The Asterisk War CRT (Volume 1 stuff)

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Hello. In this CRT I want to revise Amagiri Ayato's profile. Currently it's in an extremely poor state. But I started reading the series, and I'm done with the sandbox for at least Volume 1. Here it is:

I've also created a sandbox for Julis since she is an important character as well:

To quickly go through Ayato changes in the sandbox:

• Removed a large portion of the "Notable Attacks/Techniques" as they are a simply copy-paste from The Asterisk War fandom with no proper context IMO
• Changed the speed from Subsonic to Supersonic via scaling to Julis who dodged Lux Assault Rifle bullets
• Added much needed scans and references
• Ayato will actually have a justification for his current 9-A rating as well, via scaling to/above Julis
• Added more abilities I think he should have

Maybe there are some more things I don't remember changes but you can go through the current profile page and the sandbox and compare them.

Lastly, I've also created a sandbox for the verse page:

So, yeah. Will wait for input from others.

 

[FantaRin_The_First]

This seems simple and non-controversial to me - it is just fixing a profile, adding an important profile, and applying an accepted calc - so... Agree FRA!

 

[Lugh_Tuathe_Dé]

I have the same opinion as FantaRin, so I agree

 

[The_Emperor4th]

Pretty simple and easy to understand

Agree

 

[Everything12]

Seems fine.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Thank you for the evaluation!

Since a few members, and a staff member, have agreed upon the changes I will apply them since they arent that controversial.

 

[Popted2]

i remember watching the anime of this, pretty good honestly

wished they continued making this anime

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Yeah, from what I know only 6 volumes have been adapted out of 17. Overall, it's pretty good.

 

[Popted2]

Yeah, from what I know only 6 volumes have been adapted out of 17. Overall, it's pretty good.

light novel?

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Yes, it's a light novel.

 

[Antvasima]

I was asked to close this thread.

https://vsbattles.com/threads/all-purpose-request-thread-new-forum.107534/post-5278004