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I have done it. Everyone thought it was impossible but I-I have done it...
Tell me if theres any problems
Tell me if theres any problems
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TwTIt would be incredibly funny to reject this page arbitrarily now. At least, funny for everyone except you. : P
Thank you very much ^~^Jokes aside, on a cursory analysis, the page looks good. There's a slight grammar error in the Intelligence description - there should be a full-stop between the words "Genius" and "Xavier". I don't believe there are any formatting issues, but it's easy to miss formatting issues without source code view, so I may be incorrect. It would be good to have a content mod look at it to be sure.
That's all, really. This page looks good. And, frankly, it's legendary for Xavier to have such an over-the-top page. It suits him.
You are insaneI have done it. Everyone thought it was impossible but I-I have done it...
Tell me if theres any problems
First off, the wording makes no sense. "At least 8-C" is fine, but then you just have "Low 2-C" dropped in there with noting clarifying the clause of the rating, and then "likely higher" after it. Understand what I mean?Whats up I can try to fix it
"At least 8-C, Low 2-C at peak"First off, the wording makes no sense. "At least 8-C" is fine, but then you just have "Low 2-C" dropped in there with noting clarifying the clause of the rating, and then "likely higher" after it. Understand what I mean?
Uh I am not sure if I am getting this right but.For the record, I was just wandering around the forum and saw this thread and the first thing that caught my attention was Plot Manip. It is an immediate NO... What is that video supposed to be proof of Plot Manip? Clearly the episode simply ended with a monologue and it didn't end in a forced way, even if we take into account all episodes end between 11:25 minutes and 11:32 minutes, the episode itself ended at 11:32 which means it had no more content to adapt so there is no Plot Manip here just a monologue taken out of context to guarantee the ability.
Xavier literally becomes real people or do you mean in that episode?And worst of all, there aren't even any meta-fictional elements.
I guess thats fine then...its still weird since it still seems to be that he ended the episode himself by doing the whole I was gone thing. I will wait for further opinionsPractically all the episodes end almost at the same time so it is not valid to use that the episode was ended by him by means of a skill because the episode simply had to end at that moment. What is shown at the end is just a monologue.
It would be the same as saying that the Cartoon characters who put this at the end of the episode commenting on it = Plot manipulation because they finished the episode.
This would only be summoning, in the same way that Altair is able to summon herself and other fictional characters in the real world.Xavier literally becomes real people or do you mean in that episode?
Fine with me.I will wait for further opinions
Don't take this the wrong way, I'm just saying that the same way I found this in the Plot Manip I can find some other abilitie with wrong context. But most likely i'm not interested in the thread as i already said i was just wandering before heading to sleep.That was not needed...
He doesnt summon them he is them. I thought it was just 4th wall breakingThis would only be summoning, in the same way that Altair is able to summon herself and other fictional characters in the real world.
Could be, it suits better.He doesnt summon them he is them. I thought it was just 4th wall breaking
Editing-wise, absolutely. Therefore, I decided to tidy it up myself.Tell me if theres any problems
Thank you! I am not good at references lol, anything else?Editing-wise, absolutely. Therefore, I decided to tidy it up myself.
These are the changes I made, in case you have any concerns. Also, I suggest being mindful of spelling errors in the future, as the draft was littered with those.
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Xavier Renegade Angel Rework
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No, I'll be honest, I am barely even interested in evaluating if pages are eligible for publication. I am only interested in its formatting.Thank you! I am not good at references lol, anything else?