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Simple, update for the verse - first will be for the two main heroes as their profiles are the longest so it will take a thread for them. This update will contain: references, addition to powers/resistances and abilities, reworking of the formatting, and statistics modifications.
Verse - I Reincarnated For Nothing: Artpe and Maetel
Link for the sandbox - Sandbox - btw, the sandbox doesn't include these powers in the characters' specific sections yet as they may change but are under their standard formatting sheet so ignore them there, anyway, this is just to have a visual as the important parts are bellow.
Artpe
Maetel
Verse - I Reincarnated For Nothing: Artpe and Maetel
Link for the sandbox - Sandbox - btw, the sandbox doesn't include these powers in the characters' specific sections yet as they may change but are under their standard formatting sheet so ignore them there, anyway, this is just to have a visual as the important parts are bellow.
Artpe
First Key
Addition:
Resistances:
Additions:
Third Key
Additions:
Rewrite/Revision: The second stage[66] Innate Ability of Artpe who unlocked it upon his death. This ability is a fusion[66] between Read All Creation, Materialization, and Reclamation. It let the user to Revision[42] everything he wishes including someone's race, time[66], and even the plot as he was originally a demon born in the Demon World but after his 'Revision', he was sent back in time, as a human, born in the village of the Hero as a Hero himself and thus changing the story.
I had this power previously put as Plot Manipulation but now I'm not that sure if its Plot, Causality, or Fate Manipulation...since It was said to change the whole world and create another timeline (this can be seen from the above scans about memories or from how Silpennon awakened his previous life memories, both selves fused[7] changing him at a fundamental level) thanks to the change I still think it should fit for Plot Manipulation but I would like opinions.
Addition:
Extrasensory Perception (With Read All Creation, he can see even find hidden dungeons[1] which is a pocket dimension[1], and see mana[2]) + (Monsters from the Demon World[3] have outstanding Mana Detection)
Fire Manipulation (Via Hyper Rubbing[9] which can cause ignition. He can create fireballs with the Fireball spell and can incinerate[10] dead beings in a flash)
Power Mimicry (As long the enemy's spells use direct manipulation of magic[16], then it can be mimicked with mana by him. He can learn magic just by looking[17] at a spell book once which usually needs a lot of memorization and computation skills[17])
Vibration Manipulation (Can use his Mana Threads[7] by burrowing them within the earth to cause an earthquake that will produce a landslide)
Resistances:Soul Manipulation (Every level increases the power of one's soul[21], a difference of one level can be fatal as their soul would be of lower quality[11])
Not sure what would fit:Record Link[6] can prevent the death of beings that should be dead.
Removal:Resistances:
Heat Manipulation - baseless made on bad conjunctions
Second KeyAdditions:
Flight (Restricted flight via Float spell) - moved to the second key from the third key as he got the spell in this part of the novel
Sound Manipulation - Loudspeaker Spell: A high-ranking loudspeaker spell that amplifies the voice[8] of the user in all directions which can cover an entire city capital.
Energy Projection (Through the use of Mana Thread to create[9] all kinds of things such as butterflies, arrows, walls, shields, etc)
Social Influencing (A Hero possesses charisma[25] to a degree that it prevents others from arguing with them)
Vibration Manipulation (Via Hypper Rubbing can control[30] the cycle and intensity[31] of vibrations)
Resistances: Curse Manipulation Resistance based on the scan of rage/madness - Via Leveling System, at his level such things won't affect him as he's a Hero[37] making him immune to most curses effects
Removal: Telepathy - no such a thing
Third Key
Additions:
Statistics Reduction (Can amplify[11] the powers of other people's spells by creating an additional magic circle)
Not sure: Can create barriers that make neither mana nor any physical substances[15] to be able to exist within them
Using Reclamation with Materialization can change[16] one's being energy from one type to another like for example Demonic Energy in Mana - It will change magic at a fundamental level[16]
Now, where the fun begins for him and also the hardest thing to gauge. His Revision/Rewrite ability that he acquires in the Third Key. I will present first the ability itself, then the three spells that form it.Rewrite/Revision: The second stage[66] Innate Ability of Artpe who unlocked it upon his death. This ability is a fusion[66] between Read All Creation, Materialization, and Reclamation. It let the user to Revision[42] everything he wishes including someone's race, time[66], and even the plot as he was originally a demon born in the Demon World but after his 'Revision', he was sent back in time, as a human, born in the village of the Hero as a Hero himself and thus changing the story.
Read All Creation: It is an innate ability that allows him to find out information about anything that exists in the world[21]. It also let him see the composition of the world[11]. His soul held the Innate Ability which let him pierce through all lies[21], showing him the truth of the World
Materialization: An Innate Ability that steps into the domain of Gods. It's not a simple spell, it embodies[61] the Spell as a whole. It let the uses manufacture, change and shape[61] the spells. At the same time, it can be used to destroy the spell[35] of foes or to change[62] Magic in Mana and Mana in Magic. Any spell manifested with this ability won't disappear as its Record will remain[63] even if the spell used comes from a one-time use Artifact. Using his Materialization[67], Artpe copied[67] the concept of the Fragment of Destruction which it's the Hand of a Demonic God, a Concept[67] itself that exists in another dimension thus gaining its power.
Reclamation: A magic spell that returns[65] everything, including the entire existence of something to its origin.
