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Aeternos RP

(You didnt say anywhere to have shrinked in the comment)

"Why you--"

Manipulating the energy construct used to restrain him, Elide would ragdoll him around to the ground then at the walls, before swimging him to a wooden shack
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
(You didnt say anywhere to have shrinked in the comment)

"Why you--"

Manipulating the energy construct used to restrain him, Elide would ragdoll him around to the ground then at the walls, before swimging him to a wooden shack
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Momoku grew once again and dodges the attack once again, but this time, he threw multiple projectiles of flesh contained with dirt as cover. Knowing he would see her using Layout, he sends one of his flesh remotely back to the lab and crafts a weapon to defeat her. The flesh snuck in the keycard and began using the equipment from the lab: bombs, acid, poison gas, smoke bombs, and sticky fluid. It then began its metamorphosis as it fused with the items and began storing them inside.
"Analysing attack pattern 90% complete, use of energy must be draining. We should tire her out and attack from there" thought Okane to Momoku as they both attack her with the plan in mind, remaining calm.

He knows what she thinks as he already observed her way back when the group met Morgan, he also saw her first fight and also saw her skills grow. He also knows about her abilities thanks to Alex, it was all part of his plan. He knew she would fight him knowing she'd get angrier, so he prepared a prototype weapon. Although it was incomplete, he never had the intention of killing her. He never even want to injure her.

He felt all the voices of the past, the cries of her family, the screams of his friends, and the thousands upon thousands of Cedeist begging for salvation gave him the push he needs. Though he thought he was alone, the past and the future further push him to win this fight. He wasn't really angry at Elide, no, he is simply showing what he's capable of and that he is trustworthy.

He breathes deeply, as his body relaxes and his muscles contract as he morphs his legs into horse legs, the whips changing into bows, and the bladed whips becoming shields. He then swung his high-frequency blade, causing a massive airwave that sliced buildings into ribbons, burning them to a crisp as their molecular bonds began to weaken.
(sorry forgot, I got into the RP a bit too much)
 
(You know that you are restrained still from her energy, so what you even dodge there when she swings you by controlling what keeps you trapped with, also as i said earlier, you didnt say you shrinked in the comment, so why say you grew again? Only in your OOC comment you said, so dont add things that you didnt say in the reply for the fight)
 
(........Now you deleted the last reply and made a new one with more stuff in it.......seriously......imma be honest, but this becomes unenjoyable with how you RP so far in this and how you change and add things, delete comments and resend them again later, pretty much ignore unless pointed out what the other RPer does in the comment to make your character nearly untouchable, not even acknowledging what they done to yours)
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
(Fix these already then and dont resend the same thing later, its confusing and uneeded)
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(If your gonna ask again how did he get out. It's because he slices his body from the inside out. Since Elide only left his head, he shrink parts of himself and amputates parts of his body just so that no restraint befalls on him. I don't wanna bother putting another reply since you said It yourself that you want me to fix it.)
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
(........Now you deleted the last reply and made a new one with more stuff in it.......seriously......imma be honest, but this becomes unenjoyable with how you RP so far in this and how you change and add things, delete comments and resend them again later, pretty much ignore unless pointed out what the other RPer does in the comment to make your character nearly untouchable, not even acknowledging what they done to yours)
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(Forgive me mate. I have preset messages lol. I ain't ruining the fun. He also isn't untouchable. I'm so confused)
 
Backbackback said:
(If your gonna ask again how did he get out. It's because he slices his body from the inside out. Since Elide only left his head, he shrink parts of himself and amputates parts of his body just so that no restraint befalls on him. I don't wanna bother putting another reply since you said It yourself that you want me to fix it.)
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(Im not talking about that, this is irrelevant for the convo, also talk in just one message not multiple)

Backbackback said:
(Forgive me mate. I have preset messages lol. I ain't ruining the fun. He also isn't untouchable. I'm so confused)
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(Dude you had a comment after i told you to fix the issues, then you deleted and added a new one with more stuff in it, you basically cheat with this, imagine if others deleted their comment to write something else in the new one

You barely acknowledge in the comments the other character actions, let alone barely explain how you dealt with them)
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
(Im not talking about that, this is irrelevant for the convo, also talk in just one message not multiple)


(Dude you had a comment after i told you to fix the issues, then you deleted and added a new one with more stuff in it, you basically cheat with this, imagine if others deleted their comment to write something else in the new one

You barely acknowledge in the comments the other character actions, let alone barely explain how you dealt with them)
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(Ay, ay ay. I put paragraphs explaining how he dealt with them dawg. I do consider their stuff mate, calm down. I apologize my guy)
 
Backbackback said:
(Ay, ay ay. I put paragraphs explaining how he dealt with them dawg. I do consider their stuff mate, calm down. I apologize my guy)
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(On Elide leaping at you at the start there was no explaination that you took her attacks or if you did your move before her, just that you did, only after i asked you on it, you clarified, next you didnt acknowledge regarding how she pulled you down and fell on you, then saying in an OOC you shrinked when you didnt have that in the actual comment, then later said you grew from that, then you got her swinging you around that you initially replied with dodging that which made no sense)

