Champion of The Universe CRT

[Tllmbrg]

Tllmbrg/SandboxThe Champion of the Universe

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Clean-up and some power addition
Removed martial arts and regen since neither have been stated as far as I can tell in comics
Range is changed because no planetary feats
LS changed because the previous feat is just energy projection, and in general Champion has more instances of being on par with Surfer then fully superior to him in base

 

[Tllmbrg]

@Antvasima

 

[Shmooply]

Why does he have Type 8 Immortality? Besides that, everything else in the sandbox looks good.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Why does he have Type 8 Immortality? Besides that, everything else in the sandbox looks good.

That's the closest thing I can think of that fits being banned from death since well Death would be enforcing that

 

[Shmooply]

That's the closest thing I can think of that fits being banned from death since well Death would be enforcing that

I can kinda see your point, still neutral about it though.

 

[LordTracer]

A few issues.

The References section goes below the Others section, not above it.

His second key’s lifting strength justification should explain why he should be stronger than Thanos.

His range should be listed as “Standard Melee Range”, not just “Melee range”.

 

[Antvasima]

I mostly do not mind this revision, if it is modified according to Tracer's suggestions, but The Champion's entire concept is that he has spent billions of years learning to fight in different ways, so he should definitely have martial arts as an ability, even though most writers do not play up this aspect of his narrative point/conceptualisation.

 

[SamanPatou]

You removed Martial Arts but his intelligence section still mentions that he's mastery over countless gighting style.

Also, the scans provided for Energy Project don't qualify for tens of meters, just several.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Did all the changes people mentioned
As for martial arts, they never even in his original appearance stated he's a master martial artist, he legit just overpowers people or gets stomped if they're stronger so

 

[Antvasima]

Well, he was a skilled boxer at least. Basically, he is conceptually supposed to be a highly skilled martial artist, but is seldom portrayed that way since somebody who is as powerful as the Hulk and as skilled as Shang-Chi would be too hard to overcome as a threat.

 

[LordTracer]

You could just do [[Martial Arts|Skilled Hand-to-Hand Combatant]] or something along those lines.

 

[Tllmbrg]

I added that
Is the draft fine to apply?

 

[Antvasima]

Probably, yes, but it depends on what the others here say.

What are the differences between your draft and our current page?

 

[LordTracer]

References go above Discussions btw

 

[Antvasima]

Yes. Thank you for helping out.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Applied, good to go now right?

 

[LordTracer]

Applied, good to go now right?

Yeah, looks good to me.

 

[Antvasima]

Then it is probably fine, as long as the page formatting is using our standard formatting.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Done, CRT can be closed

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. Thank you to everybody who helped out here.