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These revisions are pretty important, so I'd like your thoughts on the following.
Lightning:
Can be summoned from clouds:
"I didn't know what spell the teacher had been casting. Among the drizzling dark clouds that had been there since earlier, bluish-white lightning flashed.
A powerful magic was being invoked, as unnatural winds howled.
My classmates pressed down their hair in the strong winds. The teacher took out the staff she had prepared, and raised it high in the air.
"Mine is the name of Pucchin, the Archmage who wields advanced magic…"
After the teacher declared her name, lightning struck the tip of the staff.
Then, the teacher flipped her cloak, causing it to flutter wildly in the wind.
"The strongest homeroom teacher of the Crimson Demons, the one who will eventually become the principal…!"
Following the teacher's declaration, an even bigger stroke of lightning flashed."
Conducts:
"The lightning bolt dropped below the sphere onto the crowd, and quickly spread through the wet ground after striking the first person. Every single one of them fell to the ground in a heap.
It was more powerful that I expected. I could smell something burning. They aren't dead, I hope."
Has electric properties:
"Oh. There's static electricity around Megumin. Ah. Is this lightning magic?"
In addition, you can also use lightning to stun people in the game which would be an indication of muscle contraction.
Now, for light.
Light:
Can manipulate natural light:
"They turned invisible by using light refraction. Teleport consumes a lot of mana, so they'll run out if they use it so frequently after a battle. I think they just wanted to show off a cool exit… Ouch!"
Scatters in crystals:
"The crimson ray that Duke unleashed scattered upon hitting the lump of ice that Wiz conjured in front of her."
Light attacks are also consistently referred to as beams/flashes of light.
Finally, invulnerability to physical damage:
Invulnerability:
"Not only did she have the ability to use all forms of advanced and teleportation magic, but she could also use explosion magic. Not only does she have a body that's invulnerable to physical attacks, she also has the ability to use all sorts of special skills like Drain Touch. The queen of the undead, the lich, Wiz"
"… Oh right, other than attacks from weapons enchanted by magic, all physical attacks against a lich are harmless. Also, liches have Drain Touch, which absorbs their opponent's life force, and can causes all sorts of abnormal status effects―poison, paralysis, sleep and curse, with a touch. For Wiz, she can defeat the enemy without using magic."
Lightning:
Can be summoned from clouds:
"I didn't know what spell the teacher had been casting. Among the drizzling dark clouds that had been there since earlier, bluish-white lightning flashed.
A powerful magic was being invoked, as unnatural winds howled.
My classmates pressed down their hair in the strong winds. The teacher took out the staff she had prepared, and raised it high in the air.
"Mine is the name of Pucchin, the Archmage who wields advanced magic…"
After the teacher declared her name, lightning struck the tip of the staff.
Then, the teacher flipped her cloak, causing it to flutter wildly in the wind.
"The strongest homeroom teacher of the Crimson Demons, the one who will eventually become the principal…!"
Following the teacher's declaration, an even bigger stroke of lightning flashed."
Conducts:
"The lightning bolt dropped below the sphere onto the crowd, and quickly spread through the wet ground after striking the first person. Every single one of them fell to the ground in a heap.
It was more powerful that I expected. I could smell something burning. They aren't dead, I hope."
Has electric properties:
"Oh. There's static electricity around Megumin. Ah. Is this lightning magic?"
In addition, you can also use lightning to stun people in the game which would be an indication of muscle contraction.
Now, for light.
Light:
Can manipulate natural light:
"They turned invisible by using light refraction. Teleport consumes a lot of mana, so they'll run out if they use it so frequently after a battle. I think they just wanted to show off a cool exit… Ouch!"
Scatters in crystals:
"The crimson ray that Duke unleashed scattered upon hitting the lump of ice that Wiz conjured in front of her."
Light attacks are also consistently referred to as beams/flashes of light.
Finally, invulnerability to physical damage:
Invulnerability:
"Not only did she have the ability to use all forms of advanced and teleportation magic, but she could also use explosion magic. Not only does she have a body that's invulnerable to physical attacks, she also has the ability to use all sorts of special skills like Drain Touch. The queen of the undead, the lich, Wiz"
"… Oh right, other than attacks from weapons enchanted by magic, all physical attacks against a lich are harmless. Also, liches have Drain Touch, which absorbs their opponent's life force, and can causes all sorts of abnormal status effects―poison, paralysis, sleep and curse, with a touch. For Wiz, she can defeat the enemy without using magic."