Alien Profile Rewrite stuff

[Roachman40]

Praetomorph
Rewrite: here

Big Chap
Rewrite: here

pretty straight forward imo

the 'descendant of yog' thing dosent mean anything statistics wise, just a title O'Bannon given big chap

and like before, excuse my bad english

 

[Axxtentacle]

I would suggest just going through and changing the stuff in parenthesis, punctuation like periods go outside of parenthesis (like this).

 

[Roachman40]

I would suggest just going through and changing the stuff in parenthesis, punctuation like periods go outside of parenthesis (like this).

fixed, is it fine now?

 

[Axxtentacle]

There's still stuff like that in the Praetomorph one.

 

[HeadlessKramerGeoff777]

Following

 

[Ican'tthinkof1goodname]

I'll agree with this CRT

 

[Roachman40]

There's still stuff like that in the Praetomorph one.

Ah I must've missed one, it is fixed

 

[Axxtentacle]

Ah I must've missed one, it is fixed

You still have this line in Lifting Strength (Comparable to Xenomorphs.)

 

[Tllmbrg]

Iffy on praetomorph's fire resist since he was in pain from that and barely any time in the flame, seems more like the skin not showing burn signs like human one does
Outside it all seems good

 

[Roachman40]

You still have this line in Lifting Strength (Comparable to Xenomorphs.)

Fixed

Iffy on praetomorph's fire resist since he was in pain from that and barely any time in the flame, seems more like the skin not showing burn signs like human one does
Outside it all seems good

maybe something like 'Possible Resistance to Fire Manipulation' would work?, even if it was barely in the flame it still was on fire afterwards for a while

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

Seems alright.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Fixed

maybe something like 'Possible Resistance to Fire Manipulation' would work?, even if it was barely in the flame it still was on fire afterwards for a while

Ig, even tho can’t humans survive stuff like this but just in great pain and tons of burns?

 

[Armorchompy]

Traditionally, even Xenomorph drones are afraid of fire but almost immune to it, the dog Xeno in Alien 3 took a dip in lava and didn't really mind

 

[Roachman40]

so everything fine now?

 

[Axxtentacle]

I would say it’s fine, but you definitely want to get more opinions.

 

[Roachman40]

I see

@Armorchompy @Tllmbrg @HeadlessKramerGeoff777 any thoughts?

 

[Tllmbrg]

Seems good ig
(Just make there aren’t unnecessary dots in the end or I’m calling the bug police)

 

[HeadlessKramerGeoff777]

Yeah seems fine

 

[Armorchompy]

looks ok to me

 

[Colonel_Krukov]

I talked to you already. You have my approval.

 

[Roachman40]

mk, can this be added?

 

[Colonel_Krukov]

Ye, remember to make the changes we discussed, if you haven't already.

 

[Roachman40]

Ye, remember to make the changes we discussed, if you haven't already.

yes I already added them, this can be closed