Sumireko Usami's addition

[Andykhang]

I want to add two thing for her: First is that she could casually make a miniature black hole that blast an opponent away when exploded, and that she have a Hyperspace where she could pulled object out and attack.( Or it's teleportation of the object)

 

[Antvasima]

Well, we have a Black Hole feats in fictio page, for what are claimed to be black holes, but that do not at all behave accordingly, so I do not know if you can call it that.

A "hammerspace"/higher-dimensional pocket, that she can pull objects out of, seems like an acceptable addition though.

 

[Andykhang]

Well, it does make object orbiting around it, and explode like it contain some kind of energy. Adding some Spell Card logic and you could said it's a safe-ish kind of black hole made of psychic power as a description. (Remind me of a certain Pokemon's Pokedex entries)

Edit: Beside, the character is already going faster than the speed of light, so...

Edit 2: Though on closer look, it's less like a black hole and more like an artificial small-scale galaxy-like thing (Maybe a quasar?). So guess it's downgrade into gravity manipulation application of her psychokinetic.

Edit 3: Wait... is that even a downgrade?

 

[Antvasima]

As long as you call it something other than black hole, it should be fine.

 

[Andykhang]

I don't know if calling it a small-scale quasar would count though, since it's basically a black hole itself. But I guess gravity manipulation is good enough.

So, could I add it now?

 

[Antvasima]

Yes.

 

[Andykhang]

Oh yeah, should I remove TeleKinesis from her profile? since both the word are basically the same and Psychokinesis is more accurate

 

[Antvasima]

Okay.

 

[Andykhang]

I'll do it then.