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Fixing Dragon Ball Profiles Part: 2 | Saiyan Saga

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Again, as you all know, Dragon Ball profiles are missing scans, references, formatting, or justification. I will be starting to fix them all in due time since it is a time-consuming task.

I am aware of Vegeta, being part of the Saiyan Saga villains, but his profile has too much to add/fix. I have to postpone the revision until I finish.

All profiles have non-canon abilities that are not seen in the manga and are only anime exclusive. I have to remove them for the obvious reason that these profiles are manga only.


Here is the sandbox with the changes, which has the following characters:

Raditz

Nappa

Saibamen




The Limited Longevity comes from the accepted CRT: https://vsbattles.com/threads/saiyans-limited-longevity.133568/
 
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Everything seems fine evidence wise but if you're using the bolded paragraph format you can't bold descriptors like "likely", "possibly" or "limited", you can only bold the abilities themselves.
 
What am i supposed to Ctrl + F.?Elite saiyans? If yes I am not denying the existence of such a divison among saiyan race. It's arguable whether such a divison even grants anything special apart from a sense of superior status because existence of goku and broly proves that low class saiyans aren't any inferior to elite saiyan.
 
  • I agree on Damage that Blutz Waves should be proven to be harmful in order to give the saiyans resistance.
  • I'd say the wording could use some tweaks, stuff like "acrobatics via Ki", "Resistance to Gravity via Planet Vegeta" etc... doesn't sound good.
  • Raditz's afterimages is really shaky, since the panel shows what looks like a standard motion blur to convey a feeling of speed. Same goes for the Saibaimen, they're just moving at FTE speed.
  • All previous abilities shouldn't be written in the Standard Equipment tabber.
  • Have the Saibaimen ever shown to be able of flight? I just can't remember right now.
  • We don't scale stamina like AP anymore, so Nappa should have solid evidences, and right now I just can't remember anything that would put him specifically over that threshold.

Everything else looks good, nice job.
 
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