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General Page Review & Development Thread (Unofficial)

His weaknesses section should be changed to the following:

Weaknesses: Completely insane, commonly hallucinating. A man who was removed from their mother's womb by the doctor is able to kill him normally. This likely would also apply to women and non-humans
 
How many joules can take to reduce to dust something like the Popocatepetl (a mexican mountain formation that´s iconic in Mexico, where the maya stuff comes from)?
 
I don't know if that's necessarily the mountain. Some of the mountains relevant to Zipacna, Cabrakan, and Vucab Caquix are listed in my translation if you want to see them tho.
 
Likely assumptions can be made for the calc, one for striking the side of it, and another one for the top of it.
 
There´s a minor grammar error at the "Pseudo Black Hole Creation" at the Powers and Abilities section, but outside of that it looks good enought to be posted.
 
You should explain the "higher" part in the AP description

Outside of that it looks like a great profile
 
You should capitalize some more words, for example, it´s spelled "High-Low", no "high-low"
 
The origin section should just say the same of the series, going into the actual name of the installment should at least include the name of the series itself, in this case, well, SMT

Outside of that it looks great.
 
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