Death's Daughter and the Ebony Blade (Volume 3) Additions and Upgrades

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Hello. So, recently I finished Volume 3 of Death's Daughter and the Ebony Blade. Here are some few abilities, and additions, that I think Olivia needs:

Energy Manipulation and Explosion Manipulation (Created mana balls that explode)

Air Manipulation (Created a rope made out of air[8] that ties down the enemy, and the more they resist, the tighter it becomes. It can even cut through bone)

Analytical Prediction (Stated to be able to predict the trajectory of her opponents attacks)

Here is the sandbox that you can check out for more additions:

StorytellingDemonKing/Olivia Valedstorm

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To simply sum up, these are the changes:

• Changed quotes
• Expanded some explanations and improved grammar
• Added more information regarding her age
• Expanded her name section and classification
• Added more information/scans and references regarding LS
• Increased her stamina to Superhuman
• Changed her General Intelligence to Gifted, and Genius in Combat
• Expanded upon Standard Tactics

Here is her current profile for comparison to my sandbox:

Olivia Valedstorm

That's why I use every bit of knowledge I have. That's why I wield my sword. Not for the kingdom, but so that you'll all keep smiling... That's why I'm fighting now.Olivia to her friends Olivia Valedstorm is the main protagonist of Death's Daughter and the Ebony Blade. She was left at a temple...

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Also, in Volume 3 she is stated to be faster than Lightning, so her speed should be upgraded to Massively Hypersonic+


Lastly, while I could make more profiles for new characters, I only really felt like adding one more character to the verse, that being Amelia. Here is her sandbox:

StorytellingDemonKing/Amelia

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Opinions and input from others would be greatly appreciated.

 

[Dereck03]

This changes seems pretty straightforward.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

This changes seems pretty straightforward.

Thank you for the evaluation!

 

[Celestial_Pegasus]

Read a couple volumes of this year's ago.

Additions look ok.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Read a couple volumes of this year's ago.

Additions look ok.

Thank you for the evaluation!

Good to know someone else has read this series here.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

So, are 2 staff agreements enough to apply the changes?

 

[Dereck03]

So, are 2 staff agreements enough to apply the changes?

For such changes yes, but you have to wait 48 first to apply this CRT. That's a new rule and is annoying.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

For such changes yes, but you have to wait 48 first to apply this CRT. That's a new rule and is annoying.

Ah, I see. Thanks for the info.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Since 48h have passed since the threads creation, and 2 staff members have agreed to the changes, I will start applying them.

 

[Dereck03]

Since 48h have passed since the threads creation, and 2 staff members have agreed to the changes, I will start applying them.

Sure.

 

[KobsterHope07]

This looks good, but for Amelia‘s sandbox, do you mean Street level instead of Peak Human for the AP, SS and Durability?

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

This looks good, but for Amelia‘s sandbox, do you mean Street level instead of Peak Human for the AP, SS and Durability?

Oh, my bad. Thank you for noticing that. Will change it before publishing it.

 

[KobsterHope07]

And since I haven’t notice it in Olivia’s sandbox, the MHS+ speed upgrade in the OP is not going through

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

And since I haven’t notice it in Olivia’s sandbox, the MHS+ speed upgrade in the OP is not going through

What do you mean by that?

 

[KobsterHope07]

What do you mean by that?

In the Olivia’s sandbox, the speed wasn’t MHS+ but Supersonic so I thought the MHS+ upgrade wasn’t going through but I check again and it seems to be there now so nevermind

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

In the Olivia’s sandbox, the speed wasn’t MHS+ but Supersonic so I thought the MHS+ upgrade wasn’t going through but I check again and it seems to be there now so nevermind

Oh, I changed it just now since I forgot to change it before even making this CRT. The MHS+ rating is now in the sandbox. But yeah, it wasn't rejected.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

I have applied the changes. This CRT can be closed.