Choujin X | Profile Updates and Power & Abilities Page for Choujins

[Pedonar]

Created a page dedicated to Choujins, detailing their power and abilities.

made minor adjustments to the profiles of Tokio, Chandra Hume, Batista Hoshi, Ely Otta, and Nari Tsumuji

Added: Notable Attacks and Techniques, along with fixes to some stats and the replacement of certain abilities with Choujin types

Tokio;
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Chandra Hume;

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Batista Hoshi;

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Ely Otta;

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Nari Tsumuji:

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[Arkenis]

I don't read the series but the choujiin page looks fine

 

[Excellence616]

Nice work. I agree

 

[Arkenis]

Should probably content a mod for this.

 

[Pedonar]

Bump

 

[RoroDelGato]

Good work ! I agree

 

[Eseseso]

Looks creepy fine.

 

[Planck69]

The new power blog looks good.

 

[CloverDragon03]

Looks good to me

 

[Catzlaflame]

very very minor concerns:

Reactive Power Level (accelerated development) …….of Chaos and the loss of self, a Choujin gains a powerful ability)

In this part, you say, that the character’s boost manifests most often as “gaining a powerful ability” and the scan mentions something about “Sel-Detonating” cards (which may be an ability?).

If the boost they gain is a new hax ability, this is Reactive evolution, not accelerated development. See below:

It is important to avoid confusing [Accelerated Development] with Reactive Evolution, which allows one to develop new powers and resistances in response -Accerated development page

Basically, either remove the part about “gaining an ability” or change it to reactive evolution. Can’t really tell which fits since idk the verse, so I’ll leave that to you. If both fit, may wanna add reactive evo.

Page three, the choujin should be listed as Power Absorption, not absorption and nullification separately:

Power Absorption is a combination of Power Mimicry and Nullification

As for the power mimicry, I don’t see it based on the scan and your added comments. Even when she is “partially stealing,” she is still stealing… so that’s still distinguished from copying.

Also, please put references inside the parentheses.

Again, just super minor stuff. Overall, I support this.

 

[Pedonar]

very very minor concerns:

In this part, you say, that the character’s boost manifests most often as “gaining a powerful ability” and the scan mentions something about “Sel-Detonating” cards (which may be an ability?).

If the boost they gain is a new hax ability, this is Reactive evolution, not accelerated development. See below:


Basically, either remove the part about “gaining an ability” or change it to reactive evolution. Can’t really tell which fits since idk the verse, so I’ll leave that to you. If both fit, may wanna add reactive evo.

Not sure because we have never seen anyone gaining new abilities except for the main character. In his chaos form, he gets three swords that fully counter Choujins (they can nullify rise/immortality and regeneration). And for the card guy, the greater the risk, the more powerful the card he will receive. For example, if the risk was high enough, he could summon lightning to strike someone

Page three, the choujin should be listed as Power Absorption, not absorption and nullification separately:


As for the power mimicry, I don’t see it based on the scan and your added comments. Even when she is “partially stealing,” she is still stealing… so that’s still distinguished from copying.

The difference is partially stealing will just copy the power and it will be weaker than the original user’s. While fully stealing she fully absorbs the power, which she gains its full potential, and the original loses all of their power

And she can return i if she chooses

Also, please put references inside the parentheses.

Ok

Again, just super minor stuff. Overall, I support this.

Thanks

 

[Pedonar]

Not sure because we have never seen anyone gaining new abilities except for the main character. In his chaos form, he gets three swords that fully counter Choujins (they can nullify rise/immortality and regeneration). And for the card guy, the greater the risk, the more powerful the card he will receive. For example, if the risk was high enough, he could summon lightning to strike someone

The difference is partially stealing will just copy the power and it will be weaker than the original user’s. While fully stealing she fully absorbs the power, which she gains its full potential, and the original loses all of their power

And she can return i if she chooses



Ok

Thanks

Changed it to this:
Reactive Evolution (Choujin abilities become more powerful the greater the “risk” (リスク risuku) involved in their usage. Generally, in exchange for the risk of Chaos and the loss of self, a Choujin either gains a power boost or, in some cases, gains powerful abilities)

 

[Pedonar]

And this for ely ;

• Power Mimicry (With Partial Harvesting:, Her choujin power grants her the ability to copy the opponent’s ability)
• Power Absorption, Biological Manipulation and Power Bestowal (With Full Harvesting:, she can completely steal the powers of her opponents. When fully stealing, she absorbs both the powers and the body, rendering the opponent powerless even if they manage to free themselves)