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Isabel Helga Anastasia Parvati Wondertainment V revision

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Isabel's High 1-A justification contains the following sentence:
Likely stepped out of the light that contrasted the dark of The Brothers Death as one of the first being to ever come into existence[3].
This is wrong, as Djoric has confirmed Emma Aislethorpe-Brown was the one who stepped out of the light, not Isabel. I suggest rewriting this sentence as Isabel scaling from her instead: "Comparable to her assistant Emma Aislethorpe-Brown, who stepped out of the light that contrasted the dark of The Brothers Death at the beginning of existence."
 
Isabel Helga Anastasia Parvati Wondertainment V is one of the many holders of the moniker "Dr. Wondertainment". She was born at the beginning of creation, when The Brothers Death created the Tree. As the opposite entity of the latter, she stepped out of the light and entered the newly created Tree with stride. Some time later, she would inherit the title of "Dr. Wondertainment" and go on wacky adventures with her assistant. Emma Aislethorpe-Brown.
Before I can finish the revisions, we need to do something about Isabel's summary. The current version is based on the same incorrect reasoning I debunked above. I need some help going through the tales mentioning her and seeing which ones are usable.
 
Isabel's High 1-A justification contains the following sentence:

This is wrong, as Djoric has confirmed Emma Aislethorpe-Brown was the one who stepped out of the light, not Isabel. I suggest rewriting this sentence as Isabel scaling from her instead: "Comparable to her assistant Emma Aislethorpe-Brown, who stepped out of the light that contrasted the dark of The Brothers Death at the beginning of existence."
Shouldn't it be superior or equal to her assistant instead?
 
Shouldn't it be superior or equal to her assistant instead?
Maybe, but can you help me go through her backstory and see which tales apply to rewriting her summary?
 
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I read over every page tagged with "isabel-v" to see which ones apply to this rewrite.
Out of 33 pages, three Tales and one SCP are definitely usable while three other Tales and two other SCPs require more discussion.
EDIT: See the revised OP.
 
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I rewrote the description, but everything else can wait for my planned SCP CRT to do it all at once, so this can be closed now.
 
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