ShionAH
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I have done it. Everyone thought it was impossible but I-I have done it...
Tell me if theres any problems
Tell me if theres any problems
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Xavier Renegade Angel Remake: I lost my mind because of this, who the **** is gonna pay my therapy now?!
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I don't know the full context behind this.
From what I can infer, a page for Xavier: Renegade Angel existed in the past, but was deleted (for poor quality?), and this is a remake of the page that's up-to-standard?
From what I can infer, a page for Xavier: Renegade Angel existed in the past, but was deleted (for poor quality?), and this is a remake of the page that's up-to-standard?
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It would be incredibly funny to reject this page arbitrarily now. At least, funny for everyone except you. : P
Jokes aside, on a cursory analysis, the page looks good. There's a slight grammar error in the Intelligence description - there should be a full-stop between the words "Genius" and "Xavier". I don't believe there are any formatting issues, but it's easy to miss formatting issues without source code view, so I may be incorrect. It would be good to have a content mod look at it to be sure.
That's all, really. This page looks good. And, frankly, it's legendary for Xavier to have such an over-the-top page. It suits him.
Jokes aside, on a cursory analysis, the page looks good. There's a slight grammar error in the Intelligence description - there should be a full-stop between the words "Genius" and "Xavier". I don't believe there are any formatting issues, but it's easy to miss formatting issues without source code view, so I may be incorrect. It would be good to have a content mod look at it to be sure.
That's all, really. This page looks good. And, frankly, it's legendary for Xavier to have such an over-the-top page. It suits him.
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So, about that Sleep manip, couldn't it just be that his backstory was boring?
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Profile looks good tho
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Xavier deserves to solo the entire wiki, fr.
Dragonite007
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You are insane
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This has the same energy as me watching all 248 episodes of Barney just to revise the profile. Of course, this was probably still more entertaining, but that's neither here nor there.
My only gripe is the strange listing of 8-C and Low 2-C.
My only gripe is the strange listing of 8-C and Low 2-C.
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First off, the wording makes no sense. "At least 8-C" is fine, but then you just have "Low 2-C" dropped in there with noting clarifying the clause of the rating, and then "likely higher" after it. Understand what I mean?
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Xavier isn't that big of a verse, so probably.
TheGreatJedi13
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Yoo this verse is fire. You madman good job.
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error on reference 5
good shit all around man
good shit all around man
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For the record, I was just wandering around the forum and saw this thread and the first thing that caught my attention was Plot Manip. It is an immediate NO... What is that video supposed to be proof of Plot Manip? Clearly the episode simply ended with a monologue and it didn't end in a forced way, even if we take into account all episodes end between 11:25 minutes and 11:32 minutes, the episode itself ended at 11:32 which means it had no more content to adapt so there is no Plot Manip here just a monologue taken out of context to guarantee the ability.
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No, all the episodes have the same credits scene, so the credits time has its own thing, but the episode ends just when it should end if we look at the time stamp of all the other episodes. And worst of all, there aren't even any meta-fictional elements.
Ends at 11.20
Ends at 11.19
Ends at 11.10
Practically all the episodes end almost at the same time so it is not valid to use that the episode was ended by him by means of a ability because the episode simply had to end at that moment. What is shown at the end is just a monologue.
It would be the same as saying that the Cartoon characters who put this at the end of the episode commenting on it = Plot manipulation because they finished the episode.
Ends at 11.20
Ends at 11.19
Ends at 11.10
Practically all the episodes end almost at the same time so it is not valid to use that the episode was ended by him by means of a ability because the episode simply had to end at that moment. What is shown at the end is just a monologue.
It would be the same as saying that the Cartoon characters who put this at the end of the episode commenting on it = Plot manipulation because they finished the episode.
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Anyway, @Crabwhale and @DarkGrath would be best to give the plot manipulation a good once-over as it doesn't qualify at all.
Is it possible to find more things wrong? Yes, but it's almost 5 in the morning and I have to go to sleep.
Is it possible to find more things wrong? Yes, but it's almost 5 in the morning and I have to go to sleep.
ShionAH
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Xavier literally becomes real people or do you mean in that episode?
I guess thats fine then...its still weird since it still seems to be that he ended the episode himself by doing the whole I was gone thing. I will wait for further opinions
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This would only be summoning, in the same way that Altair is able to summon herself and other fictional characters in the real world.
Fine with me.
Don't take this the wrong way, I'm just saying that the same way I found this in the Plot Manip I can find some other abilitie with wrong context. But most likely i'm not interested in the thread as i already said i was just wandering before heading to sleep.
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Could be, it suits better.
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the scan of xavier's Low 2-C feat is a bit....nsfw
i agree with everything tho
i agree with everything tho
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Editing-wise, absolutely. Therefore, I decided to tidy it up myself.
These are the changes I made, in case you have any concerns. Also, I suggest being mindful of spelling errors in the future, as the draft was littered with those.
ShionAH
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Thank you! I am not good at references lol, anything else?Editing-wise, absolutely. Therefore, I decided to tidy it up myself.
These are the changes I made, in case you have any concerns. Also, I suggest being mindful of spelling errors in the future, as the draft was littered with those.
Xavier Renegade Angel Rework
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No, I'll be honest, I am barely even interested in evaluating if pages are eligible for publication. I am only interested in its formatting.
I may not be in the mood or may be feeling lazy at the moment, but I also have a lot on my plate currently.
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