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Well since nobody is claiming Rider yet.
I will take it!
I will take it!
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Totally Accurate Holy Grail War Simulator [FULL]
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@Nicetoderp
ok
@Anonymus
Weren't you going for Lancer, why the change if i may ask ?
@Adem
for now it's full
ok
@Anonymus
Weren't you going for Lancer, why the change if i may ask ?
@Adem
for now it's full
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Name: Wataru Kurenai
Gender: Male
Class: Rider
Parameters:
STR:C
END:C
AGL:B
Mana:A
LCK:B
NP:B~A++
Class Skills:
Riding A
An ability to make any vihicles his mount. Stay true to his synonyms 'Masked Rider'. His proficient with riding vihicle is great and in this class container it is even an upgrade to his usual self. Now he is able to increase the power of his mount if it's a Phantasmal Beast.
Magic Resistance D
An ability to resist mild curse.
Personal Skills:
One Thousand Miles Rush A
Bestows inexhaustible stamina to perform long distance movement for a long time. Also, this Skill is capable of demonstrating effects such as giving sudden surge in Agility (++Modifier) parameter, and during full sprint, increases both Strength and Endurance parameters by one. Information Erasuee C+++(Mask)
The ability to removal of information regarding the Servant's True Nam and appearance from the records and memories of all eye witnesses, including the opponent, following the conclusion of an engagement. But rather than forgot about the existence of the Servant Rider and his power. As long as no one know who is hidden under the mask, the connection can never be trace back no matter how logical the reasons or evidences is.
Disengage B
The ability to make a quick escape amidst the chaotic battles. Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the match (1st turn) and restores the condition of this Skill to the initial value. An ability that he have learned and use and come to appropriate.
Lore Skills:
Violinist A++
The ability to show mastery over Violin.
Main NP:
Castle Doran:Wyvern of Servitude Anti-Army, A+++
Though originally called the Great Wyvern, the Fangires captured it and bonded it to the mold of a castle so it would serve as the base of the Checkmate Four. Wataru eventually became its master through Kivat from his mother Maya. While dormant, it assumes the form of a tall building to conceal itself in plain sight, creating a Bounded Field that only a master at Bounded Field could even detect it's presence. When exposed to moonlight, or when Kiva performs his finishing move or uses the Doran Fuestle, Castle Doran awakens and assumes its true form. Due to its unique abilities of sealing defeated enemies, Castle Doran is home to the Arm Monsters, who are a Fangire under servitude of Wataru while being maintained on the Life Energy of the sealed Fangires and fallen enemies that Castle Doran devours. In battle, Castle Doran can use Magic Missiles, firing the towers on its castle, and spit out Pod Shoots from its mouth. It can also breath fire as well as drain the life energy of other. The Arm Monster are Fangire, a monster equivelent of Dead Apostle with strenght matching Servant in Wataru's world. He have three in total. Jiro the Wolfen Fangire, Ramon the Merman Fangire, and Riki the Franken Fangire. While having an equivelent of multiple Servants being tied to an NP should suck any Master dry. Due to the fact that the Arms Monster is tied to Doran, until they are being active in the fight. Their mana consumption is lowered much considerably.
Arm Monsters list.
-Jiro the wolfen Fangire, upon being call by Garulu Fuestles, he will transform into Demonic Beast Sword, Garulu Saber. Giving his natural Instinct(C) to Wataru and an increase in his AGI by one. The sword can also cause massive shockwave attack call 'Howling Shock' from the wolf head on the blade hilt that deflect projectile.
-Ramon the Mermen Fangire is a cheerful and free spirit person. While he may act like a man child most of the time, being a Mermen Fangire that has very keen eyesight that allow them to hit target some kilometers away and have natural ability to manipulate water. When summon in his Arm form with Fuestles, he turn into Demon Sea Gun, Bashaa Magnum that is able to shoot magic enhanced pressurize water as a form of bullet by sucking the mana and moisture from the air around him. While grant no additional stat boost like other form. This give Clairvoyance (C) to Wataru, turning him into an Archer hybrid in an instant.
