Articles clean-up reports

[Kavpeny]

Please report any poorly constructed articles on this thread, along with a link to the page in question.

This includes locked profiles with serious grammar/spelling/sentence structure errors and typos, but you are supposed to fix such problems within unlocked pages on your own.

Keep in mind that response from the staff might not be immediate. However, response will come eventually, and your reporting will be highly appreciated.

Note:

Only report links to pages of sub-standard quality, not ones which you feel are unnecessary, or that are stubs. Handle these types of articles via the "Profile Deletion Requests" threads instead.

 

[Kavpeny]

Linked articles can be character profiles, weapon profiles, Verse pages, Category pages, terms, powers and abilities, etc.

Kindly do not hesitate to bring to attention a different type of page.

 

[Basilisk1995]

Looks like nobody ever requested an article to be cleaned up here.

Anyway I have started a project. I am gonna use the following two search results and turn all Destructive Capacity into Attack Potency and turn all Striking Power into Striking Strength.There are a lot of pages with this problem so it will take long. I will let everyone know when I am done by posting here.

Destructive Capacity

Striking Power

If anyone helps me out with this project I will be really greatful to him/her.

 

[TheMightyRegulator]

Okay Basilisk. If I see any such mistakes, I will change them as well.

 

[Amelia_Lonelyheart]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Champion_of_Cyrodiil

Formatting is kind of a mess, though from what I can tell its solid other than that.

 

[Antoniofer]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Straight_Cougar

It is some disorganized, and I think that should be unlocked too cuz isn't a tier 2 character or above

 

[Antoniofer]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/The_Glory, anothe tier 1 character who need more info/clean

 

[Ryukama]

This profile is in definite need of a clean up.

 

[Basilisk1995]

@Ryukama I will do it.

 

[Ryukama]

Thank you very much Basilisk.

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Titanfall_(verse)

Pictures need to be cleaned up and organized properly.

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Peak_Human

Section: 'In terms of speed' has grammar errors. Should be outru, not outra, which is for past tense. And it should say a wild animal, or wild animals after the 'or'.

"Run fast enough to outran a bike or wild animal."

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

There is also this inconsistency:

-Sentence goes here.

-Sentence goes here

The proper way to write with bullet points or dashes in lists it to leave no period at the end because of the preceding statement and colon.

i.e. "A Peak Human can at least do some of these feats:"

 

[CrossverseCrisis]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Peak_Human
Section: 'In terms of speed' has grammar errors. Should be outru, not outra, which is for past tense. And it should say a wild animal, or wild animals after the 'or'.

"Run fast enough to outran a bike or wild animal."

Done.

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

There is another one found on the page.

 

[CrossverseCrisis]

@SoyHop: Take out the periods after, correct? If so, i can do that then i suppose....

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

Yes. That would look cleaner and would be appropriate.

 

[CrossverseCrisis]

Okay. Anything else?

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

Not that I can see on that page, but Louis Cyr appears twice in two segments. Maybe it would seem less repetitive if someone were to find a different subject for the endurance or strength feats. Horses aren't exactly a universal benchmark everyone will get, you know? Other than that, the page looks great.

 

[CrossverseCrisis]

@SoyHop: Well i took out the Louis example but have taken out the periods on the ones with the dash points (-).

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

Okay. It looks grammatically correct and well organized. If Hop finds any other pages with errors he will return, Thanks, Cross.

 

[CrossverseCrisis]

@SoyHop: No problem.

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Advise_to_the_staff_of_the_VsBattles_wiki

Title needs a change

Don't know if anyone noticed this, (I'm a jerk for grammar, sorry) but this page should be spelt "Advice" instead of "Advise", as "advice" refers to tips and suggestions (which I assume the page is about/for), whereas "advise" mean to give orders to, or to remain aware of.

Sorry I'm a linguistics freak and I don't wish to bother you guys over petty things, but I do not like seeing errors that I have no power in correcting.

 

[CrossverseCrisis]

That's more of Antvasima's stuff since....well that's the thing he made for the staff before he actually fully retires and leaves.

@Hop

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

Okay, i posted it on his wall.

 

[Antvasima]

Well, it seems like advise is a verb, whereas advice is a nou, so I adjusted the page title.

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/The_Great_Evil_Beast

This profile is poorly made.

No key, no reason for stats given (or links). Is very amatuer.

 

[Hop_Hoppington-Hoppenhiemer]

Anyone who knows ofthis page , can they fix the stats, and grammar? Hop, would but has no time to research the character.

 

[Battlemania]

this seems to not have a full template on the scaling. No AP

 

[Antvasima]

I changed the wording.

 

[CrossverseCrisis]

That is one near empty page of Mistress Love. Like it doesn't even have the other standards stats like all pages here have?

 

[Antvasima]

Well, Thanos with the Infinity Gauntlet rated her in-between Galactus and Master Order, in terms of power level, but the handbook statistics place her much lower, if I remember correctly.

 

[Battlemania]

I noticed several others lacking space similar to Mistress Love in Marvels page.

 

[Monarch_Laciel]

There's a spelling error on Yakou Madara 's page

"weather" instead of "whether"

 

[Fllflourine]

The Great Dragon (Wakfu) features the same powers and abilities twice

 

[Nico-v11]

Death (Regular Show)

His tier says 9-B but his AP is Town level, his durability is wall level. Town level physically too at that. I don't watch Regular Show but this doesn't seem right.

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Death_(Regular_Show)

 

[Antvasima]

@Nico

It is probably better if you start a content revision thread.

 

[Nico-v11]

Sure

 

[Jamesthetaker]

Is this still open? Rei Ogami page somehow has Yuragi-Sou No Yunna San picture.

 

[Antvasima]

It seems like we use the same image as the Code Breaker wiki:

http://codebreaker.wikia.com/wiki/Rei_Ogami#Manga