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Artorimachi_Meteoraft Detective_Blizzard Artorimachi_Meteoraft wrote on Detective_Blizzard's profile.
Can I have two votes here please
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A hunter VS A “hero”
Speed equalised Hunter’s first key is used and his optional equipment is restricted and Walker’s White Phosphorus is restricted Walker has access to a Desert Eagle, whereas The Hunter has access to a pistol Both start 10 feet away from each other and the fight takes place in some warehouse...
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Hunter vs goblin slayer
Goblin slayer The hunter Rules: Speed equalized First key hunter used Starting distance is 30ft and out of sight Location: orange town from one piece
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It has many of the same issues as the other one. For example, rather than list his P&A as a tabber, you have "in his true form he gets:", which isn't strictly outside the policy but is weird. There's tons of places where spaces should be where they are not. Your Tier section is in "quotation marks", as if the page itself doubts whether the character is actually that tier. There's other minor grammatical things (using "an" where it should be "a" and vice versa, names not being capitalized, etc) as well.
On a more strict set of issues, your evidence for Wall level does not link to a character destroying the door or the calculation for that feat- it should link to both. By a similar measure, it cites the ability to "run into walls without dying" as wall level, when this is verifiably not the case.
It needs a great deal of cleanup, basically. Manageable, but absolutely necessary.