Minor Medaka Box CRT

[DragonEmperor23]

I finished the series recently and looked through the pages and noticed some things that could use rewording. For one, Zenkichi's fourth key. It lists Contradictory Conjuction twice in a redundant matter.

"Can make the impossible possible (Via Contradictory Conjunction), Probability Manipulation (Via Contradictory Conjunction)"

I propose that it is changed to

Probability Manipulation (Can make the impossible possible via Contradictory Conjunction.)

And the second thing I wanted to mention was the name of Medaka Kurokami's last key. When I looked at it, I was confused at what it was supposed to mean as it didn't match the formatting of the names of any other keys I had seen before. "With her strongest known skills" didn't make sense to me since her skills aren't like standard equipment in the sense that sometimes she has certain ones and other times she has different ones. I asked Iap about it and he explained to me that it was supposed to represent the Medaka that used walls of Skills (Similar to how Ajimu does) near the end of the manga. With that cleared up, I propose that the name of the key should be changed to "100 Flowers Ru". This makes more sense to me as it is the name of the mini arc where Medaka uses those Skills in for the first time and sounds more professional than the current name of the key.

 

[Paul_Frank]

These changes make sense to me

 

[Guardspace]

That fine I think.

 

[Iapitus_The_Impaler]

Makes sense to me

 

[DragonEmperor23]

Also, Kamome Tsurubami should have Heat removed from his list of names, that's what he called Zenkichi, not what he was called.

 

[Iapitus_The_Impaler]

Is that actually the case? I feel like I definitely remember them calling him that at a few points

 

[DragonEmperor23]

I remember Kamome calling Zenkichi that because of Heat coming from the Hito in Hitoyoshi. I'll check.

 

[DragonEmperor23]

Here.

 

[Iapitus_The_Impaler]

I'm starting to think this is a massive translation error, because I also see that Kamome also said "Act like you know me and call me Bami" and then Zenkichi says "heat or Bami it doesn't really bother me." Which seems like they both have the potential nickname of Heat. Wtf. Tsurubami can also get the nickname heat because Bamly (said the same way as Bami) also means heat. I'm so confused

 

[LSirLancelotDuLacl]

Its more just saying he really doesn't care about this nickname nonsense.

~~You should have never removed the redundancy, it made it even more lore compliant, reeeeee~~

 

[WHYNAUT]

I agree with these changes

 

[Firephoenixearl]

Yeah these seem fine.

 

[Antvasima]

This mostly seems fine, but I do not know if "100 Flowers Run" is an acceptable title. Perhaps we should just call it "End of the Series" instead, or use "With her strongest end of series skills"?

 

[TriforcePower1]

I agree with the OP

Also, congrats for reading it. I hope you liked it.

 

[DragonEmperor23]

@Ant

My logic was that it would work since we have other characters like Goku and Naruto that use the names of arcs as the name of their keys. Other there any other profiles that use "End of the Series" as names of keys? "With her strongest end of series skills" is a bit of a long name and places more emphasis on those skills than anything else the character has. Also, I think "End of Series" might cause people to mistake that to being the Medaka from the 10 years later at the end of the manga (Unless that is what you meant.).

@Triforce

I did, yeah. It was a good read.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. If that was the name of the storyarc, it should be fine to use.

 

[DragonEmperor23]

Oh, my apologies, I got the name wrong. The name of the arc was Bouquet Toss To The Future.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay.

 

[DragonEmperor23]

I have edited Zenkichi's page, but Medaka's is locked.

 

[Antvasima]

I will unlock it. Tell me here when you are done.

 

[DragonEmperor23]

I have finished editing her page.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. What else is left to do here?

 

[DragonEmperor23]

I have edited Kamome's profile, the CRT has been concluded.

 

[Iapitus_The_Impaler]

Calling Medaka's last key End of Series has the issues of her end of series self technically being the depowered version self from the far future

 

[DragonEmperor23]

Right, which is why I had it named after the specific arc that takes place before the ten year timeskip.

 

[Antvasima]

So should I close this thread?

 

[DragonEmperor23]

Yes.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay.