I'll post here a draft of a short story I wrote:
Once upon a time in an old forest...
There were a couple of children, a boy and a girl, they were identical twins. The boy wore beautiful green clothes and the girl wore light yellow clothes. The pair was walking along a rural road in that great forest, they were happily skipping along the road towards the unknown.
Once upon a time in an old forest...
Where there was a scowling and evil hyena that had a beautiful car, it was not known for bad things, only good things. She was a gallant Hyena that stole the hearts of young ladies, and she had a great reputation, but she had a terrible hobby... Kidnapping little children to eat them alive.
On a beautiful day the frowning Hyena strolled through the old forest in her elegant car, she hummed with happiness while looking for little children, she continued to stroll through the forest until she met a pair of twins who were on their way. The hyena smirked and went over to the twins, stopping her car next to the pair:
- Hello little children, where are you going? - Asked Hyena showing her sweetest smile.
- We are following this road - Answered the couple with sweet smiles for the Hyena.
- Do you want a ride, little kids? It is dangerous to walk alone in the forest - Hyena said with her sweet smile towards the pair.
- But you know young Hyena that strangers cannot be trusted, right? - The couple spoke to the hungry Hyena in the sweetest possible voice, making them laugh out loud.
- Don't worry little children, you can trust me - The evil Hyena was showing her best smile, using her lip to attract the pair.
- All right then - The twins replied, Hyena opened the door of her beautiful car for the couple to enter, she was dancing inside, happy as her victims had fallen for her trick.
Now, with the car in motion, the Hyena was driving to her secret lair, without letting the twins see her evil and frowning face of hunger, her belly was snoring, her mouth was full of saliva, her true face was revealed. The old forest watched the car in motion, the forest had already seen both the Gemini and the Hyena, the forest knew everything...
The Hyena drove her beautiful car, but now the beautiful day was replaced by a strong storm, the wind howled, the rain fell, the fog was high and persisting against the wind, from afar it was possible to hear the roar of thunder; that day there was not a single cloud, but suddenly, everything was turned into a fierce storm. Hyena was confused by the weather and since the moment the twins got in the car they had not made a single noise, this was worrying Hyena, she looked at the reflection of the foggy mirror and saw only herself, but whenever she looked back, there was the pair in their green and yellow clothes, staring at him like dolls. The Hyena was becoming apprehensive with the time that did not pass, and it was taking a long time to reach its lair, but she patiently waited and waited ... And waited again, but the storm continued, the wind swayed the trees, but it didn't take the fog, the sounds of thunder grew louder, even without a lightning bolt. Soon hunger was replaced by fear, cold ran down the spine of the evil Hyena, sweat dripped from her face, and the children's silence pierced the frowning Hyena's chest.
Finally the moment came when she stopped the car and said:
- Get out of the car right now! -Her voice was shaky and out of tune.
- But what about the ride? - Asked the Twins.
- GO OUT SOON !!! - Shouted to Hyena showing her teeth to the twins, who did not show a single reaction to the threat, besides leaving the car in silence.
The Hyena abandoned the Gemini by stepping on the accelerator, it did not take long and the fog fell, the wind stopped howling completely, the sounds of thunder ceased, the clouds in the sky mysteriously disappeared revealing a bright and beautiful sun, the day had returned to the normal. The Hyena sighed with relief, she stopped the car and started to take a deep breath, closing her eyes while resting in the driver's seat waiting for the snowfall to pass:
- Mrs. Hyena, it's already too late for you - A pair of children's voices made the evil Hyena open her eyes in fright, she saw in the car mirror now really appearing in the mirror, the Twins doll expressions on their faces, she in a jump opened the car door to escape, but he didn't get out of the car.
The car door was opened, but nothing came out of it, neither the Hyena nor the Gemini. The only one to see this bizarre scene was the old Forest that watched everything silently.
I relied a little on the little red hat and the story has some hints ... What do you think?