God of War CRT: Artemis cleanup and overhaul

[Planck69]

Finally got around to starting to fix the verse and figured I'd start with one of the er, less than stellar profiles, namely Artemis.

Here is the new and improved profile. As for changes;

Spoiler: Added abilities

• Light Manipulation (The full drawn arrow shots from her bow are likened to the fury of a new sun, rivalling the real one that Apollo would put in the sky[3])
• Stealth Mastery (Artemis is an unparalleled huntress, capable of seamlessly blending into her environment, such that even other gods cannot find her[3] and vanishing from right in front of their sights[4])
• Transmutation (Transformed Actaeon into a stag, after the former saw her bathe[3])
• Animal Manipulation (As the goddess of the hunt, Artemis can command and communicate with any animal, from birds to land animals, including even snakes.[4] Compelled Actaeon's hounds to rip him apart after his transformation[3])
• Weather Manipulation (Made it so her private glade is in a perpetual state of summer[3])
• Weapon Mastery and Danmaku (Artemis is capable of shooting so many arrows at once that an entire glade looks as though it is filled with a "golden haze"[4], slaughtering all enemies and sparing every single animal with complete precision)
• Instinctive Action Extrasensory Perception (Artemis's instincts allow her to sense fellow Olympians ahead of time.[4])

Spoiler: Other

• Extra speed justification of blitzing Ares with her arrows.
• Direct lifting strength scaling to Ares and Athena, since we have a Universal Energy System that affects physicals.
• Genius Intelligence rating, specifically in the field of hunting, since she should have the same awareness of her domain as Kratos, who sees all war and conflict across time and space.
• Better stamina justification

Agree: 6 (DarkDragonMedeus, Theglassman12, Catzlaflame, Eseseso, Fixxed, ChoursDropoff, )

Disagree: 0

Neutral: 0

 

[Planck69]

@DarkDragonMedeus @Emirp sumitpo @AbaddonTheDisappointment @Catzlaflame @KingTempest

Any input would be appreciated.

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

Looks alright.

 

[Eseseso]

Having seen this beforehand, I think this looks good.

 

[Fixxed]

Seems simple, agree

 

[ChoursDropoff]

I disagree with instinctive reaction. Reading the passage is clear that this is better defined extra sensory perception or enhanced senses. not instinct. Reading the except

“Shhh Artemis tensed with a gesture she summoned her bow; another gesture produced a golden staff. Nocked and ready to draw”

Nothing her remotely implies instinct is being used she simply was able to sense Ares before Athena could. There is no “movement without consciousness thought” happening there.

I also disagree with weather manipulation. Ignoring the fact the scan doesn’t even reference Artemis there is no manipulation of weather happening there.

 

[Kenny Mccormick 0v0]

I agree

 

[ShionAH]

"Instinctive Action (Artemis's instincts allow her to sense fellow Olympians ahead of time.[4])"

Planck, how is this Instinctive? Sensing beings is EP.

 

[Planck69]

I suppose that would be a better label for it.

I also disagree with weather manipulation. Ignoring the fact the scan doesn’t even reference Artemis there is no manipulation of weather happening there.

It really doesn't need to. Unless we think Olympus can just have such a setting specifically for her own chambers, there really isn't anyone else who can be responsible. And if you do have a better label got it then you can suggest it.

 

[ShionAH]

Anyways if you change IA to EP then I agree.

 

[LuffyRuffy46307]

It seems good

 

[ChoursDropoff]

I suppose that would be a better label for it.


It really doesn't need to. Unless we think Olympus can just have such a setting specifically for her own chambers, there really isn't anyone else who can be responsible. And if you do have a better label got it then you can suggest it.

Do we have proof she created these chambers out of curiosity?

 

[Planck69]

Do we have proof she created these chambers out of curiosity?

The chambers themselves aren't at all special, they're just another part of the Hall of Eternity. Hers is the only one with the permanently summer glade within it while the others are mostly normal in their contents.

 

[Theglassman12]

the additions look fine to me

 

[ChoursDropoff]

the additions look fine to me

Instinctive reaction is still off beyond that everything else is okay I guess. I’d replace the ability with extra sensory perception.

 

[Planck69]

Instinctive reaction is still off beyond that everything else is okay I guess. I’d replace the ability with extra sensory perception.

Already changed it in OP.

 

[Hellbeast]

Looks dope, can’t wait to see which Gods are next for a revision

 

[Catzlaflame]

Looks good as far as I can see

 

[Theglassman12]

@ChoursDropoff the OP already changed it to ESP when I made my vote so bringing this up to me is pointless

 

[Planck69]

Since there's no contention and enough votes, I'll apply the changes.

 

[Planck69]

Done. Closing the thread.