(Like stick with what you write and send, without ignoring the other one actions)
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
(On Elide leaping at you at the start there was no explaination that you took her attacks or if you did your move before her, just that you did, only after i asked you on it, you clarified, next you didnt acknowledge regarding how she pulled you down and fell on you, then saying in an OOC you shrinked when you didnt have that in the actual comment, then later said you grew from that, then you got her swinging you around that you initially replied with dodging that which made no sense)

(Like stick with what you write and send, without ignoring the other one actions)
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(Thanks bud. THis is my first time)
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
Elide shouts to Momoku from the distance after she swinged him on the wooden shack earlier

"Had enough?"
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"I'm not that old, so no," says Momoku

"Attack Pattern Analysis 80% complete. Just improvise first on the defense and focus on the energy constructs. I'll use Layout to find materials, focus on the defensive for at least 2 minutes" said Okane to Momoku as he begin to take the defensive, creating shields and bows to block the restraints and other projectiles
 
"Lets see if you are man enough to last a couple rounds with a young woman then..."

She spreads her arms and her palms start glowing with lunar energy

"If you really wanna prove you arent a failure as a warrior and that you arent just all talk, you better be capable to withstand an attack this weak then!"

She charges energy in her palms to prepare for the incoming blast, Elide challenges Momoku pride in here basically now
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
"Lets see if you are man enough to last a couple rounds with a young woman then..."

She spreads her arms and her palms start glowing with lunar energy

"If you really wanna prove you arent a failure as a warrior and that you arent just all talk, you better be capable to withstand an attack this weak then!"

She charges energy in her palms to prepare for the incoming blast, Elide challenges Momoku pride in here basically now
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"Don't you have a date with Drake? You're really into this huh?" says Momoku.

"100% complete! Countermeasures are ready" says Okane to Momoku as they develop a flesh shield to block the attack.

"Momoku! Use the concrete from the building to block it" says Okane to Momoku, as they then mix in concrete with his flesh to make it harder.
 
"Tsk!"

Clenched her teeth upon hearing him say something like that

"Oh you are so asking for this!"

Says in her mind, as she gathers a lot of energy in the palms, the blast she would be firing would not be weak as claimed, she was looking to make it hurt and make him unable to continue for long from it

"EAT THIS!!"

She would slam her arms against one another, bringing her palms near each other, as the energy gathered in both mix together into a very wide and large beam, firing with unimaginable speed and heat intensity against the shield, slowly melting through it
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
"Tsk!"

Clenched her teeth upon hearing him say something like that

"Oh you are so asking for this!"

Says in her mind, as she gathers a lot of energy in the palms, the blast she would be firing would not be weak as claimed, she was looking to make it hurt and make him unable to continue for long from it

"EAT THIS!!"

She would slam her arms against one another, bringing her palms near each other, as the energy gathered in both mix together into a very wide and large beam, firing with unimaginable speed and heat intensity against the shield, slowly melting through it
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"Yep! Hit the bull's eye right there!" says Momoku before he began running to side and hiding at one spot whilst gathering more material using Layout to try and deflect the energy as he slowly raises it up and prevent it from hitting any bystanders.

"C'mon! I made it as a joke! Nothing personal!" shouts Momoku, being nonchalant
 
Elide sprinted in front of him with one good leg push around the time he finishes his sentence, too fast to process the fast movement performed and hits him in the stomach as she bursted like a bullet at him, now she was barely holding back on Momoku

"Joke on that!"

The hit would send him back so fast it shaves the ground he makes contact with
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
Elide sprinted in front of him with one good leg push around the time he finishes his sentence, too fast to process the fast movement performed and hits him in the stomach as she bursted like a bullet at him, now she was barely holding back on Momoku

"Joke on that!"

The hit would send him back so fast it shaves the ground he makes contact with
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Little did she know, he had anticipated her attacks and had made shields to send her attack somewhere else. Hiding underground as he slices her with the high frequency blade. The millions of slashes deep enough to cause major wounds.

"Joke on what? Your aiming skills?" says Momoku as he shrinks himself and begin to blitz her with a long whip. But stops as he was about to hit her.

"I'm tired of this Elide. We got a big guy to fight. This is pointless!" says Momoku before letting go.
 
She hears him hiding down when looking out for Momoku and blasts with lunar energy to the location he was situated at, for attacks he may send to her, Elide makes a bubble energy construct to defend herself till they cease out

"You didnt learn by now? You cant sneak up on me, you should also be smart enough to figure im physically more fit without question"

Still on guard she continues then

"Im not entirely sure of your tricks, but you somehow can predict me in some way aint it? I will give you that, its quite useful with your big brain as a combo"
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
She hears him hiding down when looking out for Momoku and blasts with lunar energy to the location he was situated at, for attacks he may send to her, Elide makes a bubble energy construct to defend herself till they cease out

"You didnt learn by now? You cant sneak up on me, you should also be smart enough to figure im physically more fit without question"

Still on guard she continues then

"Im not entirely sure of your tricks, but you somehow can predict me in some way aint it? I will give you that, its quite useful with your big brain as a combo"
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Momoku shrugs off and leaves. "I had enough of this, I'm walking home. Get angry at me all you want. I only fight you because I want to prove my trust. You never pulled your punches on me, not even once. But you sure are strong. I'm nothing compared to you. The barbeque I made is probably burnt by now, so yeah" says Momoku, disengaging his ability.