-Riki the Franken Fangire is a rather slow and meek, but is the physically strongest out of the trio. Franken Fangire is fame for their natural strenght and endurance and and ability to released electric discharge. When summon in Arm Form by the Fuestles. Riki turn into Demon Iron Hammer, Dogga Hammer, a massive hammer in a shape of giant hand. This form grant Wataru stat boost in both STR and END by 1 and Monstrous Strenght C and Galvanism C.
If utilized two at the same time, he will be on a around 15 minutes timer.
It is also possible to use all three at the same time and gain all of their abilities, but the amount of mana use is staggering and cannot be use more than 5 minutes.
Secondary NP:
Kivat-bat The Third!:Fateful Companion to the End Anti-Unit(self) B
Kivat is an odd race even among the Fangire. It doesn't directly fight but have the power to bestow the Imperial Demon Power. One could say that Kivat is like the crown to the rightful king. By utilising his power, Kivat can transform Wataru into Masked Rider Kiva. Rising all of his physical parameters by one and making his appearance. If he fight under full moon where all Fangire's power reach it's peak. His physical parameters rise by two instead. He could perform a finisher that able to summon a Marble Phantasm with Full Moon casting over the 'stage' and double his damage output for one more attack. But the amount of mana require to use this would drain Wataru and even Master's own reserve.
Physical Appearance:
Wataru as himself.
Wataru as Kiva
Gender: Male
Class: Rider
Parameters:
STR:C
END:C
AGL:B
Mana:A
LCK:B
NP:B~A++
Class Skills:
Riding A
An ability to make any vihicles his mount. Stay true to his synonyms 'Masked Rider'. His proficient with riding vihicle is great and in this class container it is even an upgrade to his usual self. Now he is able to increase the power of his mount if it's a Phantasmal Beast.
Magic Resistance D
An ability to resist mild curse.
Personal Skills:
One Thousand Miles Rush A
Bestows inexhaustible stamina to perform long distance movement for a long time. Also, this Skill is capable of demonstrating effects such as giving sudden surge in Agility (++Modifier) parameter, and during full sprint, increases both Strength and Endurance parameters by one. Information Erasuee C+++(Mask)
The ability to removal of information regarding the Servant's True Nam and appearance from the records and memories of all eye witnesses, including the opponent, following the conclusion of an engagement. But rather than forgot about the existence of the Servant Rider and his power. As long as no one know who is hidden under the mask, the connection can never be trace back no matter how logical the reasons or evidences is.
Disengage B
The ability to make a quick escape amidst the chaotic battles. Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the match (1st turn) and restores the condition of this Skill to the initial value. An ability that he have learned and use and come to appropriate.
Lore Skills:
Violinist A++
The ability to show mastery over Violin.
Main NP:
Castle Doran:Wyvern of Servitude Anti-Army, A+++
Though originally called the Great Wyvern, the Fangires captured it and bonded it to the mold of a castle so it would serve as the base of the Checkmate Four. Wataru eventually became its master through Kivat from his mother Maya. While dormant, it assumes the form of a tall building to conceal itself in plain sight, creating a Bounded Field that only a master at Bounded Field could even detect it's presence. When exposed to moonlight, or when Kiva performs his finishing move or uses the Doran Fuestle, Castle Doran awakens and assumes its true form. Due to its unique abilities of sealing defeated enemies, Castle Doran is home to the Arm Monsters, who are a Fangire under servitude of Wataru while being maintained on the Life Energy of the sealed Fangires and fallen enemies that Castle Doran devours. In battle, Castle Doran can use Magic Missiles, firing the towers on its castle, and spit out Pod Shoots from its mouth. It can also breath fire as well as drain the life energy of other. The Arm Monster are Fangire, a monster equivelent of Dead Apostle with strenght matching Servant in Wataru's world. He have three in total. Jiro the Wolfen Fangire, Ramon the Merman Fangire, and Riki the Franken Fangire. While having an equivelent of multiple Servants being tied to an NP should suck any Master dry. Due to the fact that the Arms Monster is tied to Doran, until they are being active in the fight. Their mana consumption is lowered much considerably.
