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Robo432343 XSOULOFCINDERX Robo432343 wrote on XSOULOFCINDERX's profile.
is it ok if i make deku vs raiden again??
Deku (MHA) vs Raiden (Metal Gear)
45% Deku Raiden is in Ripper mode SBA Speed Equal https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Izuku_Midoriya_(Deku)_(Final_Act) https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Raiden_(Metal_Gear)
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It has many of the same issues as the other one. For example, rather than list his P&A as a tabber, you have "in his true form he gets:", which isn't strictly outside the policy but is weird. There's tons of places where spaces should be where they are not. Your Tier section is in "quotation marks", as if the page itself doubts whether the character is actually that tier. There's other minor grammatical things (using "an" where it should be "a" and vice versa, names not being capitalized, etc) as well.
On a more strict set of issues, your evidence for Wall level does not link to a character destroying the door or the calculation for that feat- it should link to both. By a similar measure, it cites the ability to "run into walls without dying" as wall level, when this is verifiably not the case.
It needs a great deal of cleanup, basically. Manageable, but absolutely necessary.