Fire Punch Revision

[Armorchompy]

old profile

revised profile (plus a bunch of notes for other characters that may get turned into profiles or not)

not much else to say : )

 

[Shmooply]

I give this revision a

out of ten.

jokes aside ill check the reworked profile later

 

[Armorchompy]

hm

i may find some use for that .png

 

[Shmooply]

Yea rework looks good. You could calculate how strong he would be for lifting that tree if the plant's age has ever been shown, for obvious reasons.

 

[azontr]

I have no comments on the rework itself but this CRT has made me want to read Fire Punch.

 

[Dalesean027]

Damn I'll say as usual you've made a much better and detailed looking profile even if I don't know about the verse

 

[Armorchompy]

I have no comments on the rework itself but this CRT has made me want to read Fire Punch.

Please never look at the profile again and do, it's amazing (if a little edgy early on, but that is very worth it) and going into it unspoiled is totally worth it

 

[azontr]

Please never look at the profile again and do, it's amazing (if a little edgy early on, but that is very worth it) and going into it unspoiled is totally worth it

Well, to late, I already did, but, reading it right now(on chapter 10) and I'm loving it.

To actually comment on the revision, it looks a lot more fleshed out than the current profile, so, I think it's fine but I don't know enough about Fire Punch to say if anything is incorrect or not.

 

[Confluctor]

Seems good

 

[ElixirBlue]

Looks better than the old one but Others, References, and Discussions, should be placed at the bottom of the page.

 

[Armorchompy]

Looks better than the old one but Others, References, and Discussions, should be placed at the bottom of the page.

They are, what's under them is just drafts for other possible files for the verse.

Fine to apply?

 

[azontr]

Finished reading Fire Punch and can now comment on the authenticity/correctness of the rework, which I mostly agree with, but;

Shouldn't Agni also have social influencing when he has Doma's fire? Or does he not because the constant agony makes him a dumbass?

 

[Armorchompy]

Shouldn't Agni also have social influencing when he has Doma's fire? Or does he not because the constant agony makes him a dumbass?

Yeah that's basically why I didn't.

Did you like FP? also damn you're a speed reader

 

[azontr]

Aight. I think that makes sense, I just wanted to make sure.

And yeah, Fire Punch was awesome, but it was also ******* insane ngl, took me a good couple minutes to process the ending.

 

[Armorchompy]

Aight. I think that makes sense, I just wanted to make sure.

And yeah, Fire Punch was awesome, but it was also ******* insane ngl, took me a good couple minutes to process the ending.

That's how you know it's good shit

 

[azontr]

Yeah.

Spoiler

Agni ******* his "sister" kinda caught me off guard ngl.

 

[Armorchompy]

Yeah.

Spoiler

Agni ******* his "sister" kinda caught me off guard ngl.

Yeah that is kinda wild but at the same time I feel it's ultimately meant to be a good ending. I dunno if they're really actually having intercourse either, I doubt either of them even know what that is by this point

 

[azontr]

Eh, your probably right, it just seemed kinda sus when I was reading it lol.

 

[ElixirBlue]

They are, what's under them is just drafts for other possible files for the verse.

Fine to apply?

It seems fine from my end. A drastically improved version with references.

 

[Armorchompy]

Thanks, will apply then