Greetings, everyone. Hope everyone is having fine days, if anything else.
Today, I am here to try and get a revision on this character: [Clock Crack Chrome]. Basically, it's in need of an update. A cleanup of sorts, but an update nonetheless. It's also an upgrade even, as this page was done using info that was from the original VN (visual novel) of Inganock and somewhat parts of its WN (web novel).
But here, that will change as there was a short story that expanded upon this character's stats and even abilities, which I have made through a revised version of their draft here.
Basically, I want to get them upgraded to High 7-C AP and MHS+ speed (although I personally have doubts on this) + giving them new abilities.
To better explain, here are some of the stuff Clock Crack Chrome has that has been missing with the short story information added that they possess:
High 7-C for Crack Chrome and his Kikai, if not at least his Kikai + resistance to high temperatures and death inducement for killing Critter Dragon.
Extrasensory Perception and/or Enhanced Senses with "Left Eye"
Abilities addition of Fire Manip, Ice Manip, and Telekinesis + Physics and Mathemathematics Manip
MHS+ speed (Possibly an outlier, or maybe not) + Resistance to Body Puppetry for his Kikai.
Concerning the possible outlier bit, it's more due to the fact that Sekien no Inganock usually consists of characters with supersonic feats and statements. However, the reason I also note it might not be so is because this is a feat done by one of the top tiers of Inganock, someone who has, quite literally in the VN, the WN, AND the short story where they are the central character of its plot, have been noted as being the "strongest and fastest in the city" and no one has quite yet even speed blitz him either to my knowledge.. Although how that statement holds probably is contested by several other chars in Inganock that are also top tier too so...idk.
Edit: As for potential upgrade, this can mean quite a lot for the High tiers as well as the Top Tiers and God Tier of Inganock. Very few people will scale to Clock Crack Chrome through scaling from one another, of which about a handful will get the MHS+ scaling.
For the most part, getting Clock Crack Chrome updated is the main priority. For that, the TL;DR proposal is:
Agree/Cool with it: 5 (@Mycroft_er, @RM97, @Celestial_Pegasus, @DarkDragonMedeus @Dereck03)
Disagree/Not on board:
Inconclusive:
Today, I am here to try and get a revision on this character: [Clock Crack Chrome]. Basically, it's in need of an update. A cleanup of sorts, but an update nonetheless. It's also an upgrade even, as this page was done using info that was from the original VN (visual novel) of Inganock and somewhat parts of its WN (web novel).
But here, that will change as there was a short story that expanded upon this character's stats and even abilities, which I have made through a revised version of their draft here.
Basically, I want to get them upgraded to High 7-C AP and MHS+ speed (although I personally have doubts on this) + giving them new abilities.
To better explain, here are some of the stuff Clock Crack Chrome has that has been missing with the short story information added that they possess:
High 7-C for Crack Chrome and his Kikai, if not at least his Kikai + resistance to high temperatures and death inducement for killing Critter Dragon.
This was something no one would have imagined.
A giant laying in the underground darkness. Nobody. No one.
How could anyone imagine Critter Dragon, feared as the city's greatest threat, had been unknowingly turned to a silent skeleton in the underground large engine depot where it resided. That was impossible. It was fully armored. It had an impenetrable information body. The body, which could not be swayed even by the Main guns of the Mobile Fortress that once raged in a Great War in a foreign distant land was invincible. It was something that human means could not overcome. That is the Critter. The Lords of Terror, those who were bounded in the depths of those who were distorted into fantasies. Dragon was the one who controlled those terrors as their only King.
...
Someone killed it. The laid-down body of the King. The ruins of the Red King. Its corpse.
That was it. But who, there was not an answer. No answer to it.