Arm Monsters list.
-Jiro the wolfen Fangire, upon being call by Garulu Fuestles, he will transform into Demonic Beast Sword, Garulu Saber. Giving his natural Instinct(C) to Wataru and an increase in his AGI by one. The sword can also cause massive shockwave attack call 'Howling Shock' from the wolf head on the blade hilt that deflect projectile.
-Ramon the Mermen Fangire is a cheerful and free spirit person. While he may act like a man child most of the time, being a Mermen Fangire that has very keen eyesight that allow them to hit target some kilometers away and have natural ability to manipulate water. When summon in his Arm form with Fuestles, he turn into Demon Sea Gun, Bashaa Magnum that is able to shoot magic enhanced pressurize water as a form of bullet by sucking the mana and moisture from the air around him. While grant no additional stat boost like other form. This give Clairvoyance (C) to Wataru, turning him into an Archer hybrid in an instant.
-Riki the Franken Fangire is a rather slow and meek, but is the physically strongest out of the trio. Franken Fangire is fame for their natural strenght and endurance and and ability to released electric discharge. When summon in Arm Form by the Fuestles. Riki turn into Demon Iron Hammer, Dogga Hammer, a massive hammer in a shape of giant hand. This form grant Wataru stat boost in both STR and END by 1 and Monstrous Strenght C and Galvanism C.
If utilized two at the same time, he will be on a around 15 minutes timer.
It is also possible to use all three at the same time and gain all of their abilities, but the amount of mana use is staggering and cannot be use more than 5 minutes.
Secondary NP:
Kivat-bat The Third!:Fateful Companion to the End Anti-Unit(self) B
Kivat is an odd race even among the Fangire. It doesn't directly fight but have the power to bestow the Imperial Demon Power. One could say that Kivat is like the crown to the rightful king. By utilising his power, Kivat can transform Wataru into Masked Rider Kiva. Rising all of his physical parameters by one and making his appearance. If he fight under full moon where all Fangire's power reach it's peak. His physical parameters rise by two instead. He could perform a finisher that able to summon a Marble Phantasm with Full Moon casting over the 'stage' and double his damage output for one more attack. But the amount of mana require to use this would drain Wataru and even Master's own reserve.
Physical Appearance:
Wataru as himself.
Wataru as Kiva
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I was but it always ends up as the character has too much (as in way too much) or too little which is kinda annoying when making them. Plus most of the spear using guys I know are from or already in Fate so it's not like I can make them a Servant lol. For context, my initial idea was Lugh but his spear/spears are either too numerous or do too much stuff.
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Ok, if you want to be Berserker instead it's fine.
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I mean, I would only do it if Andy is fine since he did call it first. Plus I made a gimped Achilles so I am fine either way. Making the Master is the bigger issue.
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@Nice
Character it's fine for now, but are you sure about Golden Rule ?
It seems kinda useless IMO
Character it's fine for now, but are you sure about Golden Rule ?
It seems kinda useless IMO
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@Nice
Just noticed you posted the first NP, there's have a few thing i have to say:
1. The "sealing defeated enemies" thing can't be appliable to servants.
2. What is a Fangire ?
3. How does the life absorbtion work like ?
4."However due to their existence being tied to Castle Doran, their power drastically drop down unless they get summoned as Arm Monster to help Wataru "
How exactly is this a weakness ? like why wouldn't he summon them as Arm Monsters ?
Just noticed you posted the first NP, there's have a few thing i have to say:
1. The "sealing defeated enemies" thing can't be appliable to servants.
2. What is a Fangire ?
3. How does the life absorbtion work like ?
4."However due to their existence being tied to Castle Doran, their power drastically drop down unless they get summoned as Arm Monster to help Wataru "
How exactly is this a weakness ? like why wouldn't he summon them as Arm Monsters ?
