Korone profile rework and minor Junko improvement and additions (Demon King Daimaou)

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Alright, so I've been reworking some profiles for the verse and now it's Korone's turn.

Reworked sandbox:

StorytellingDemonKing/Korone

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Current profile:

Korone

Korone is one of the main characters of Ichiban Ushiro no Daimaou. Liradan who was commanded to observe Akuto, she enrolled Constant Magic Academy as one of his classmates. While she may appear as lazy she constantly does her job and always observes Akuto, sending the data to the government...

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Additions include:

Spoiler: Korones new abilities

Genius Intelligence

Marksmanship

Inorganic Physiology (Liradans are constructed from mana[1])

Self-Sustenance (Type 1, 2 and 3; Doesn't need to eat, sleep and breath. Can continue functioning indefinitely)

Information Analysis (Can register foreign bodies invading humans[1] and predict what treatment is the best. Can retrieve others records[1] and know what they have done previously. Knows how much mana[2] someone has left. Has a wave analysis function[3] and using that she can deduct what causes it, such as music or perhaps and attack)

Limited Sound Manipulation (Can summon a speaker and make her voice louder[1])

Homing Attack

Empathic Manipulation (Had access to Fujiko's drug which she can fire that makes others become calm and zombie-like[5] where they will simply go away even though they were ready to fight before)

Vehicular Mastery (Skilled at maneuvering with her roller[6] skates that have engines attached to them)

Photographic Memory (Memorized all the scenery she hasn't seen before instantly[4] and can likely record all others things she has seen once)

Enhanced Hearing and Night Vision (Heard someone following her from a distance[4] as they began to move, and stated she has good eyesight when its dark outside[4])

Electro-Magnetic Manipulation (Has a railgun[7] which typically use that uses electromagnetic force to launch high-velocity projectiles)

Stealth Mastery (Can sneak up on her target[3] without them noticing until she reveals herself)

Invisibility (With her invisibility cover anyone under it will become invisible[3])

Light Manipulation and Energy Projection (Can fire beams of light[9]. Can fire ray blasts[8] that have enough range to wipe out several thousand troops)

Regeneration Negation (Low-Mid; Killed Act 8 Akuto Sai due to him not being able to regenerate wounds caused by her[11])

Instinctive Action (Can turn on close range reactive dodging[11])

Acid Manipulation (With ClothesMeltrin[12])

Her intelligence will also be expanded upon with:

At least Genius (Liradans have access to records of the government, which combined with Korone's intuition, leads her to have a very high deductive ability.[1] For example, she can quickly find out what each gender likes or dislikes by going through her databank[17] and use it as an advantage. Can cross-reference the logs of every citizen in the empire and see what changed after the war,[18] and analyzed the information.[18] She added in the data possessed by the Black Mages to the calculations she'd done so far and improved her precision from 90% to 97% extremely quickly.[18] With this information she was able to confirm Keena Doronz is a human created by The Law of Identity using a data warp.[18] Is an excellent commander and slaughtered 300 students with her army which is about what the "game" allowed.[9] A liradans combat program contains all of the fighting style of masters that would help in combat, except for the most bizarre ones, which allows her to expertly use even a magic staff as a combat tool.[8] Korone has surgical tools and can perform various operations, even operating on Marine's brain and extracting an implant[19])

Rest of the changes should be self-explanatory like equipment and standard tactics.

Now, onto Junko's minor improvements, which is primarily P&A rework and small addition.

Reworked sandbox:

StorytellingDemonKing/Junko Hattori

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Current profile:

Junko Hattori

Junko Hattori is a main character from Ichiban Ushiro No Dai Maou. She is a student at Constant Magic Academy and is considered one of the strongest in the school and is Class 1-A's president. Junko can be very serious and has a strict moral code. She can be very prideful at times, and...

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So, yeah. Changes should be pretty straight forward.

 

[CurrySenpai]

thought this was hololive booooooooo

 

[Shiraito983]

agree

 

[Crobatman44]

thought this was hololive booooooooo

Same pain peko.

 

[AKUTO123]

Seems good anyway your work always seems good

 

[EL_xWatcher1234x]

Agree

You should replace: (Inorganic Physiology->incorporeal)
(summoning->dimensional storage )

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

You should replace: (Inorganic Physiology->incorporeal)

She isn't incorporeal. She still has a physical body, just made out of mana that isn't organic. She's a liradan after all. She can still be interacted with.

(summoning->dimensional storage )

She can Summon things from dimensional storage without directly pulling them out, that's why I also listed it. She also has dimensional storage.

 

[EL_xWatcher1234x]

She isn't incorporeal. She still has a physical body, just made out of mana that isn't organic. She's a liradan after all. She can still be interacted with.

Weird, is it like a physical hologram?

She can Summon things from dimensional storage without directly pulling them out, that's why I also listed it. She also has dimensional storage.

Unless she can summon stuff from other places and not limited to her bag it sound like dimensional storage.
like this

Dimensional Storage (also called Hammerspace or Magic satchel) is the ability to store as many items as one wishes in a sort of "storage area" without any regard for running out of room. Users are then able to summon the desired item(s) at their whim, making it seem as if they pulled each object out of thin air.

Summoning doesn't include objects

The ability to summon various beings. The summoned beings may come from a distant place, a different plane of reality, a universe, etc. Also includes calling of undead, souls, energy beings or information beings.

 

[EL_xWatcher1234x]

Nah, a robot without biological things. Uhhh, an android, basically.

My bad, they are created using mana and they don't have an energy body. that's inorganic Physiology

 

[Celestial_Pegasus]

Looks good.

 

[Maverick_Zero_X]

The profile rework seems fine.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Thank you for your evaluation! Since 2 staff members accepted the changes, I have applied them to the profiles and asked the CRT to be closed.