Need confirmation on profile creation ( no other discussion )

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Since i previous thread I proposed a profile creation and there that time there were lack of calculation and stuff , now every thing have been calculated and confirmed by cal mod and we used all those , now the profile is done , can I make it official one?
Here is the sandbox

TWILIGHT-OP/sandbox1

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[Dereck03]

The proposed profile looks good. I also see that you took insipiration on this.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

The proposed profile looks good. I also see that you took insipiration on this.

Can say me and my friend did alot of research to make profile look as good as we can,

 

[Dereck03]

You guys did a good job this time. Anyway, since you are simply seeking approval/evaluation about the overall quality to post the profile, if you want to wait for someone else to approve your profile then feel free to do so and post it whenever you wish.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

You guys did a good job this time. Anyway, since you are simply seeking approval/evaluation about the overall quality to post the profile, if you want to wait for someone else to approve your profile then feel free to do so and post it whenever you wish.

Yeah I do, am gonna wait for 2-3 mods if they think it's look fine then I will make it one.so till that I am gonna wait.

 

[NatzuX]

Can say me and my friend did alot of research to make profile look as good as we can,

I have 2 questions about your sandbox. Please answer me at your convenience.

1) Based on this I'm curious about Guardian Light, where do you get the feat from? It's not like any other feats from the anime.

• Self-Sustenance (Type 1; Via Guardian Light)

2) From the explanation evidence as far as I watched the video. I didn't notice that she was talking. Besides being just telepathy, Something like that.

• Underwater Breathing (Via "Trick Of Water", she can breath and talk normally while moving underwater)

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

From the explanation evidence as far as I watched the video. I didn't notice that she was talking. Besides being just telepathy, Something like that

I think @Fallen_Angelicx accidentally took that talking part, she cannot talk, but yeah she can breath underwater.

Based on this I'm curious about Guardian Light, where do you get the feat from? It's not like any other feats from the anime.

What do u mean?

 

[EldemadeDityjon]

Put some explanation for these abilities

• Superhuman Physical Characteristics
• Martial Arts
• Swordsmanship

Also add references for the scans or links and explanation in Ability section.

Regarding speed. Instead of Possibly you could use Likely. That feat does shows better speed feats.

Possibly Far Higher (Capable of blocking, evading, countering and even outspeeding beams from Wang Ling's newly created world)

I'm pretty sure swordsman normally scale to durability of the sword. Should be like this. Just ask some more people opinion on this.

Universe level+ with Jingke

Other things seems fine though.

 

[NatzuX]

What do u mean?

I mean the video of the feat you put in the Guardian Light. Where is the source of that feat? such as anime or games etc.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

I mean the video of the feat you put in the Guardian Light. Where is the source of that feat? such as anime or games etc

Bruh it's anime, s2 ep 11

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Also add references for the scans or links and explanation in Ability section.

Will add refrence.

Regarding speed. Instead of Possibly you could use Likely. That feat does shows better speed feats.

Ok

I'm pretty sure swordsman normally scale to durability of the sword. Should be like this. Just ask some more people opinion on this.

Nah her durability isn't that much, I would prefer not to do this as it will mess up her profile.

 

[Fallen_Angelicx]

Nah her durability isn't that much

Universal Energy System is why it's that much

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

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Universal Energy System is why it's that much

Is saying her durability should be universe+ but she didn't showed any feats for that durability, does she?

 

[ImmortalDread]

Most ironic powerscaling line from author.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Most ironic powerscaling line from author.

I mean she did said that.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Most ironic powerscaling line from author.

HEre

 

[ImmortalDread]

She is simping on him, that's all.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

She is simping on him, that's all.

Simp is kinda strong word for her, she just care for him that's all.

 

[EldemadeDityjon]

Nah her durability isn't that much, I would prefer not to do this as it will mess up her profile.

I'm not talking about her durability. With that sword she can be scaled to that much. Like she can defend attacks with that sword like that. Though I'm not sure if thats how it works.

 

[NatzuX]

Bruh it's anime, s2 ep 11

ok looks good for now but you should add telepathy

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

ok looks good for now but you should add telepathy

Never saw her using telepathy? Where did u get that?

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

I'm not talking about her durability. With that sword she can be scaled to that much. Like she can defend attacks with that sword like that. Though I'm not sure if thats how it works.

That sword can tank attacks from unsealed wang ling, so I think that will go to swords durability.

 

[NatzuX]

Never saw her using telepathy? Where did u get that?

Sun Rong, wasn't she communicating with people on land while underwater? or she just uses headphones to communicate.

and please fix the explanation because she can't talk underwater. She's just underwater.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

and please fix the explanation because she can't talk underwater. She's just underwater.

Wait i forgot about that, lemme fix it

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Universal Energy System is why it's that much

Can u add refrence to her abilities?

 

[Fallen_Angelicx]

Can u add refrence to her abilities?

Over the weekend maybe. Not rn

Also when will the profile be published

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Over the weekend maybe. Not rn

Also when will the profile be published

When I get 2-3 approval

 

[Emirp sumitpo]

The profile looks fine, but I think capitalizing the entire quote looks quite ugly.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

The profile looks fine, but I think capitalizing the entire quote looks quite ugly.

So should I change it ?

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Changed it

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Now that I got 2 reviews, and there are no problems with it so I. Published the page.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Here is the profile page

Sun Rong (anime)

Sun Rong( 孙蓉 ) is the main heroine of The Daily Life of the Immortal King, and Student Council President of the Cultivation School League of the Songhai Faction. She is the current president of the Student Union at 60TH High School and class monitor of grade one, class three. She is the...

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[Emirp sumitpo]

I'll close this then.