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Imma gonna join. Save the spot for me.
Edit: Geh. It's full. Well nvm.
Edit: Geh. It's full. Well nvm.
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1.Imagine it like Kamen Rider-verse version of Shinza's Legion, the super diet Bepis version of that. After the enemy is defeated the soul will be suck away by Castle Doran and lock into a stasis, basically sealing them.Overlord775 said:
2.Fangire is basically the equivelent of Dead Apostle, but with way less hax.
3.Every Fangire is able to feast on the life force of human by biting down onto their neck, but Castle Doran can basically do a super succ from 50 meters away.
4.Well, while their occupation are Arms Monster, if they are summon that way they would fusion their conscious with Wataru, turn themselves into a weapon while sharing the ability that they have to their Master. While if they are summon in Fangire form they are basically another Servant. Should have worded it better.
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Read 1 and I gotta say, that completely ***** the war sideways by accident lol. Sealing the soul means it doesn't go to the Lesser Grail which means you cant even activate the Greater Grail.
As for 4 ..... summoning more Servants? That's really broken. Dunno the details but from what you said it sounds pretty OP.
As for 4 ..... summoning more Servants? That's really broken. Dunno the details but from what you said it sounds pretty OP.
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To continue the 2hu train started by Junko and Andy Assasin: Aya
Str
End Agl: A+ Mag: C Luck:B
Skills Precense Concealment A: Self Explanitory
Charisma C: A reflection of Aya's manipulative nature, she is willing to make exaggerated stories and occasionally lie for the sake of her paper but she has the Charisma and writing talent to often get away with it.
Godspeed A: Tengu are fast. Aya is also very fast. As the fight continues she will get faster. By the end she will be fast as ****.
Knowledge of the Tengu B: for obvious reasons. Aya has knowledge of ideas and abilities unknown to humans and only one or two servants.
Writing A: useless in combat but she can do a writing.
Nps
Wind God Girl: Aya can wield the wind completely and for many purposes, blowing away projectiles, flying, offense, making her even faster, etc. This has little to no Mana cost
Camera: A simple camera, mostly functions like a standard Camera, flashes from it however delete projectiles upon use though and the flash can be used as a good distraction.
Str
End Agl: A+ Mag: C Luck:BSkills Precense Concealment A: Self Explanitory
Charisma C: A reflection of Aya's manipulative nature, she is willing to make exaggerated stories and occasionally lie for the sake of her paper but she has the Charisma and writing talent to often get away with it.
Godspeed A: Tengu are fast. Aya is also very fast. As the fight continues she will get faster. By the end she will be fast as ****.
Knowledge of the Tengu B: for obvious reasons. Aya has knowledge of ideas and abilities unknown to humans and only one or two servants.
Writing A: useless in combat but she can do a writing.
Nps
Wind God Girl: Aya can wield the wind completely and for many purposes, blowing away projectiles, flying, offense, making her even faster, etc. This has little to no Mana cost
Camera: A simple camera, mostly functions like a standard Camera, flashes from it however delete projectiles upon use though and the flash can be used as a good distraction.
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They could only come out under full moon, and their territory basically stuck in Castle Doran. So they are gonna spend most of their time as scouts, his advisers, and most importantly power up.
Yes, but Doran can also unseal the soul that get succ in as well. It isnt a permanent thing he can undo it if he so desire.
Yes, but Doran can also unseal the soul that get succ in as well. It isnt a permanent thing he can undo it if he so desire.
