Tensura Crt: Profile Creation | Carrera LN

[Shiraito983]

the sandbox is done

Shiraito983/Sandbox 2

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[Jozaysmith?]

the sandbox is done

Shiraito983/Sandbox 2

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What you need now seems to be more scans on the devil lord section

 

[GarrixianXD]

ok

 

[Shiraito983]

ok

thanks

 

[Jozaysmith?]

thanks

Void manip btw
It said the 7 devil kings are the one who can use nihility banish

 

[CodeCCLL]

There's a lot to work through.

Also, stop trying to scale all of Diablo's abilities to other primordials.

 

[Shiraito983]

There's a lot to work through.

Also, stop trying to scale all of Diablo's abilities to other primordials.

Remove

What you need now seems to be more scans on the devil lord section

Added

 

[CodeCCLL]

Remove

Added

I wasn't talking about Mariabell's death manipulation, it should stay in that profile but immortality type 4 negation and Diablo's flight scan should be removed.

And a few things:

It should be removed at least at Universe level+, it should be just Universe level+ (I think only Ultimate Slime Rimuru could be specified as such if desired because it has a multiplier of 10x above the True Dragon level), and Carrera's durability should be Universal+ as it can tank its own energy output and attacks from similar characters to a point.

Universal+ range rating should be removed. Carrera needs to prove that it can bombard the entire universal space-time continuum.

There isn't need to mention again in the profile the abilities that are on the Spiritual Lifeform Physiology page. (Such as Possession, Elemental Manipulation)

Feel free to explain if I'm missing something.

 

[Shiraito983]

I wasn't talking about Mariabell's death manipulation, it should stay in that profile but immortality type 4 negation and Diablo's flight scan should be removed.

Well sure but flight should stay and change the wording.

And a few things:

It should be removed at least at Universe level+, it should be just Universe level+ (I think only Ultimate Slime Rimuru could be specified as such if desired because it has a multiplier of 10x above the True Dragon level), and Carrera's durability should at least be Universal+ as it can tank its own energy output and attacks from similar characters to a point.

Universal+ range rating should be removed. Carrera needs to prove that it can bombard the entire universal space-time continuum.

Feel free to edit it

There isn't need to mention again in the profile the abilities that are on the Spiritual Life physiology page. (Such as Possession, Elemental Manipulation)

Possession should stay. Well at elemental manipulation that thing can be taken down

Feel free to explain if I'm missing something.

 

[CodeCCLL]

Possession should stay.

Demons ability to possess comes from the fact that they are Spiritual Life Forms. So I think it's pretty unnecessary.

 

[Shiraito983]

Demons ability to possess comes from the fact that they are Spiritual Life Forms. So I think it's pretty unnecessary.

Oh right

 

[CodeCCLL]

Well sure but flight should stay and change the wording.

Feel free to edit it

I will get it done within today.

In the meantime, it would be great if you work on the reference part. Many references include volume numbers only, not chapter numbers.

 

[Shiraito983]

Sure

I will get it done within today.

In the meantime, it would be great if you work on the reference part. Most references include volume numbers only, not chapter numbers.

 

[Jozaysmith?]

First key doesn't have ultimate skill
So she should be a '''genius''' add that
Then devil lord key would be extraordinary genius
For the genius wording
Gifted in Magic and Combat, Carrera is one of the seven primordials and have lived even before the creation of humankind. Carrera can use gravity collapse which is considered as impossible to execute in real life by the humans because it requires very precise magic control.

 

[Mafuuu]

Where FTL Perception? Carrera has the same TA as Rimuru.

 

[Jozaysmith?]

Where FTL Perception? Carrera has the same TA as Rimuru.

Volume 21

 

[Mafuuu]

Volume 21

Well I mean, in profile there is no FTL perception

 

[Shiraito983]

Well I mean, in profile there is no FTL perception

Ill applied it later

 

[Shiraito983]

done on reference. also don't add universal+ on her durability, she doesn't scale to it
I don't understand why you remove the (+) when she scales past on standard energy requirement

 

[Jozaysmith?]

Void manip btw
It said the 7 devil kings are the one who can use nihility banish

 

[Shiraito983]

Which vol again?

 

[Jozaysmith?]

Which vol again?

20

 

[Jozaysmith?]

I want to open a thread for primal demons for more addition
But you can release your thread no issue

 

[Wikisource]

It's ok

 

[CodeCCLL]

done on reference. also don't add universal+ on her durability, she doesn't scale to it

I think it needs to scale somehow but okay.

I don't understand why you remove the (+) when she scales past on standard energy requirement

In fact, in most profiles the (+) sign is (usually) not used and has no official meaning. But okay, let's add it since we use it in Tensura profiles.

 

[Shiraito983]

I think it needs to scale somehow but okay.

In fact, in most profiles the (+) sign is (usually) not used and has no official meaning. But okay, let's add it since we use it in Tensura profiles.

Any more issue?

 

[CodeCCLL]

Any more issue?

I'll edit the references to include the reference name and add some things missing from NA/T, but other than that it's good.

 

[Dereck03]

I cropped the image to fit it, rest seems fine.