"You can call the group if you want, my lab is just nearby. You can follow me if you want, but that depends on you"
 
BlackDarkness679 said:
(She held back for the most part so idk why you make have him say she didnt, should be obvious from the difference in speed and power between those moments too)
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(He said that to just make her feel better, he didn't want to insult saying that she didn't went all out. Momoku also didn't went all out so he was saying it as a compliment more than anything)
 
(Please don't delete or edit anything after I post this, it's way to much to try and fix. Stuff to know going forward.

To Both of you:

- Ah yes, the perfect way to inspire trust in your group and in Haven is to fight in the middle of the city, showing how good of a group you are by fighting amonst each other, doing so where any stray hit could kill somebody, people are probably looking for any cover they can possibly thinking you're both some kind of monsters, etc. (I don't have any issue with you guys fighting, I just want you to think about the fact that for example, if Momoku dodges a blast from Elide, that blast could hit a building and kill someone. Staying in Haven wasn't the best idea, and there might be irp consequences for you doing so. Although good job to Backbackback

To Backbackback:

- I think it's worth just putting Body Control on your sheet since that gives a much better idea of what you're capable of.

- I'm pretty sure keycards don't exist yet.

- You probably have to explain how the high-frequency blade works given the current technology.

- In this comment, you say Momoku is standing, which you didn't specify if you mean they got up after being slammed or if they just landed on their feet. I know you're still fairly new to roleplay, but you need to be somewhat specific.

- In the same comment, you say Elide didn't even realize you were in front of her, but that doesn't make sense considering you're equal in speed ratings. Elide also probably has adrenaline too, the only thing you have above her in speed is the blood thing, but that doesn't justify being faster than her perception and definitely not by that much.

- You never specified you can do things like mix concrete into your flesh, that's new.

To BlackDarkness:

- Your allies are comparable to you. You've encountered enemies that are comparable if not above you, and yet somehow, I don't think I've ever really seen Elide get hit. Yes, acrobatics let you dodge more. Yes, barriers let you block more. But there's only so much you can avoid or block before something hits you. Now, I want it stated for the record, this is not a message saying "Make everything hit you" and "anything can go through your defense". Heck, I'm not even saying you have to get hit a lot. I'm just saying, there will be enemies stronger or faster than you at some point, and more detailed explanations than "She blocked" or "She dodged" might be needed at some point.

Consider this a learning experience for both of you as players. But I suppose the fight wasn't a complete waste. That's some extra EXP for the both of you specifically.)
 
(To be fair, his style of RP threw me off, confusing me and not knowing how to reply given the randomness imo, also many of his comments (that got deleted by him too) he states he avoids cuz of the map or whatever power he has about all the time and ignoring mostly the actions done from the opposition that attacks him, he barely acknowledges these as well in his comments, he more or less acts like nothing happened or that they never hit, not sure if you view like me, but it gave me god modding vibes on that

Im aware she wasnt getting hit much as well, but attacks like that blade is honestly too deadly for regeneration level that Elide has to be recovering at all, since by the description, its a blade slicing on molecular level and most were with that)
 
Backbackback said:
Momoku shrugs off and leaves. "I had enough of this, I'm walking home. Get angry at me all you want. I only fight you because I want to prove my trust. You never pulled your punches on me, not even once. But you sure are strong. I'm nothing compared to you. The barbeque I made is probably burnt by now, so yeah" says Momoku, disengaging his ability.

"You can call the group if you want, my lab is just nearby. You can follow me if you want, but that depends on you"
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"Are you kidding me?!? You just quit like this?! Not only you proven to be jerk before all this, but you also proven now that you are quite lame! A sorry excuse as a warrior!!"

Commented towards what he said and done right now

"I had it with him!! I cant believe that guy!"

Says more annoyed and pissed off, storming with heavy steps later into some bar around the corner and orders herself a few drinks and starts ranting to herself at the table alone
 
(For warriors there aint satisfaction in a win not earned through their own effort, its not truly a win, also she is gone from the area, should have said that he said that before she left and btw that can be done by simply editing instead of deleting in case you try it)
 
"Hey Alex, the fight just ended. I'll just head back to my home, tell Elide I apologize, that woman is a headache." says Momoku to Alex as he approaches her "I didn't really wanna fight her since I don't want to. Besides, if I did have the intention to, she'd be long gone by now" says Momoku
 
Dragoonseraphim said:
Alex sighs as she listens to Momoku, “Y’know you really don’t make yourself an easy person to like. Especially when it comes to people like Elide.” She says to him. “If this group is going to get anything done something needs to change.”
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"It doesn't matter now anyway. I just tried reasoning with her but she wouldn't listen so I figured a fight would ensue. But I just felt mercy at the girl, I couldn't bring myself to hurt her. She is my ally, just like you. And I'm not trying to be a likable person either, I just want to look trustworthy towards you guys." says Momoku, tired and grumpy.
 
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