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Great so, could you make a official submission post then?Done
Also fixed a broken link too
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josuke scansGood, we are getting going.
Dont forget to state which category ya want them to win though
Oh dang, guess I need to say a few words to Master then, huh?Link, category, some words as to why people should vote for it. Same goes for everyone who wants to submitt as well
Each submission a seperate postOh dang, guess I need to say a few words to Master then, huh?
Btw. should I make a separate post for each nomination or will new posts be made for the voting
I added a <br> tag to separate the tabbers and the AP so they aren't clumped together.Alright, NOw its fixed
DT, I applaud you. You have somehow managed to make a page with:In that case let's do this again:
Master for best visual profile.
Generally, the formatting for a character with 200+ abilities is a challenge. Especially if many of those abilities have detailed information known about them.
There was basically no way to keep things readable while keeping the explanations constrained to the P&A. One could have tried with a scrollbox and bullet list, but even that wouldn't have looked good with pictures and sub-points and the way many abilities correspond to none or several powers on the wiki.
So instead, I decided to do the only reasonable thing and use the P&A section to provide just a short summary of what the character can do in our sides terms while leaving virtually all explanations to the Notable A/T section.
However, due to the sheer volume of information even that would have gotten messy, so I decided to organize the abilities into some sections, which can be easily accessed from the table of contents.
I also tried to roughly sort the skills such that the most relevant bullet points are listed first in each section. (or the most fundamental ones that are basis for the other stuff)
Aside from that I looked up some scans from the manga and added them besides the skill texts to illustrate the effects.
That's basically intended, layout-wise. Together with the summary (which doesn't get to below the image) it builds a nice block of less important information, so that the image doesn't reach into the powers and stats section. That in turn makes the more important powers and stats section look much cleaner.The contents section takes up half the start of the page, the image takes up the other half
Tabbers don't work on mobile and are hence not an ideal solution. Given, sometimes they are the best option. Like when you have a long P&A section with several keys that otherwise is hard to read. For these purposes I think sections are the superior alternative.The page has no concept of tabbers
Why? All of the skills are and should be part of the Notable A/T section.Set Skills should just be apart of Notable Attacks and Techniques
If you want to go to a section go to the ToC. That sends you directly there. If you don't want to go to a specific point, but just scroll through as you read/skim, endless scrolling work better as you don't have to scroll up and down.The sheer amount of skills without tabbers make the page nearly endless and an absolute nightmare to scroll through
There are literally as many as on any other page. Summary, Powers and Stats, Others and References are the only Heading 2 sections. (unless you mean something else with summary)Way too many H2 tags
Well, I'm not nominating it for best sourced for a reason. However, I generally disagree with the need for scans here. This is a Web Novel. Each chapter is like 2 pages long and the content is on the internet. It's very easy to find the quotes from the references.The P&A section has references but no scans to go along with the links, making it practically a text wall
IIRC that was recommended as best practice for listing references in a past thread, as it clearly shows where the list of Resistances ends. That's why I used it. And the resistances are listed "individually" still. As in, they are all spelled out and unambiguous.The resistances section of the P&A goes like "Resistances ()" instead of listing the resistances individually
Mind Control and Body Control, as the brackets behind that resistance clarify. A look into the "Resistance & Nullification Skills" section will as first skill also show you a "Control Immunity" skill, which expands on the matter. (along with the rest listed there) Reason for the formulation is that said skill in itself is an equally vague control resistance, which might include various things besides the Mind & Body Control that get explicitely mentioned.The resistances are poorly worded and some are straight up confounding (like wtf is "control" you didn't even link a power for it)
It's 200+ powers. No matter how it is organized, some reading will always be necessary if you want to take a detailed look at everything. Conciseness isn't a criterion for this category anyway.You cannot pay me to find where the powers come from due to just how long it is
As said, in best sourced people will just not like the lack of scans, even if the quotes are easy to find.Basically: This should be a Best Sourced Profile submission, because anything else makes my head hurt.
like randomguy yes
I'm glad you like it, but the image and contents bar are so big that it immediately makes it jarring the read. This also goes into the issue of having way too many heading tags that bloats the contents bar, but that's later down the line.That's basically intended, layout-wise. Together with the summary (which doesn't get to below the image) it builds a nice block of less important information, so that the image doesn't reach into the powers and stats section. That in turn makes the more important powers and stats section look much cleaner.
Your first point is a non-issue because tabbers also separate information into different blocks on mobile, which is still better than having one long text block that appears on your page, and the fact that majority of VSBW is made for computers, not mobile devices. In the case of this page tabbers are needed to separate the information so that it's easily readable and followable, along with condensing the page length because like another point of mine says, it's a nightmare to scroll through the page.Tabbers don't work on mobile and are hence not an ideal solution. Given, sometimes they are the best option. Like when you have a long P&A section with several keys that otherwise is hard to read. For these purposes I think sections are the superior alternative.
Doesn't look like it the Skills section is a heading tag while the Notable A/T section is just bolded paragraph. It makes it look jarring.Why? All of the skills are and should be part of the Notable A/T section.
That doesn't help the page being as long as it is, the problem is that the page is so long that finding anything specific in the page requires scrolling all around the page to find it, which makes it jarring. You also can't be suggesting that endless scrolling should be needed to read your page better, that just makes it worse.If you want to go to a section go to the ToC. That sends you directly there. If you don't want to go to a specific point, but just scroll through as you read/skim, endless scrolling work better as you don't have to scroll up and down.
My mistake, I meant far too many heading tags in general, not just H2. Counting up the amount of headings on this page, there's 15 tags, and not including the normal ones there's 11 extra headings than in normal pages. Not only does this bloat the page, it makes sorting through information a challenge. This could be fixed with tabbers, because even the mobile version would look better with them.There are literally as many as on any other page. Summary, Powers and Stats, Others and References are the only Heading 2 sections. (unless you mean something else with summary)
Your not addressing the issue here. The P&A section of formatted horribly and has no scans except for references, which requires the user to look up the web novel chapter, read through it and find the scan themselves, instead of just linking it with some sort of explanation and maybe adding a reference for extra context. This is what pages like The Hunter (Bloodborne) do, and it looks far better visually then what Master has going on. Also, the powers and resistances need better wording in general. P&A sections are a recurring issue in your pages, and once again tabbers would help alleviate this issue.Well, I'm not nominating it for best sourced for a reason. However, I generally disagree with the need for scans here. This is a Web Novel. Each chapter is like 2 pages long and the content is on the internet. It's very easy to find the quotes from the references.
This isn't just listing references, this is listing resistances. This is like putting Powers and Abilities () and then putting all the powers inside the brackets. That may just be better than what is going on here, because at least it would be consistent. Also, the powers section does it the normal way just fine, so why is the resistances section different? Another pet peeve is how they do not actually list the power name, but some buzzword to help describe them (like Control being used for Mind Manipulation and whatever else it is), so it's not unambiguous at all if I have to click the link to find out what some of them even are.IIRC that was recommended as best practice for listing references in a past thread, as it clearly shows where the list of Resistances ends. That's why I used it. And the resistances are listed "individually" still. As in, they are all spelled out and unambiguous.
Then list it as Mind Manipulation and Biological Manipulation, instead of listing it as Control and putting (mind and body) after it. It doesn't even have a link to it. And like my next point states, you can't pay me to look through the Skill section to see exactly what you mean. Just list it by it's actual name, it's more clear that way. Even if it's vague, you list it as what it's shown, and maybe make a note that it could include more things.Mind Control and Body Control, as the brackets behind that resistance clarify. A look into the "Resistance & Nullification Skills" section will as first skill also show you a "Control Immunity" skill, which expands on the matter. (along with the rest listed there) Reason for the formulation is that said skill in itself is an equally vague control resistance, which might include various things besides the Mind & Body Control that get explicitely mentioned.
The ways it's formatted makes necessary reading far longer, no matter if you want to skim it or not. Conciseness may not be a category, but formatting is, which this page fails at.It's 200+ powers. No matter how it is organized, some reading will always be necessary if you want to take a detailed look at everything. Conciseness isn't a criterion for this category anyway.
Fair.As said, in best sourced people will just not like the lack of scans, even if the quotes are easy to find.
Think Loid is a bit better than Yor tbhHmmm...Yor Briar and Chisato Nishikigi maybe?
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Quite literally everything on the profile that could possibly require scans have said scans and references as well, the profile is also extremely readable given it's relative small size and the clever usage of bolded abilities to distinguish abilities from hyperlinked explanations. Honestly it's one of the best profiles I've ever made, and that's saying something since.
- I'm decently good at making profiles as shown with pages like Morgan Yu and Trigun's Plant Physiology. It's also supported by the fact that other profile creators like @Wrath_Of_Itachi, @KingTempest, @Arcker123 etc believe i have/make some of the best profiles on the entire site.
- I made that shit in an hour or two because i was bored and wanted to do something .
It's also unironically the best formatted Naruto profile on the site.