Verse addition: Kral Şakir

[ShionAH]

As you can see I want to add this verse. I am putting it on here so I wont have to face what happened last time

The Verse Page is already out

I made 3 profiles here are the sandboxes for them

Fil Necati
Kral Şakir
Mirket

Thanks to: @Barbar01, @ZawierJ (They helped me with calcs and some abilities)

 

[Dragonite007]

Şakir AP: Wouldn't it be better to be: "Small Country level up to Moon level (He was shaking the entire planet, Şakir was going to change the orbit of the planet when he was running if he was not stopped)"

 

[ShionAH]

Şakir AP: Wouldn't it be better to be: "Small Country level up to Moon level (He was shaking the entire planet, Şakir was going to change the orbit of the planet when he was running if he was not stopped)"

That sound a lot better but I dont remember the shake

 

[TheGreatJedi13]

Mirket listed portal creation twice
Mirket doesn't need a new key for with Equipments

Fil Necati Speed of light feat doesn't imply him reacting to the surrounding he simply opened the window cause he wants some air and wants to feel the air
Fil tier should be 5-B with technology
and it doesn't have to be a new Key similar to Mirket

Kral lacks a Key section for the base and Laddle man key


you should make a section in ability of things they gain from Equipment since most of this equipment looks optional

There were some minor errors and some incomplete parts like Elasticity in Necati's powers and abilities

 

[ShionAH]

Nvm I remember

 

[ShionAH]

Mirket doesn't need a new key for with Equipments

Why?

Fil Necati Speed of light feat doesn't imply him reacting to the surrounding he simply opened the window cause he wants some air and wants to feel the air

He literally opens the window and looks around

Fil tier should be 5-B with technology

The AP section covers that

and it doesn't have to be a new Key similar to Mirket

Why?

Kral lacks a Key section for the base and Laddle man key

Fixed

you should make a section in ability of things they gain from Equipment since most of this equipment looks optional

Thats why theres new keys for them

There were some minor errors and some incomplete parts like Elasticity in Necati's powers and abilities

Elasticity is so widely popular in the cartoon I didnt need to show a million scans for it

 

[Dragonite007]

That sound a lot better but I dont remember the shake

Here

It would be something like that: "Small Country level up to Moon level (He was shaking the entire planet, Şakir was going to change the orbit of the planet when he was running if he was not stopped)"

 

[ShionAH]

Here

It would be something like that: "Small Country level up to Moon level (He was shaking the entire planet, Şakir was going to change the orbit of the planet when he was running if he was not stopped)"

Gonna fix that AP tomorrow

 

[TheGreatJedi13]

Why?

putting tiers like this

4-B, higher with example

doesn't need a key
but putting it like this

4-B | 3-A

needs a key

He literally opens the window and looks around

The translation only says about him wanting some Air. Looking around doesn't mean he perceived it all in the same speed as the movement of the bus.
you don't get the perception speed equivalent to a plane when you see things from the window of a plane while it is in flight

Thats why theres new keys for them

best to separate abilities he gets from equipment and his ability as base.

Elasticity is so widely popular in the cartoon I didnt need to show a million scans for it

doesn't mean you can just leave it empty. put a single scan and you're done.

 

[ShionAH]

putting tiers like this

doesn't need a key
but putting it like this

needs a key

Alright

The translation only says about him wanting some Air. Looking around doesn't mean he perceived it all in the same speed as the movement of the bus.
you don't get the perception speed equivalent to a plane when you see things from the window of a plane while it is in flight

Hmm fair tbh

doesn't mean you can just leave it empty. put a single scan and you're done.

I have seen a lot of profiles with empty abilities. As long as they are not OP abilities and are all over the verse its fine

 

[ShionAH]

best to separate abilities he gets from equipment and his ability as base.

So should I add all the optional equipment stuff in one tabber?

 

[ShionAH]

If there are any small errors I can fix them tomorrow gonna sleep now lol bye

 

[TheGreatJedi13]

So should I add all the optional equipment stuff in one tabber?

all the abilities they can gain from optional equipment yes.

 

[ShionAH]

all the abilities they can gain from optional equipment yes.

Fixed