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Is that Arceus's concept art?
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Ok, as for appearance: He wears a cape and has hair that covers part of his eye, due to having a lot of power in one. He has a katana located underneath his cape, which he sometimes takes off during battle. He is from a different dimension, which was located near Earth before it went bye.An appearance description would be appreciated, as well as saying if you're from this world or some other one. The power is fine though it doesn't need to be as limited as it is.
Sorry, but all I can think of is: “I graduated top of my class in the navy seals, and have over 300 confirmed kills.”-Spongebob Squarepants•Expert U.S. navy seal.
Firstly, the abilities are connected directly with the mind/soul, which can reasonably be called a power.Reaper, did you even read the rules ?
for first thing, "the abilities have to be connected into what can reasonably be called a power."
secondly, "No particularly esoteric stuff for powers yet (Concept manip, Plot and such)"
Thirdly, "thought based instant kills and such are a no go
Thats an easy changeThis is a post-apocalyptic sci-fi setting. There are no souls and there is no actual magic. Can you figure out why your character doesn't fit in from there?
If you want to get an idea of what kind of powers do fit in, take a look at the characters of other people.
That's waaaaaaaaaaay too lax, as them affecting the same thing isn't enough as they are effectivelly wildly different powersFirstly, the abilities are connected directly with the mind/soul, which can reasonably be called a power.
concept hax isn't allowed on principle, also that seems like you are trying to cheese tbhSecondly, I didn't know EE, concept manip, and death manip that took long enough to get the woman killed dozens of times over(has to channel for 20-30 seconds) would count on that
the death and EE definitelly sound thought basedThirdly, nothing there is thought-based, the fastest things are Hellfire manip and teleportation and they take a second channel time, and considering like 90% of people are going to be comparable or faster then the woman a projectile or beam isn't hard to dodge.
Calamitas depends on the amount of energy in the environment as her power source, if she is in an area without energy she would be left as a Calamity without any powers.
Death and EE sound thought-based because I ripped their descriptions from Magnus the Red, who is almost entirely thought-based haxThat's waaaaaaaaaaay too lax, as them affecting the same thing isn't enough as they are effectivelly wildly different powers
like, that's the same level of connection as saying that electricity manipulation and ice manipulation can be under the same power because they "affect matter"
concept hax isn't allowed on principle, also that seems like you are trying to cheese tbh
the death and EE definitelly sound thought based
also
You can't have that, as Calamities are powered by energy from their bodies, and that isn't something that you can change as it's tied to their intrensic nature
Just did thatyou need to tie them all together in one power and explain how it works.
Currently it's just a list of separate abilities that vaguely follow a theme.
And apparently I suck at explaining it too, Since it would be a waste of everyone's to write an essay to try and explain it(which I probably could) I should probably drop this. Which shows that if I can't simplify it I usually begin going in circles, which is what I'm doing here just thinking about itSo that doesn't explain: hellfire manipulation, illusion creation, telepathy, existence erasure, flight corruption, chaos manipulation, clairvoyance and teleportation.
Also why would life-based powers and matter hax fall under the same power. It doesn't explain how it accomplishes these, just that it does.