Now, a few more characters thanks to their vast Records, resisted this "Revision" and remembered things from the previous world like the Ice Queen - Her record is so powerful that she remembers[41] the World that was rewritten. The Demon - Was able to resist Artpe's Reclamation spell which was trying to rewrite his existence and Record[21] and a third one would be The Demon King who also resisted.I had this power previously put as Plot Manipulation but now I'm not that sure if its Plot, Causality, or Fate Manipulation...since It was said to change the whole world and create another timeline (this can be seen from the above scans about memories or from how Silpennon awakened his previous life memories, both selves fused[7] changing him at a fundamental level) thanks to the change I still think it should fit for Plot Manipulation but I would like opinions.
Maetel
First Key
Additional:
Second Key
Additional:
This means she got Artpe's power somehow in the end or she had it from the beginning and used it till she got her perfect happy ending. Then for her profile we'll either have to give the power to her last key or directly to her first key depending on which point is accepted.
Additional:
Accelerated Development (As a Hero[20], she can learn skills from all classes; A Hero development it's increased as she can learn[21] immediately Skills and Magic which in turn will boost her magical energy and strengthen her body. Her level increases faster[3] than that of Artpe even if they do the same thing. In one week[22], she became a better swordswoman than someone who fought for 10 years. She improves[23] each moment and becomes stronger[23] than someone who was more powerful than her in the middle of the fight. While other people only gain 3 points per level, she gains 10 thanks to being able to learn and use skills[24] in an instant. After she awakened Acceleration[25], her development and peace of evolution is drastically increased. Maetel's development it's so strong that it affects other characters from her party)
Instinctive Reaction (Maetel can act and react instinctively[1] and use magic without needing to think. She can instinctively adapt[4] and react[26] in battle situations bringing the best results from within herself)
Reactive Evolution (As a Hero and thanks to her constitution, Maetel can has the aptitude and talent of awakening skills and adapting to external or internal agents such as instantly gaining Mana Sensitivity[18] by touching a branch infused with mana, or by simply swinging it, she gained swordsmanship and courage skill[1]. By simply getting angry, she developed a Berserk[27] skill. She can learn skills that transcend[4] her level as if it is nothing. Her powers increase[2] as she fights, each moment[27]. Managed to get a level 100 skill[28] at level 2)
Weapon Mastery (The greatest genius of the world in weapon mastery as she's talented[29] enough that Maetel can be better than any other Class using their specialized weapons)
Removal:Resistance Heat Manipulation - same situation as for Artpe
Second Key
Additional:
Social Influencing (A Hero possesses charisma[38] to a degree that it prevents others from arguing with them)
Expert Swordmanship (Her Swordship skill has exceeded level 80[39]. Can calculate[40] the weak points, the position, the movement, the force behind her swings, the resistance of foes against her, and the recoil[40] of her attacks hitting a target in a flash)
Removal: Telepathy - same as for Heat Manipulation
Third Key
Her EoS key with Record Master should be removed as I understand that one was wrong when I first posted the profile, while she can gather all the powers, she didn't do it.
Now, the more confusing part is that in the last chapter 203, the last few sentences were from her PoV and it said the following words.
"Maetel followed behind the children. There was a satisfied smile on her smile.
“Yes. This is it. I’m fine with this. ······there is no need to rewind it again.”
The past 20 years had been peaceful, and it had been picture-perfect.
In that span of time, she hadn’t used the 2nd stage of her Innate ability. Not even once."
This means she got Artpe's power somehow in the end or she had it from the beginning and used it till she got her perfect happy ending. Then for her profile we'll either have to give the power to her last key or directly to her first key depending on which point is accepted.
General Revision for the whole verse
Speed
Artpe and Maetel (first key) have currently Subsonic for moving faster than the eye can follow but that one I'm not sure since these are the feats:
1. "Maetel started running faster. It was as if she was about to evaporate the water on the floor with her blazing speed. She did so in the nick of time, since the passageway started to collapse. An incredible amount of water was falling towards them!"
2. And this one "Can move faster than the eye[19] can follow".
So, I think they should get a "likely" before Subsonic as it's not a sure speed thanks to the text that doesn't give a lot of assurance.
While the rest of the cast and the second plus the third key of these two characters scale to FTL for being able to" react and fight with the Light Spirit King" who is light itself but then again the author's statements don't help much as they are bare-bones, so I would suggest either a change to "possibly Speed of Light" or a removal from the profile. This will put two paths for the speed of the verse:
a. "Likely Subsonic (Can move faster than the eye[19] can follow), with possibly Speed of Light (Could react and fight with the Light Spirit King)"
b. "Likely Subsonic (Can move faster than the eye[19] can follow)"
Attack Potency/Tier
A short one here, the Kraken wasn't shown to be fast so the Kinetic Energy formula thanks to its massive size doesn't work well thus a GPE one was used for the new version which resulted in lower energy output but a more accurate one. New Values
7-B (City level) baseline result for level 200 beings becomes 8-B (City Block level) and from there it's a multiplier of 1.5 for every 50 levels making that characters from level 200 to 300 will be 8-B while those from 350 to 400+ will be Low 7-C (Small Town level). For a detailed showing of the values just open the linked blog.
Lifting Strength
Currently is Class 25 for holding a dungeon floor but neither the length, width or other details that may help to get a rating exist within the novel, so I propose to be changed to "Unknown (Artpe can hold a Dungeon ceiling that was falling with Five Mana Threads which had multiple floors)" - then for the rest continue with their scaling from him)
- Basically, Unknown for the entire verse