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Name:Utsuho Reiuji
Gender: Female
Class: Berserker
Parameter:
STR:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
END:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
AGL:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
Mana:B (+1 to A from Blessing)
LCK:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
NP:EX
Class Skill:
Madness Enhancement:A
Personal Skill:
Amaterasu's Blessing A: The blessing of the divine sun goddess, as the shrine that house her's messenger and wield her power. Aside from increasing all her parameter by 1 rank, it give Okuu Burn Immunity and highly resistence to light damage, and giving Okuu clarity, not only of mind, but to see through Evil, and burn all maligant that reach her, dealing more damage the more Evil a person is, and provide high resistence against debuff, slowly burn it away until it's reduce to nothing.
Hell's Raven D: The raven that live and thrive at the depth of the blazing hell, where sinner goes to burn and cleanse all their sin. Able to naturally sense and absorb the power from the heat, miasma and darkness of hell, the more the environment closly resemble the Hell Of Blazing Fire, the stronger she is, as well as being able to heal faster from injury.
Airheadness (Birdbrain) A: The natural emptyheadedness of her that make her such a suitable vessel for the power of Yatagarasu. She doesn't think much and isn't very smart (aside from Nuclear Physics), so in turn she doesn't hestitate, as well as having mental immunity. It make her very carefree and obedient, and can even converse with word and reason freely, but that thoughtlessness of her also make it hard to give her precise and complex intrustion.
Main NP:
Yagatarasu's Leg: The Messenger of the Divine Sun
Rank: EX
Classification: Anti-Sun
The Right Leg of Fusion, The Left Leg of Decomposition, and The Control Third Leg...These set of NPs, representing the three legs of Yagatarasu, the incarnation of the sun, allow her to manipulate the ultimate energy, nuclear fusion, and channel the authority of Yagatarasu onto the outside world, through the shrine that is herself. The illusionary power yet obtained by human hand, it allow her to generate the same level of temperature and gravitational power of the highest heating power of the natural world that is the sun, allowing her to create the miracle of the divine sun, and even becoming it herself. It required fusion material as input for the power, but...
Secondaries NP:
Cape of Celestial Field
Rank: EX
Classification: Anti-Unit (Self)
The cape that she always wear, showing the glittering star field within it that seemingly move around with her...For unknown reason to herself, she discover that it also give her an unending supply of material to power her nuclear fusion power. Filled with joy, she stopped thinking deep about why it happen...
It's true form is a secret gift from Amaterasu herself, a little "World" of stars within a cape, used to protect her without her notice, so Utsuho have no way of activating it on her own. Upon mortal danger to herself however, the cape unfurl itself, creating a Reality Marble that bring her to that world, and robbing her of her conciousness, releasing Yatagarasu from it's slumber and take over her body. Within it, having full control of all the stars within this World and it power as it peak, it bombard the threat until it's gone, or until the time limit is up.
This is the draft for now
Gender: Female
Class: Berserker
Parameter:
STR:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
END:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
AGL:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
Mana:B (+1 to A from Blessing)
LCK:C (+1 to B from Blessing)
NP:EX
Class Skill:
Madness Enhancement:A
Personal Skill:
Amaterasu's Blessing A: The blessing of the divine sun goddess, as the shrine that house her's messenger and wield her power. Aside from increasing all her parameter by 1 rank, it give Okuu Burn Immunity and highly resistence to light damage, and giving Okuu clarity, not only of mind, but to see through Evil, and burn all maligant that reach her, dealing more damage the more Evil a person is, and provide high resistence against debuff, slowly burn it away until it's reduce to nothing.
Hell's Raven D: The raven that live and thrive at the depth of the blazing hell, where sinner goes to burn and cleanse all their sin. Able to naturally sense and absorb the power from the heat, miasma and darkness of hell, the more the environment closly resemble the Hell Of Blazing Fire, the stronger she is, as well as being able to heal faster from injury.
Airheadness (Birdbrain) A: The natural emptyheadedness of her that make her such a suitable vessel for the power of Yatagarasu. She doesn't think much and isn't very smart (aside from Nuclear Physics), so in turn she doesn't hestitate, as well as having mental immunity. It make her very carefree and obedient, and can even converse with word and reason freely, but that thoughtlessness of her also make it hard to give her precise and complex intrustion.
