Possible Anos Voldigoad Intelligence upgrade - Maou Gakuin

[InfiniteCosmology]

So, here's a draft for Anos Voldigoad's new intelligence rating justifications:

At least Extraordinary Genius (Anos memorized and learned a complicated magic formula in 1 second which took Sasha 1 month to learn, and he then proceeded to complete the formula which even the creator wouldn't have been able to do for another 1000 years after witnessing it only once. Anos deciphered hundreds of thousands of magic characters with one look which would take an accomplished mage a whole day to do. Anos is knowledgeable about the atomic structure of objects, and when he uses creation magic to create an object, he doesn't just create the object, but he creates each individual atom that makes up the object. Anos has mastered almost all types of magic and also developed Origin Magic, a completely new and powerful type of magic. Anos read and perfectly memorised 1,799 books in mere moments. After witnessing the spell Grasping Magic Hand <Rayon> being used only once, Anos learned and recreated the completely unknown magic characters and formula instantly. Anos is capable of performing 100 parallel thoughts simultaneously even under high pressure with Thought Parallel Possession <Likness>, which even magicians that mastered this spell is incapable of. Anos consistently develops new and powerful spells and also copies and improves upon the already existing spells of his opponents during combat)

Fine, but origin magic was created by Anos in chapter 7. Link to that and it would be better if you could add some of TMC's posts.

 

[InfiniteCosmology]

So, taking Ant's words, i think some of Anos's feats reach Supergenius level.

 

[InfiniteCosmology]

Would it be fine to apply this, or is more input required?

If enough input has been given, could you please unlock Anos Voldigoad's profile page so that I can apply the changes?

You may add some of TMC's inputs.

 

[Antvasima]

So, here's a draft for Anos Voldigoad's new intelligence rating justifications:

At least Extraordinary Genius (Anos memorized and learned a complicated magic formula in 1 second which took Sasha 1 month to learn, and he then proceeded to complete the formula which even the creator wouldn't have been able to do for another 1000 years after witnessing it only once. Anos deciphered hundreds of thousands of magic characters with one look which would take an accomplished mage a whole day to do. Anos is knowledgeable about the atomic structure of objects, and when he uses creation magic to create an object, he doesn't just create the object, but he creates each individual atom that makes up the object. Anos has mastered almost all types of magic and also developed Origin Magic, a completely new and powerful type of magic. Anos read and perfectly memorised 1,799 books in mere moments. After witnessing the spell Grasping Magic Hand <Rayon> being used only once, Anos learned and recreated the completely unknown magic characters and formula instantly. Anos is capable of performing 100 parallel thoughts simultaneously even under high pressure with Thought Parallel Possession <Likness>, which even magicians that mastered this spell is incapable of. Anos consistently develops new and powerful spells and also copies and improves upon the already existing spells of his opponents during combat)

This seems fine, but you need to make sure that the grammar is correct.

 

[imZer0Null]

This seems fine, but you need to make sure that the grammar is correct.

Okay. Are there any sentences that seem to have incorrect grammar in the proposed draft?
I tried my best to write it as grammatically correct as possible, but since English isn't my first language, I might've made some mistakes.

 

[imZer0Null]

You may add some of TMC's inputs.

I'm thankful that TMC provided more intelligence feats, but most of them are basically just specific repeats of similar feats already listed, and so to not make the justifications unnecessarily large, I decided to not add any feats similar to already listed feats.

 

[Cosmic_King_of_SAO]

Okay. Are there any sentences that seem to have incorrect grammar in the proposed draft?
I tried my best to write it as grammatically correct as possible, but since English isn't my first language, I might've made some mistakes.

Only the last link stating "which even magicians that mastered this spell is incapable of" instead of "is" it should be "are" since magicians means that it's plural. Also the statement of him "mastering almost all types of magic" should just be changed to "mastering almost all of magic". But other than that everything is correct.

 

[imZer0Null]

Only the last link stating "which even magicians that mastered this spell is incapable of" instead of "is" it should be "are" since magicians means that it's plural. Also the statement of him "mastering almost all types of magic" should just be changed to "mastering almost all of magic". But other than that everything is correct.

Okay. Thank you.

 

[imZer0Null]

This seems fine, but you need to make sure that the grammar is correct.

I believe I've fixed the grammar in the draft.

So, here's a draft for Anos Voldigoad's new intelligence rating justifications:

At least Extraordinary Genius (Anos memorized and learned a complicated magic formula in 1 second which took Sasha 1 month to learn, and he then proceeded to complete the formula which even the creator wouldn't have been able to do for another 1000 years after witnessing it only once. Anos deciphered hundreds of thousands of magic characters with one look which would take an accomplished mage a whole day to do. Anos is knowledgeable about the atomic structure of objects, and when he uses creation magic to create an object, he doesn't just create the object but also the atoms that make up the object. Anos has mastered almost all of magic and also developed Origin Magic, a completely new and powerful type of magic. Anos read and perfectly memorised 1,799 books in mere moments. After witnessing the spell Grasping Magic Hand <Rayon> being used only once, Anos learned and recreated the completely unknown magic characters and formula instantly. Anos is capable of performing 100 parallel thoughts simultaneously even under high pressure with Thought Parallel Possession <Likness>, which even magicians that mastered this spell are incapable of. Anos consistently develops new and powerful spells and also copies and improves upon the already existing spells of his opponents during combat)

Would it be fine to apply this, or is more input required?

If enough input has been given, could you please unlock Anos Voldigoad's profile page so that I can apply the changes?

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. Are there any sentences that seem to have incorrect grammar in the proposed draft?
I tried my best to write it as grammatically correct as possible, but since English isn't my first language, I might've made some mistakes.

After checking, the only possible error is the word "likness" (rather than "likeness").

 

[Cosmic_King_of_SAO]

After checking, the only possible error is the word "likness" (rather than "likeness").

I think that's because it's the name of the spell and not an actual word.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. Never mind. It is probably fine to apply then.

 

[imZer0Null]

After checking, the only possible error is the word "likness" (rather than "likeness").

<Likness> is the spell name, and not an actual word.

Since this seems to be accepted, could you please unlock Anos Voldigoad's profile so that I can apply the changes?

 

[Dereck03]

Until finally... It was already taking too long for a few simple additions...

 

[Antvasima]

I will unlock the page. Tell me here when you are done.

 

[imZer0Null]

I will unlock the page. Tell me here when you are done.

You can lock Anos Voldigoad's profile page, and also close this thread.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay.