I kind of forgot about this, so might as well continue.
The AP for Cosmic Legend and Eternal are fine. For Half-Step Third Realm, though, wouldn't he be Low 1-C normally? Considering he can already destroy universes before hand (3D + 1D of time), and the fact he occupies a 4th dimension of space, then it would be 4D + 1D of time. Though I'm not dimension savvy so I'm not sure 100% sure.
The other APs are fine, and I already talked about UEs.
Now, for speed, they are all fine, and as for Eternals, I'm not even sure how you'd take the Miniature Universe into account, and I think we generally just classify it as Pocket-Reality Manip, rather than smth related to speed or anything like that. For Half-Step, changes seem fine.
Range, well, if Half-Step do qualify for Low 1-C normally, then it should just be Low Complex, otherwise everything is fine.
Everything else seems fine.
For abilities, I skimmed through it and focused mostly on the important ones (Law, Non-duality, etc...), and aside from Plot Manipulation, everything seems fine. For Plot Manipulation, you kind of need to have an actual narrative-esque structure to manipulate, rather than just being able to change everything with your will.
Also, I have seen the translation and the talk about UEs, and I still think they qualify for 1-A, since they are the foundation, above everything, etc...
I'll continue to read the abilities to see if I missed anything, but they generally seem fine, but If I saw something that doesn't seem right, I'll just comment it here. Otherwise, just count me as agreeing to the revision, with the addition of the things I've noted above.