Karrot's north pole, and 100,000 lightyears to the universal east of the equator, however High Pyrion, the center most planetoid with five (5) moons, and one partner planetoid, strangely aligned to Karrot's position in space on the 3rd dimensional axis. It will move with Karrot's orbit.
More or less it attempts to explain a planet's travel relative to another planet. Any contradictions, questions or comments?
So Hop wrote this and was wondering if anyone (of course, here of all places) knew if this made sense to them. It's about dimensions and science so if this is not up your spacial alley, Hop suggests just assuming it makes sense.
The line goes:
Planetary System of High Pyrio, Pryion Minor and its moons, are a nearby area of space upward of Karrot's north pole, and 100,000 lightyears to the universal east of the equator, however High Pyrion, the center most planetoid with five (5) moons, and one partner planetoid, strangely aligned to Karrot's position in space on the 3rd dimensional axis. It will move with Karrot's orbit.
More or less it attempts to explain a planet's travel relative to another planet. Any contradictions, questions or comments?
