A CRT on Impress' favorite Goosebumps book: Cry of the Cat.

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

Oh look, a CRT I was suppose to do a year ago.

Short explanation: Current page is awful because I made it when I was a stupid child (still am one, mentally at least), here is a rewrite that was made a year ago. 'Nuff said, it is almost 4 AM where I am at and I want to sleep.

 

[Dalesean027]

Looks good tho I agree

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

Bump

 

[ElixirBlue]

I want say no for now. While I agree with changing the AP stats, all the abilities are unsupported.

Granted, the abilities in the original are unsupported as well but they should.

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

I want say no for now. While I agree with changing the AP stats, all the abilities are unsupported.

Granted, the abilities in the original are unsupported as well but they should.

Added scans, does it work now?

 

[KieranH10]

Short explanation: Current page is awful because I made it when I was a stupid child (still am one, mentally at least), here is a rewrite that was made a year ago. 'Nuff said, it is almost 4 AM where I am at and I want to sleep.

Can agree. You are a stupid child!

Jokes aside new profile looks bueno!

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

You are a stupid child!

Boomer

 

[Tllmbrg]

I don't see why the shaking of the graveyard can't be calced for the tornado
Worse case say it's Human level since the MC can't move once in it (Or give it paralysis inducement idk)

Add Fragrance Manipulation since with the cold air the MC also mentions the sudden smell of decaying meat which presumably coming from the souls

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

I want say no for now. While I agree with changing the AP stats, all the abilities are unsupported.

Granted, the abilities in the original are unsupported as well but they should.

Well scans have been added to the thing. What is your stance on it now?

 

[ElixirBlue]

Well scans have been added to the thing. What is your stance on it now?

Looks far better. Yes, I approve.

 

[ElixirBlue]

Add Fragrance Manipulation since with the cold air the MC also mentions the sudden smell of decaying meat which presumably coming from the souls

Presumably? Based on?

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

Presumably? Based on?

I mean it showed up when the ghost cats showed up. Safe to say that it is coming from them.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Presumably? Based on?

The stench came in when the souls were summoned?
Plus the air getting colder is also coming with a stronger smell of said meat so

 

[ElixirBlue]

Hm, sure. Add the scan of it from the story for justification and it can be added as well.

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

Added the ability

Hm, sure. Add the scan of it from the story for justification and it can be added as well.

You mean add the rewrite to the page?

 

[ElixirBlue]

Well, remove Resurrection. Immortality covers himself and he isn’t resurrecting the cats, as you have them under Necromancy.

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

Ok. Time to get this CRT over with.

 

[ElixirBlue]

Yep, all good