Ajimu Najimi Profile's redone

[The_Causality]

Well then everything is in the title, basically, i've remaked Ajimu's profile on a blog since the current was pretty bad. So basically, i want to know if we can use the new profile instead of the current one, that's all.

PS: I've maked the abilities as good as possible, but some was only avalaible on Superpower wiki.

 

[Firephoenixearl]

Definitively agree. The current one looks lazy af.

 

[Iapitus_The_Impaler]

Very very well done. I agree

 

[Dark_warrior_100]

It looks good

 

[QuasiYuri]

It lacks a few abilities but it's very good, well done. I agree with using it too.

 

[Yobo_Blue]

Honestly?

I'm sure it's good from the perspective of a MB fan, but from the perspective of a profile maker.....

There's way to many formatting errors and the language used sounds weird and informal as hell. It's not at all a good look. Sorry.

 

[Yobo_Blue]

Also, a few abilities look like they need to be looked over individually.

 

[Firephoenixearl]

Dude, it's a draft.

 

[Yobo_Blue]

And a draft needs criticism. Your point?

 

[The_Causality]

Formatting Error? i'am pretty sure i've not make those kind of mistake, the language too

And for the abilities, i've doing my best to not make mistake ion this side, but since this profile is still banned from matches, abilities are less important (but still important tho)

 

[Yobo_Blue]

Also, don't use the Superpower wiki. Like seriously. I don't believe there's a actual rule about it, but they have very different standards, it clutters the wiki text, and its generally frowned upon.

 

[Yobo_Blue]

Formatting Error? i'am pretty sure i've not make those kind of mistake, the language too

And for the abilities, i've doing my best to not make mistake ion this side, but since this profile is still banned from matches, abilities are less important (but still important tho)

I really hate to be the one to break this to you, but there are a large amount of grammatical errors.

 

[Yobo_Blue]

Also, I don't think a few things you added are supposed to be there under current formatting rules. There's no need for the giant peach colored block in the techniques section.

 

[The_Causality]

Also, don't use the Superpower wiki. Like seriously. I don't believe there's a actual rule about it, but they have very different standards, it clutters the wiki text, and its generally frowned upon.

About Superpower wiki, some of Ajimu's abilities doesn't fit with our current abilities, so i've used some of their power when i had no choice

Yea for the grammatical error, i'll correct them if i have time (or ask some help)

 

[Yobo_Blue]

For example, which ones don't fit? You really don't need to list every single one by the way.

 

[Iapitus_The_Impaler]

The super power wiki can be fine to link under certain circumstances, and Ajimu's profile is purely for indexing purposes with no direct VS aspect at all, so I don't see the issue here

 

[Yobo_Blue]

The super power wiki can be fine to link under certain circumstances, and Ajimu's profile is purely for indexing purposes with no direct VS aspect at all, so I don't see the issue here

It may be for indexing purposes, but it really depends on what needs to be linked.

 

[The_Causality]

For example, which ones don't fit? You really don't need to list every single one by the way.

IIRC, she has weird abilities such has Day and Night Manipulation, Color Manipulation Mirror Manipulation and a few other

But yea, Lapitus is correct.

 

[Yobo_Blue]

Those all seem to be covered under Light Manipulation, no?

 

[The_Causality]

Those all seem to be covered under Light Manipulation, no?

Not really.

 

[Yobo_Blue]

They kind of are though.

Anyway, the stuff about formatting, grammar, and language still stands.

 

[The_Causality]

They kind of are though.
Anyway, the stuff about formatting, grammar, and language still stands.

They can be "similar" but it's pretty different

I guess boyo, formatting seem correct but grammar can be a problem yea

 

[Yobo_Blue]

The images should really just be the earlier renders.

 

[Matthew_Schroeder]

I don't think we can accept putting all abilities never demonstrated on the profile.

 

[Wokistan]

I don't see whats the issue when it's outright stated she has them. Maybe she won't use them in character or whatever but they're still profile usab;e. Even moreso since she can't have vs battles. The bolding hurts my eyes though

 

[Antvasima]

Listing all of the abilities should probably be fine, but formatting and grammar errors, and links to the Superpower wiki, are not.

 

[The_Causality]

Well then, you can close this thread until I fix all of them.

Thanks you.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. No problem.