Even so, there were "two" who were in the bottommost tier of the Fantasy City of Inganock, underground in a large engine section where traces of the fierce Critter battle remained. They endured the stench of death lingering in the air, the high heat that was the embodiment of heat death still emanating from the Dragon's corpse, and the sooty air characteristic of the area around the underground large engine. Once inhaled into the lungs, everyone would die. No one, regardless of how much of a fantasy they were, could not withstand it without proper organs. Just a single intake was all it took to die.
And yet, "they" were "there", enduring the deadly heat and the atmosphere.
One was a man. The man was Crack Chrome.
The other was a shadow.
The only fairy tale left in a city that lost all other illusions.
They were steel figures of all colors.
Its name was Kikai.
A shadow of steel that was not human.
A blade of flame that crushed fantasies.
The only thing that can bring about "beautiful things" to the people in this city...
-Source, Golden G'harne Prologue
A giant laying in the underground darkness. Nobody. No one.
How could anyone imagine Critter Dragon, feared as the city's greatest threat, had been unknowingly turned to a silent skeleton in the underground large engine depot where it resided. That was impossible. It was fully armored. It had an impenetrable information body. The body, which could not be swayed even by the Main guns of the Mobile Fortress that once raged in a Great War in a foreign distant land was invincible. It was something that human means could not overcome. That is the Critter. The Lords of Terror, those who were bounded in the depths of those who were distorted into fantasies. Dragon was the one who controlled those terrors as their only King.
...
Someone killed it. The laid-down body of the King. The ruins of the Red King. Its corpse.
That was it. But who, there was not an answer. No answer to it.
Even so, there were "two" who were in the bottommost tier of the Fantasy City of Inganock, underground in a large engine section where traces of the fierce Critter battle remained. They endured the stench of death lingering in the air, the high heat that was the embodiment of heat death still emanating from the Dragon's corpse, and the sooty air characteristic of the area around the underground large engine. Once inhaled into the lungs, everyone would die. No one, regardless of how much of a fantasy they were, could not withstand it without proper organs. Just a single intake was all it took to die.
And yet, "they" were "there", enduring the deadly heat and the atmosphere.
One was a man. The man was Crack Chrome.
The other was a shadow.
The only fairy tale left in a city that lost all other illusions.
They were steel figures of all colors.
Its name was Kikai.
A shadow of steel that was not human.
A blade of flame that crushed fantasies.
The only thing that can bring about "beautiful things" to the people in this city...
-Source, Golden G'harne Prologue
Extrasensory Perception and/or Enhanced Senses with "Left Eye"
"...Ah. It's alright, now."
The man called out to the "other one" behind him.
They were invisible to him. Only the touch of a small little hand to his cheek could he feel it. It was a white hand. Though it should have really been a steel hand of all colors, to the man it was closer to the truth in the city as a white hand. The hand of "she" who stood behind him. The right hand that reached out.
The man who sat amongst the countless debris of engine machinery filling the underground large engine depot calling himself Crack Chrome may have smiled a little. Just slightly, feeling the existence of "her" behind him. Even if he could not see her clearly. Even if his "Left Eye" that could see everything did not perceive her. His "Left Eye" was an Equation Eye, capable of perceiving all phenomena. It was certainly possible to perceive the debris of the underground large engine that lay asleep and the ruins of the Dragon that had become a skeleton in his surroundings, even memorize the elements that make up its structure. Yet he could not see them, the sole true figure of "her" behind him. Only with the feel of his "heart" could they be seen to him that she was human. It wasn't quite certain, but it was faint for him that the hand was of a pure white girl.
-Source, Golden G'harne Prologue
The man called out to the "other one" behind him.
They were invisible to him. Only the touch of a small little hand to his cheek could he feel it. It was a white hand. Though it should have really been a steel hand of all colors, to the man it was closer to the truth in the city as a white hand. The hand of "she" who stood behind him. The right hand that reached out.
