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Death manipulation is under curse manipulation anyways but I’m going to be neutral towards this.Light novels, huh? I have a reputation with one in particular, but in dealing with He Who Shall Not Be Named, I’ve realized that these verses have a tendency to skirt by a lot of standards just by virtue of having an established reputation as OP. While That One Guy might’ve been the prime example, Yogiri Takatou - and his associated verse, Instant Death - tends to come up as one of the de facto light novels to solo everyone’s verse because of how cool and epic his completely unique and special cheat ability is. Naturally, claims of extreme power make me a little suspicious, and wouldn’t you know it, there’s a ******* treasure trove of wank in here.
So that’s what this thread is. The first part of a full analysis and takedown of another light novel, focusing on Yogiri himself since his abilities are easiest to source. Maybe I’ll do more light novels after this, idk. Probably.
don’t ask me about the staff thread i was supposed to have made by now, i have 0 self control
Death Manipulation
Obvious wank.
Curse Manipulation
Yogiri is able to use his death manipulation on a delay. That isn’t really a curse so much as it is him holding back, as he himself puts it. This is less of a power and more of a separate use of an existing power
Yogiri perception manipulation should be kept in place. As Lain was unable to heal the dog organs that were killed by Yogiri, even after she completely removed it and created a new one. Going by your example that you gave “if the person eye was shot by a gun” simply healing it would be enough to restore its perception but that is not the case with Yogiri’s abilities which is why perception manipulation is being awardedTechnology Manipulation
This is just him killing people who look at him, with those effects carrying across anyone who sees a recording of him activating his power. Don’t let the several pages of text fool you, because it really comes down to this:
“The camera captured the moment his power activated. His mind was likely fairly hazy, so he was probably just targeting anyone looking at him.”
So this is just another instance of how he applies his ability, rather than him being able to directly alter technology itself. Things like this should go under his NA&T instead.
Perception Manipulation
He isn’t directly killing a target’s senses; Rather, he kills the organs responsible for those senses. While it’s supernatural in nature, it isn’t much different from giving someone perception manipulation for shooting someone’s eye with a gun.
Telepathy/Mind Manipulation Negation
This is… an odd case. Basically, when Yogiri uses his powers, he’s able to make it so that a person is unable to be communicated with telepathically or mind controlled. The issue is, the context is that he killed the target’s ‘ears’, so this isn’t really negating the mindhax in question as much as it is deleting the target of those hax. Like how erasing someone’s soul isn’t soulhax negation.
Power Nullification
The scan on the profile is conveniently cropped to leave out the full context. The claim that Yogiri can kill a person’s powers is bunk; As he himself puts it, he merely kills whatever object is fired towards him, while anything that isn’t a direct attack is outside his capabilities. So this should be downgraded to “limited” power null, as characters can still use their powers after the fact, and Yogiri can only nullify a very small number of attacks.
Causality manipulation should be removed as it’s more of causality negation with his abilities being stated to have no cause and effect relationship multiple timesCausality Manipulation
This comes from this set of scans. The general gist is “nobody knows the cause of death when Yogiri uses his powers, so obviously there is no cause and Yogiri can ignore causality”. I don’t need to explain this. This is like saying sudden infant death syndrome is causality hax.
For his SR, “death” is based on his perception and the things he considers to be dear stay dead. Yogiri is bringing his own perception of what “death” entails into reality which gives way for most of his “negations” such as immortality and regen , part of the abilities under the SR page states “negation” and “Existence erasure”Law Manipulation/Subjective Reality/Existence Erasure
First, the easy one. This scan shows Yogiri killing a pocket dimension with different rules. Doesn’t take a genius to figure out that destroying a reality with altered laws doesn’t mean you have law manipulation.
For the other scan… for starters, this feat was performed while he was in his 2nd gate, so idk why this is in the 1st gate key. Even then, killing momentum is just physics manipulation, not really law manipulation despite the two tending to overlap some (he even has physics manipulation in his 2nd key for this reason). Saying that he “kills phenomena” is interesting, but so little extra context is given to that statement that it seems to be a reach to say that he can kill universal laws or whatever. As for SR, saying that what lives and what dies is up to his perception is just saying that he can kill things with a thought, or just decide who lives and who dies. It isn’t turning imagination into reality or whatever.
Huh? Yogiri erasing the UEG, stated to be able to erase souls what exactly is wrong with his existence erasure?As for EE, it’s either incorrectly lumped in with these abilities, or has no scans at all. Either justify it with something else, or it goes.
Agree with the rest anwaysLimited Invulnerability
“While wearing this outfit, projectiles moved unnaturally to avoid Yogiri, fireball magic dissipated on itself and an attack from a greatsword bounced off Yogiri's coat, leaving him completely unharmed. Though attacks that exceed its durability seemingly could still harm Yogiri”
do i really need to explain this one
Resistance to Probability Manipulation
He killed someone who has an ability that lets them dodge anything. That’s it. Considering his ability is “just kill shit without attacking them”, this doesn’t seem to require a “resistance” of any kind.
Resistance to Sealing
Destroying an object that’s been sealed doesn’t really give you any resistance to being sealed yourself. Just lump this in with his power null.
Resistance to Power Bestowal
Yogiri is one of a few people who was not installed with the Battle Song system. However, it’s just an inherent flaw of the program that it sometimes doesn’t have compatibility with a user, so it’s not a resistance on Yogiri’s end.
That’s all for now. There are some other issues I have with his abilities, but those tend to deal with other characters or verse mechanics so I need to save those for later. Also, I recommend explaining his final key’s type 5 acausality in this thread to see if it’s still valid.