Devilance The Pursuer

[KirbyFan03]

Hello all! I am relatively new here but I have done two works relating to DCs New Gods (New God Physiology and additional 1-A arguments for the Godsphere). The amount of New Gods on our page compared to the vast amount out there have very vs applicable information is low... but I'm The New Gods guy!

If you could spare the time (and patience) this is my very first attempt at making a character profile for Devilance The Pursuer

Mod Agree: @Elizio33, @Antvasima (grammar and sentence structure needs improving), @Elizhaa (Outer range to be added)

Agree:

Disagree:

Mod Disagree:

 

[KirbyFan03]

On hold for a bit lemme replace the imgur scans

 

[KirbyFan03]

Aaand done!

 

[Elizio33]

Hello all! I am relatively new here but I have done two works relating to DCs New Gods (New God Physiology and additional 1-A arguments for the Godsphere). The amount of New Gods on our page compared to the vast amount out there have very vs applicable information is low... but I'm The New Gods guy!

If you could spare the time (and patience) this is my very first attempt at making a character profile for Devilance The Pursuer

The profile seems alright, good job, but the scan about teleportation does not seem to suggest this. The rest is fine.

 

[KirbyFan03]

The profile seems alright, good job, but the scan about teleportation does not seem to suggest this. The rest is fine.

Understandable if it's from the scan alone. In Forever People 11 (1970) the Forever People basically teleported away from Devilance after he was tasked with hunting them. He then appeared in a flash of light on the island implying he also teleported

 

[KirbyFan03]

Bump

 

[KirbyFan03]

Bump

 

[KirbyFan03]

Bump

 

[KirbyFan03]

Bump

 

[Elizio33]

@Antvasima @Elizhaa @Firestorm808 @DarkDragonMedeus @ProfectusInfinity your help would be appreciated.

 

[ProfectusInfinity]

I did minor clean-ups.

Profile seems fine to me.

 

[KirbyFan03]

I did minor clean-ups.

Profile seems fine to me.

Thank you.

 

[Antvasima]

The grammar and sentence structures in the wiki page need to be improved, but except for that this is probably fine.

 

[Elizhaa]

It looks largely okay; it should have Outerversal range for its second key from bring 1-A.

 

[KirbyFan03]

I added the range and changed some of my wordings, is it right now?

 

[Antvasima]

I added the range and changed some of my wordings, is it right now?

I cleaned up the grammar for that page a bit. It seems fine to me now.

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:KirbyFan03/Sandbox2?diff=9434196&oldid=9434110

 

[KirbyFan03]

Thank you ant! I've applied the Outerversal Range part and there's three mod/two admin agrees. Can it be applied?

 

[Antvasima]

I think so, yes.

 

[KirbyFan03]

I think so, yes.

So do you think this thread can be closed?

 

[Antvasima]

I think so, yes. Thank you to everybody who helped out here.