The man who sat amongst the countless debris of engine machinery filling the underground large engine depot calling himself Crack Chrome may have smiled a little. Just slightly, feeling the existence of "her" behind him. Even if he could not see her clearly. Even if his "Left Eye" that could see everything did not perceive her. His "Left Eye" was an Equation Eye, capable of perceiving all phenomena. It was certainly possible to perceive the debris of the underground large engine that lay asleep and the ruins of the Dragon that had become a skeleton in his surroundings, even memorize the elements that make up its structure. Yet he could not see them, the sole true figure of "her" behind him. Only with the feel of his "heart" could they be seen to him that she was human. It wasn't quite certain, but it was faint for him that the hand was of a pure white girl.
-Source, Golden G'harne Prologue
Smiling softly at "she" behind him, he closed his eyes once more. A small screen appeared on his eye, a bodily function that had been replaced with steel separate from his Equation Eye. The wounds he sustained from the fearsome Critter Dragon were far more than he could bear, even if he were made out of tough chrome. Had he been an ordinary person, he would have died many times over. It would take some time for him to reboot and get up.
It was clear that the battle was fierce. The aftermath of the unimaginative battle devasted the surrounding area. On top of the claws and fangs that wreaked havoc, parts of Dragon's surroundings were still bubbling from its "heat wave" ability to melt all matter. The iron was bubbling.
With his back against the black long sword propped up on the floor, feeling "she" behind him who should have been further away from the blade, he who had yet to see the clock, Crack Chrome, gently opened his eyes.
-Source, Golden G'harne Prologue
It was clear that the battle was fierce. The aftermath of the unimaginative battle devasted the surrounding area. On top of the claws and fangs that wreaked havoc, parts of Dragon's surroundings were still bubbling from its "heat wave" ability to melt all matter. The iron was bubbling.
With his back against the black long sword propped up on the floor, feeling "she" behind him who should have been further away from the blade, he who had yet to see the clock, Crack Chrome, gently opened his eyes.
-Source, Golden G'harne Prologue
Abilities addition of Fire Manip, Ice Manip, and Telekinesis + Physics and Mathemathematics Manip
Crack Chrome. The Steel Equation User.
The Street Knight slaughtered many extremely dangerous Monsters, sometimes even Critters, working behind the scenes to secure and expand surviving areas for all humans with or without mutations. He was a man without peers. His Phenomena Equation was mainly fire, ice, and telekinesis. He can manipulate three types of offensive Equations said to be too much for the human brain to handle even if they were mutated, using them to destroy his targets. Thus, it was said that traces of his battle actions were an unbelievable scene.
Unbeknownst to many city dwellers, Chrome's battles were even more fierce after he had replaced almost all of his body but his brain with Crack Engines. He was a synthetic human who was still undergoing development as a prototype Upper Tier Soldier. With his right hand, he wielded a giant steel sword. In his left hand were any of the equations of his choosing, sometimes even using his hand to crush a Monster's head. If the distance was short, he would often crush their ribs and rip their heart out.
At times, he would kill the enemy by scorching them in flames.
At times, he would kill the enemy by smashing them apart in ice.
At times, he would kill the enemy by bending them with telekinesis.
-Source, Golden G'harne Part 4
The Street Knight slaughtered many extremely dangerous Monsters, sometimes even Critters, working behind the scenes to secure and expand surviving areas for all humans with or without mutations. He was a man without peers. His Phenomena Equation was mainly fire, ice, and telekinesis. He can manipulate three types of offensive Equations said to be too much for the human brain to handle even if they were mutated, using them to destroy his targets. Thus, it was said that traces of his battle actions were an unbelievable scene.
Unbeknownst to many city dwellers, Chrome's battles were even more fierce after he had replaced almost all of his body but his brain with Crack Engines. He was a synthetic human who was still undergoing development as a prototype Upper Tier Soldier. With his right hand, he wielded a giant steel sword. In his left hand were any of the equations of his choosing, sometimes even using his hand to crush a Monster's head. If the distance was short, he would often crush their ribs and rip their heart out.
At times, he would kill the enemy by scorching them in flames.
