The Asterisk War (Volume 9 stuff)

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Alright, back at it with Volume 9 additions. Relatively simple.

Claudia Enfield
Her intelligence section should be expanded upon with the following:

Claudia is considered a prodigy by every definition of the word, gifted with exceptional intelligence and physical ability. She is particularly astute when it comes to carefully reading the people around her, easily intuiting what they desire and despise. Moreover, she is endowed with such a fine control over words and mannerisms as to be able to create within others any impression of herself that she so desired

She also should have Supernatural Willpower:

Supernatural Willpower (Has been using Pan-Dora for years, while others can't even hold on to it for three days)[2]

Ayato Amagiri
Ayato will get some new techniques for his Amagiri Shinmei Grappling Style:

Divine Thunder: Ayato strikes his opponent in the jaw with the palm of his hand, while at the same time driving the elbow into their chest, before following through with three powerful punches to the stomach.

Twisted Vine: He grabs his opponents' arm, pushing himself toward his opponent as he kicks their legs out from under them.

Divine Hammer: Ayato puts as much strength as possible into this punch and delivers it to his opponent, sending a shockwave through their entire body which powerful enough to leave a crater into the ground.

Nine-Fanged Hammer: A tempest of nine consecutive strikes slam into his opponent, breaking both their arms, crushing their leg, and gouging into their liver, heart, spleen, lungs, and kidneys - the final blow being delivered with unimaginable force.

Also, for his Sword style:

Thousand Beaks of Dismemberment: He swings the Ser Veresta with all his strength, twisting his body to follow through with his momentum to take down every obstacle in his path. With this technique he can cut through scores of opponents in his way.

Here is Ayato's and Claudia's Sandboxes to go over the changes and how they look:

StorytellingDemonKing/Ayato Amagiri

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StorytellingDemonKing/Claudia Enfield

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Oh, damn. Just realised those ar all the important changes I had marked. Well... at least this CRT is relatively simple and easy to get through. Volume 10 will bring actual ugrades

 

[Dereck03]

For me this changes seems pretty straightforward.

 

[Godsatoshi23]

I agree with the addition of abilities.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Thank you for your input! Though, would 1 staff agreement be enough or is more warranted?

 

[Dereck03]

Thank you for your input! Though, would 1 staff agreement be enough or is more warranted?

1 more it's needed.

 

[Phoenks]

Wow, the Asterisk War?

That name brings back some nostalgic memories.

I think your changes are pretty straight forward as well. Nice work.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Wow, the Asterisk War?

That name brings back some nostalgic memories.

I think your changes are pretty straight forward as well. Nice work.

Thank you for the evaluation!

Also, yeah, I started reworking the verse after having a nostalgia wave of the anime and reading the LN from start.

Will start applying the changes since 2 staff members have agreed to the changes.