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I looked at maxes profile and I rather dislike it, so I would like to change some things:
Tier: her equipment is not 9-B, and the only thing even close to it is not standard equipment. In fact, guns aren't standard either, so 9-Cand 9-B should be removed
Keys: "Through hax" does not deserve a key of its own, especialy as she always has her hax.
Age: pretty minor, but she only became 14 briefly when "traveling" back in time. It should at best be noted in abilities section that her long range time travel makes her posses her younger self briefly.
Abilities: Human physiology is not needed. Alternate Timeline Creation is not confirmed in the game, and goes againdt chaos theory's point.
Standard equipment: "Computer, Pipe Bomb, Knife, Crowbar, Fire Extinguisher" None of this is standard equipment. She only got them for a bit, and then left them.
Inteligence: "Resourceful" is wrong, she needed time travel to solve it.
Weaknesses: "Her range is limited to several meters when time travelling" If whoever wrote it means long range time travel, then the range is dozens of meters it should be a bit better phrased (Time Travel through photos only reacreates a few dozens of meters of where the photo was taken, and may likely cannot move outside of that)
Notable Abilities:
Time Stop: I do not remember it being used muliple times, could anybody tell me when it was used other than with kate?
Focus: Should note that she posseses herself from that time, and as such can only be used in photos she is it
Time Jump: Does she ever use this more than once? pretty sure the dialouge kipping is game mechanics.
Range: What? several hundreds of meters? Sure as hell not physicly, and her powers presumibly work on the entire universe she is in.
Speed: Shouldn't it be infinite (moveing in time stop) and immisurable (traveling back in time and moving) with her powers on?
Tier: her equipment is not 9-B, and the only thing even close to it is not standard equipment. In fact, guns aren't standard either, so 9-Cand 9-B should be removed
Keys: "Through hax" does not deserve a key of its own, especialy as she always has her hax.
Age: pretty minor, but she only became 14 briefly when "traveling" back in time. It should at best be noted in abilities section that her long range time travel makes her posses her younger self briefly.
Abilities: Human physiology is not needed. Alternate Timeline Creation is not confirmed in the game, and goes againdt chaos theory's point.
Standard equipment: "Computer, Pipe Bomb, Knife, Crowbar, Fire Extinguisher" None of this is standard equipment. She only got them for a bit, and then left them.
Inteligence: "Resourceful" is wrong, she needed time travel to solve it.
Weaknesses: "Her range is limited to several meters when time travelling" If whoever wrote it means long range time travel, then the range is dozens of meters it should be a bit better phrased (Time Travel through photos only reacreates a few dozens of meters of where the photo was taken, and may likely cannot move outside of that)
Notable Abilities:
Time Stop: I do not remember it being used muliple times, could anybody tell me when it was used other than with kate?
Focus: Should note that she posseses herself from that time, and as such can only be used in photos she is it
Time Jump: Does she ever use this more than once? pretty sure the dialouge kipping is game mechanics.
Range: What? several hundreds of meters? Sure as hell not physicly, and her powers presumibly work on the entire universe she is in.
Speed: Shouldn't it be infinite (moveing in time stop) and immisurable (traveling back in time and moving) with her powers on?