Main NP:
Yagatarasu's Leg: The Messenger of the Divine Sun
Rank: EX
Classification: Anti-Sun
The Right Leg of Fusion, The Left Leg of Decomposition, and The Control Third Leg...These set of NPs, representing the three legs of Yagatarasu, the incarnation of the sun, allow her to manipulate the ultimate energy, nuclear fusion, and channel the authority of Yagatarasu onto the outside world, through the shrine that is herself. The illusionary power yet obtained by human hand, it allow her to generate the same level of temperature and gravitational power of the highest heating power of the natural world that is the sun, allowing her to create the miracle of the divine sun, and even becoming it herself. It required fusion material as input for the power, but...
Secondaries NP:
Cape of Celestial Field
Rank: EX
Classification: Anti-Unit (Self)
The cape that she always wear, showing the glittering star field within it that seemingly move around with her...For unknown reason to herself, she discover that it also give her an unending supply of material to power her nuclear fusion power. Filled with joy, she stopped thinking deep about why it happen...
It's true form is a secret gift from Amaterasu herself, a little "World" of stars within a cape, used to protect her without her notice, so Utsuho have no way of activating it on her own. Upon mortal danger to herself however, the cape unfurl itself, creating a Reality Marble that bring her to that world, and robbing her of her conciousness, releasing Yatagarasu from it's slumber and take over her body. Within it, having full control of all the stars within this World and it power as it peak, it bombard the threat until it's gone, or until the time limit is up.
This is the draft for now
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@OP
Would you mind if I send you severals Servant sheets and have you pick the one you like?
Would you mind if I send you severals Servant sheets and have you pick the one you like?
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FFS sake Andy, give me time to respond to stuff
@Nice
I wouldn't mind, but do i on my message wall to not cluster the thread
@Nice
I wouldn't mind, but do i on my message wall to not cluster the thread
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@Potato
That's not even an Assassin tho
@Andy
First, that's a full blow divine spirit, which is not good in on itself because of how Nasuverse threats them
Second, the second NP is too strong as reality marbles are detached from reality, so she would pretty much untouchable.
Third, Hell's Raven is too strong for a D Rank Skill
That's not even an Assassin tho
@Andy
First, that's a full blow divine spirit, which is not good in on itself because of how Nasuverse threats them
Second, the second NP is too strong as reality marbles are detached from reality, so she would pretty much untouchable.
Third, Hell's Raven is too strong for a D Rank Skill
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All servants that are in a class have a reason or more to be there, she doesn't have any reason to be Assassin, does she ?
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Well to be fair, Kojiro's job wasnt to be an actual Asssassin. His job is just to be a gate guardian. The ACTUAL Assassin is what should be summoned in the first place.
Also how does my profile look, @Overlord?
Also how does my profile look, @Overlord?
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@Over
First, that's not exactly a Divine Spirit, but rather a Shrine that house part of it's corpse, making the situation more similar to Pseudo-Servant than anything. Second, game-wise not like I can used this to add Divinity without additional space, so what is the additional problem with it?
As for the rest, I will think way to balanced it out later.
Edit: Speaking of which, what should be Hell's Raven rank with the effect I speak of below?
First, that's not exactly a Divine Spirit, but rather a Shrine that house part of it's corpse, making the situation more similar to Pseudo-Servant than anything. Second, game-wise not like I can used this to add Divinity without additional space, so what is the additional problem with it?
As for the rest, I will think way to balanced it out later.
Edit: Speaking of which, what should be Hell's Raven rank with the effect I speak of below?
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True Name: Achilles
Class: Lancer
Parameters
STR: A (A+ with AotG)
END: A (A+ with AotG)
AGI: A (A+ with AotG)
MANA: C
LCK: D
N.P.: B+
Class Skills
Magic Resistance (C):
Personal Skills
Affection of the Goddess (B): Affection is from his mother, Thetis. Other than Mana and Luck, all stats are Ranked-Up.