At times, he would kill the enemy by smashing them apart in ice.
At times, he would kill the enemy by bending them with telekinesis.
-Source, Golden G'harne Part 4
MHS+ speed (Possibly an outlier, or maybe not) + Resistance to Body Puppetry for his Kikai.
666 invisible nerve cords of spiritual manipulation and physical manipulation closed in.
No human could evade it coming at the speed of lightning.
No one could evade the simultaneous embrace of the multi-arms.
However.
"I..."
"Will..."
"Save you..."
"Take it from me."
"What good is a brat who stands behind you and says nothing?"
The embrace simultaneously shoots out the 666 nerve cords onto the target.
The nerves of the whole body are instantly taken over at the speed of lightning.
With the power to pierce through even chrome steel armor.
However.
...
"...your voice. It has reached me.
You weren't fast enough. One second, no, two seconds."
He listened for it.
He heard it.
His "hearing", sensitized by the Phenomena Equation, comprehended the Critter!
Critter Marionette cannot be destroyed. Critters were always absolute, something that cannot be destroyed by humans. But yet, if something could destroy it, it was neither human nor a life. It simultaneously shredded all of the 666 nerve cords which infinitely diffused beyond 666 and continued to maintain its body. Yes, "he" was able to "hear" and comprehend all of the information.
...
"You are here right now."
Strangely, all of the 666 nerve cords turned into a spear of lightning in his right hand, turning towards the deformed humanoid Critter that was about to attack him.
Hand and hand, as though they were touching one another.
Hand and hand, as though it was what it yearned for.
However...
"She" that stands behind the swift "him" stretched out with her hand.
Shattering the deformed humanoid form.
With the giant clock face towering from behind it.
-Source, Golden G'harne Finale
No human could evade it coming at the speed of lightning.
No one could evade the simultaneous embrace of the multi-arms.
However.
"I..."
"Will..."
"Save you..."
"Take it from me."
"What good is a brat who stands behind you and says nothing?"
The embrace simultaneously shoots out the 666 nerve cords onto the target.
The nerves of the whole body are instantly taken over at the speed of lightning.
With the power to pierce through even chrome steel armor.
However.
...
"...your voice. It has reached me.
You weren't fast enough. One second, no, two seconds."
He listened for it.
He heard it.
His "hearing", sensitized by the Phenomena Equation, comprehended the Critter!
Critter Marionette cannot be destroyed. Critters were always absolute, something that cannot be destroyed by humans. But yet, if something could destroy it, it was neither human nor a life. It simultaneously shredded all of the 666 nerve cords which infinitely diffused beyond 666 and continued to maintain its body. Yes, "he" was able to "hear" and comprehend all of the information.
...
"You are here right now."
Strangely, all of the 666 nerve cords turned into a spear of lightning in his right hand, turning towards the deformed humanoid Critter that was about to attack him.
Hand and hand, as though they were touching one another.
Hand and hand, as though it was what it yearned for.
However...
"She" that stands behind the swift "him" stretched out with her hand.
Shattering the deformed humanoid form.
With the giant clock face towering from behind it.
-Source, Golden G'harne Finale
Edit: As for potential upgrade, this can mean quite a lot for the High tiers as well as the Top Tiers and God Tier of Inganock. Very few people will scale to Clock Crack Chrome through scaling from one another, of which about a handful will get the MHS+ scaling.
For the most part, getting Clock Crack Chrome updated is the main priority. For that, the TL;DR proposal is:
- Make Crack Chrome High 7-C AP and give them MHS+ Speed
- Give them extrasensory perception
- Add in fire manip, ice manip, telekinesis, physics manip, and math manip
- Resistance to heat manip and body puppetry
Agree/Cool with it: 5 (@Mycroft_er, @RM97, @Celestial_Pegasus, @DarkDragonMedeus @Dereck03)
Disagree/Not on board:
Inconclusive:
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