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Mizuki67 UchihaSlayer96 Mizuki67 wrote on UchihaSlayer96's profile.
Tensura LN Cosmology Upgrade Tier 1 (Retry)
Lmao I forgot this... Btw have you added new materials? If you have, I would like to have a look at them @CodeCCLL
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It has many of the same issues as the other one. For example, rather than list his P&A as a tabber, you have "in his true form he gets:", which isn't strictly outside the policy but is weird. There's tons of places where spaces should be where they are not. Your Tier section is in "quotation marks", as if the page itself doubts whether the character is actually that tier. There's other minor grammatical things (using "an" where it should be "a" and vice versa, names not being capitalized, etc) as well.
On a more strict set of issues, your evidence for Wall level does not link to a character destroying the door or the calculation for that feat- it should link to both. By a similar measure, it cites the ability to "run into walls without dying" as wall level, when this is verifiably not the case.
It needs a great deal of cleanup, basically. Manageable, but absolutely necessary.