Battle Continuation (A): Even after being struck in his weak points, the Achilles Heel and his heart, he continued fighting for a while.
Berserk (C): Having been summoned as the Lancer who charged the walls of Troy in his rage, his Bravery Skill has been replaced by this instead of Mad Enhancement due to being the wrong Class.
Lore Skills
Divinity (C): Achilles is the child of Sea Goddess Thetis and human hero Peleus.Insert "Only a Servant with Divinity can stand a chance" meme here
Noble Phantasms
Andreias Amarantos: Amaranth of the Brave
Diatrekhōn Astēr Lonkhē: Spear-tip of the Star Traversing the Skies
Duel Field
Agree and get Divine buffs negged. Can't be used on trash or women.
Appearance
This madlad
Backstory: The Iliad
Will add the master stuff later
Class: Lancer
Parameters
STR: A (A+ with AotG)
END: A (A+ with AotG)
AGI: A (A+ with AotG)
MANA: C
LCK: D
N.P.: B+
Class Skills
Magic Resistance (C):
Personal Skills
Affection of the Goddess (B): Affection is from his mother, Thetis. Other than Mana and Luck, all stats are Ranked-Up.
Battle Continuation (A): Even after being struck in his weak points, the Achilles Heel and his heart, he continued fighting for a while.
Lore Skills
Divinity (C): Achilles is the child of Sea Goddess Thetis and human hero Peleus.
Noble Phantasms
Andreias Amarantos: Amaranth of the Brave
- Rank: B
- Type: Anti-Unit (self)
- Range: 0
- Maximum number of targets: 1
Diatrekhōn Astēr Lonkhē: Spear-tip of the Star Traversing the Skies
- Rank: B++
- Type: Anti-Unit
- Range: 2~10
- Maximum number of targets: 1
Duel Field
Agree and get Divine buffs negged. Can't be used on trash or women.
Appearance
This madlad
Backstory: The Iliad
Will add the master stuff later
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That's some good stuff
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@Potato
Sesaki is only an Assassin because of Medea's medling
@Andy
The problem is the "Authorithy" thing, you know which in Nasu terms means high-end reality warping
For the rank fo those effects, it depends on the exact level and speed of the healing
also i don't like the sun-level thing, it's bad.
@Derp
Soul sucking thing CANNOT work on servants, it would make it impossible for anyone else to win the war if you defeat even a single servant
you cannot have a nigh.infinite supply of mana and mystic codes, you aren't frikkin Caster
remove also the thing of making more arm monsters, as that would give you a nigh-endless amount of servant-level beings
Also you first say that there's only 3 Monster Arms, but the you say there's multiple more in the castle, so which is it ?
One more thing, how fast is the life stealing of the castle ?
Sesaki is only an Assassin because of Medea's medling
@Andy
The problem is the "Authorithy" thing, you know which in Nasu terms means high-end reality warping
For the rank fo those effects, it depends on the exact level and speed of the healing
also i don't like the sun-level thing, it's bad.
@Derp
Soul sucking thing CANNOT work on servants, it would make it impossible for anyone else to win the war if you defeat even a single servant
you cannot have a nigh.infinite supply of mana and mystic codes, you aren't frikkin Caster
remove also the thing of making more arm monsters, as that would give you a nigh-endless amount of servant-level beings
Also you first say that there's only 3 Monster Arms, but the you say there's multiple more in the castle, so which is it ?
One more thing, how fast is the life stealing of the castle ?
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@Over
You think Okuu be actually smart enough to actually used Authority though, on top of her not being the actual Divine Spirit? Nuclear Fusion stuff is the only active thing she could do, with the best be creating a minisun. (...though well, Yatagarasu's whole thing is being the sun anyway lol)
Hm...I was planning maybe double the rate of healing, if she was actually in Hell of Blazing Fire? Otherwise it's in percentage.
Anti-Sun thing is more because she made mini-sun, with sun-related property. Output-wise it's probably Anti-Fortress
You think Okuu be actually smart enough to actually used Authority though, on top of her not being the actual Divine Spirit? Nuclear Fusion stuff is the only active thing she could do, with the best be creating a minisun. (...though well, Yatagarasu's whole thing is being the sun anyway lol)
Hm...I was planning maybe double the rate of healing, if she was actually in Hell of Blazing Fire? Otherwise it's in percentage.
Anti-Sun thing is more because she made mini-sun, with sun-related property. Output-wise it's probably Anti-Fortress
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@Andy
her second NP makes Yatagarasu himself take control, so you argument there holds no water
C Rank then
It's not the power output the problem, it's the level of gravity, which would suck anything remotly close to in to her Anti-Fortress level attacks
oh, and there's also the thing about her becoming a sun, which would make her a living anti-fortress NP, which i hope you realize would drain dry the master in like seconds
her second NP makes Yatagarasu himself take control, so you argument there holds no water
C Rank then
It's not the power output the problem, it's the level of gravity, which would suck anything remotly close to in to her Anti-Fortress level attacks
oh, and there's also the thing about her becoming a sun, which would make her a living anti-fortress NP, which i hope you realize would drain dry the master in like seconds
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That's how it's balanced.
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The soul suck can be removed.
The supply of Mystic Codes isn't that much. There are actually only like 3 inside, 2 can be considered a transformation trinket though, kinda like Kivat.
Can remove the Arm Monster making part for sure.
Mistake on that part about more Arm Monsters.
It take a while actually. Since it's primary function is use as a base as mana supply for Kiva than anything. Around 5 minutes to avtually sucking someone dry.
The supply of Mystic Codes isn't that much. There are actually only like 3 inside, 2 can be considered a transformation trinket though, kinda like Kivat.
Can remove the Arm Monster making part for sure.
Mistake on that part about more Arm Monsters.
It take a while actually. Since it's primary function is use as a base as mana supply for Kiva than anything. Around 5 minutes to avtually sucking someone dry.
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True, though that's in mortal danger, and it's in a limited time in a limited space. I would need to tweak the RM thing though, or maybe remove the Yatagarasu thing too...
So I should decrease the regen to about 50% faster then.
The gravity thing is only when she become a sun though, and that is stationary. Though I'm not arguing about the mana problem in sun-mode... even if the control of the reaction itself is small, the gravity is not.
True, though that's in mortal danger, and it's in a limited time in a limited space. I would need to tweak the RM thing though, or maybe remove the Yatagarasu thing too...
So I should decrease the regen to about 50% faster then.
The gravity thing is only when she become a sun though, and that is stationary. Though I'm not arguing about the mana problem in sun-mode... even if the control of the reaction itself is small, the gravity is not.
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@Nice
You said those Mystic Codes are almost on par with a noble phantasm
Also make it 10 minutes
@Andy
35%
it's still a problem because that would allow you to basically istakill anything within the gravity's range
You said those Mystic Codes are almost on par with a noble phantasm
Also make it 10 minutes
@Andy
35%
it's still a problem because that would allow you to basically istakill anything within the gravity's range
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Yep, it is basically an upgrade to Kivat's ability. But have severals conditions to activate. The other is a transformation trinket while the other is a sword.
The last one is a utility item that increased the speed and protection of his mount.
The last one is a utility item that increased the speed and protection of his mount.
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@Nice
The NP does already enought, the Mystic Code aren't getting in.
@Andy
Range being several dozens kilometers, which is very much a problem
also i don't see why it would be a suicide attack
and one more thing, Shiro wanted to join, so he's probably going to be Saber.
The NP does already enought, the Mystic Code aren't getting in.
@Andy
Range being several dozens kilometers, which is very much a problem
also i don't see why it would be a suicide attack
and one more thing, Shiro wanted to join, so he's probably going to be Saber.
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I see, I see. I will accepted that.
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Shiro is now Saber, as he told me over on Discord he wants the spot
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